This is good, yeah Ember can be heavy handed, but it's clear that despite that she does genuinely like spike, that goes a long way in a relationship.
Also even if she got pregnant I don't see this ember being too worried. She knows spike will stick with her no matter what and spike does like ember, he's just has to be more assertive
I employed the story so far but everything seemed really quote fused the past couple chapters, from the weed smoking to her backstory to the sex. It makes sense but it feels just anticlimactic when written so short and offhandedly.
"Look. I understand that I can be controlling and a little too freaky when it comes to being abusive, but I've been wrestling for years that I never really remembered what it meant to be a normal girl. But spending time with you just made me realize how it felt to just be normal, you know?"
And I hate to say it but this entire paragraph just looks like you saw what people were saying about EMBER seeming abusive last chapter and tried to write in something going against it.sorrt if that's not what it was meant to be but that's how it reads for me.
I wanted to say good sir that I do fancy this and must urge you to continue it for as long as you possibly can. eh I’m at work in a pissy mood and have a rager of a headache and was really excited I saw a new chapter.
Got around to it. I like the concept a lot, but I got to agree with some of the comments here about how Ember is being borderline abusive towards Spike. She's seemingly using him to some degree and takes some of her frustrations out on him. I'm sure she does love him dearly, but I'm kind of not liking how she seems so pushy on Spike. I'm interested to see where this is going, and if Ember and Spike are going to find different places to fuck, or if Ember gets pregnant.
"Do you remember the werewolf movies when they howl at the moon?" Spike asked.
"Like the back of my hand~." Ember said.
Spike put his penis back inside Ember and they proceeded to make love some more. Spike and Ember playfully howled at the sky as they continued to fuck each other further into the night.
The wait was worth it!
And she just got pregnant, calling it now
Of course, absolutely nothing whatsoever can go wrong after this!
Nice.
Kind of short, but still good.
This is good, yeah Ember can be heavy handed, but it's clear that despite that she does genuinely like spike, that goes a long way in a relationship.
Also even if she got pregnant I don't see this ember being too worried. She knows spike will stick with her no matter what and spike does like ember, he's just has to be more assertive
I kek
Welcome to the world of Manhood, Spike! You lucky s.o.b.!
Excellent
fantastic
fantastic
I employed the story so far but everything seemed really quote fused the past couple chapters, from the weed smoking to her backstory to the sex. It makes sense but it feels just anticlimactic when written so short and offhandedly.
And I hate to say it but this entire paragraph just looks like you saw what people were saying about EMBER seeming abusive last chapter and tried to write in something going against it.sorrt if that's not what it was meant to be but that's how it reads for me.
They are going to find places to have sex on a daily basis are they?
I wanted to say good sir that I do fancy this and must urge you to continue it for as long as you possibly can. eh I’m at work in a pissy mood and have a rager of a headache and was really excited I saw a new chapter.
Got around to it. I like the concept a lot, but I got to agree with some of the comments here about how Ember is being borderline abusive towards Spike. She's seemingly using him to some degree and takes some of her frustrations out on him. I'm sure she does love him dearly, but I'm kind of not liking how she seems so pushy on Spike. I'm interested to see where this is going, and if Ember and Spike are going to find different places to fuck, or if Ember gets pregnant.
Should've used a condom...