I see. Everyone who feels guilty bcoz of Anon-A-Miss will see Sunset as a demon. It's like a visual and physical representation of theit guilt and fear.
8924121 Yep and as you read, Rarity’s changed to Nightmare Rarity as she now realizes that she herself is the monster that took pleasure in hurting Sunset and it represents her resentment towards Sunset. You probably already guessed who Scootaloo’s parents are and they’ll show up in the next chapter, can you guess who Sunset and Lighting Dust will meet at the mall?
Nice. Also I wonder how long it would take for Sunset demoning up to become old hat and thus vaguely blasé to the school. My guess is a calendar year if she keeps making threats.
Diamond Tiara is still the Crusaders' friend? And both the Apple Family and Rarity's family are being sued, with Rarity herself hoping for a Christmas Miracle?
. . .There is a logical conclusion of how those two points connect, but I also feel that would be getting off easy.
Call me skeptical, i think rarity just saw her dark, evil self for some reason. as in the nightmare rarity version, and same goes to the rest of rainboom i think?.
and for some reason somehow sunset hair has become something that princess celestia has
8925032 Yep, Rarity did see Nightmare Rarity, the rest of the Rainbooms are seeing is either their guilt or fear, for example Applejack’s guilt at stabbing Sunset in the back,
8925106 it's almost like the element has some sort of side effect, or there's something else going on.
for example in idw rarity become nightmare rarity not only by her nightmare, but also by the influence of nightmare creature left over from nightmare moon.
i hope i'm wrong but i fell like that maybe just.....maybe sunset was ''not'' the first to enter the human world. Just take a look the dazzling they already in human world by banishment.
if that's true then how many or what kind of dark creature that already residence in human world waiting for the right moment to find it's victim......
8925116 What Rarity and everyone is seeing is a result of a spell Sunset cast which makes them see her the way they truly see her, which in the students case is a demon. The Rainbooms are no longer connected to the elements, meaning they do not have magic anymore.
All of these demon Sunset appearances makes me curious of a Devilman crossover, unrelated to anon a miss of course. I'm already tired of people copying eachother on it.
You know, in Dainn's Anon-A-Miss the Sires were featured as well. So, what if the Dazzlings helped. While Demon Sunset is terrorrizing the school, the Dazzlings show up with their "powers back". They even mock and taunt the Rainbooms, saying the latter only best them with Sunset's help but now Sunset is on their side becausr the Rainbooms betrayed her.
Maud: Pinkie, what's wrong? Shouldn't you be getting a party ready with your friends?
Pinkie: I messed up, Maud. I messed up big time.
Limestone: What's wrong with sis?
Maud: She's upset.
Limestone: Alright, spill.
Some spilling later...
Maud: Pinkie, I don't know what to say.
Limestone: I do. You fucked up, sis.
Maud: That's a bit crass.
Limestone: Hey, I ain't gonna sugarcoat it. She fucked up. Even worse, she's not doing anything to fix it.
Pinkie: But what can I do? Sunset hates us! I made her cry too!
Limestone: Well, if she doesn't want to be your friend, just respect her choice and move on.
Pinkie: Just like that? Just forget what happened and move on?
Limestone: Never forget, but you should respect Sunset's decision and let her go. It's sometimes for the best. You gotta cut off a friendship if it's not working anymore.
Pinkie: B-b-but I just want to fix things!
Limestone: Sometimes, some things that are broken you just can't fix, sis.
8952583 great idea, I actually had that in mind for him when he talks to Fluttershy, he may be a showoff in front of her friends, (especially Rainbow.) but he still cares about his big sister and doesn't want to see her looking so miserable.
Idea, due to how she feels, Rarity's own fashion designs that she come up with to take her mind off what happened, I feel they would be dark and gothic to match her mood.
8953589 That is a good idea and speaking of fashion, Rarity will receive a special gift from Sunset on Christmas Eve during the Apple family Christmas party that will leave her in tears.
I fear two things:
1. Sunset never forgiving them and the Rainbooms lose everything.
2. One of the Rainbooms trying out suicide. Cause I bet that happens and Sunset still wouldn't care.
Good lord just imagining the Apple clan homeless is depressing for me.
Great chapter.
Although, I'm intrigued to see what happens with Sunset and the Rainbooms even though I have a perfectly good idea.
And it's great to see Sunset's situation has improved over time.
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Yeah, the Apple clan being on the streets after loosing everything is very depressing. It’ll take a miracle to save them.
I see. Everyone who feels guilty bcoz of Anon-A-Miss will see Sunset as a demon. It's like a visual and physical representation of theit guilt and fear.
8924117
Then you’ll be happy to know that it’ll continue to improve.
8924129
Thank Celestia.
8924121
Yep and as you read, Rarity’s changed to Nightmare Rarity as she now realizes that she herself is the monster that took pleasure in hurting Sunset and it represents her resentment towards Sunset. You probably already guessed who Scootaloo’s parents are and they’ll show up in the next chapter, can you guess who Sunset and Lighting Dust will meet at the mall?
8924132
You’ll be thanking her again when Christmas comes around.
8924143
Is it what I think it is?
8924135
I will wait for Part 2. I am terrible at guessing.
8924145
Maybe
8924154
Principal Celestia is going to adopt Sunset?!
8924180
Hit the nail on the head
8924135
Well, you know someone will go 2 far.
8924190
YES!
8924191
8924150
What did you think of Applebloom and Sweetie Belle’s talks with their family?
8924208
They realize the consequences of their actions. They realize how they are the villains now.
Love this chapter!
8924217
And despite what they did, their sisters still love them.
8924224
Thank you!
8924232
But still a tense situation. Maybe Fluttershy starts punishing herself to absolve her of her sins.
8924236
I almost forgot to ask, what did you think of Diamond Tiara being their friend instead of their bully?
8924344
A surprise.
Anyway, the Rainbooms see the students who befriend Sunset treat her better. It would be hurtful.
Nice. Also I wonder how long it would take for Sunset demoning up to become old hat and thus vaguely blasé to the school. My guess is a calendar year if she keeps making threats.
8924190
so does this mean that Princess Celestia is Sunsets biological mom which is the case in many of these stories
Diamond Tiara is still the Crusaders' friend? And both the Apple Family and Rarity's family are being sued, with Rarity herself hoping for a Christmas Miracle?
. . .There is a logical conclusion of how those two points connect, but I also feel that would be getting off easy.
8924344
Do you think you should show scenes of SUNSET being friendly with THE DAZZLINGS?
8924652
As much as I would like that, it won’t be the case for this story. But she will still be that in name if not blood
Call me skeptical, i think rarity just saw her dark, evil self for some reason. as in the nightmare rarity version, and same goes to the rest of rainboom i think?.
and for some reason somehow sunset hair has become something that princess celestia has
8925032
Yep, Rarity did see Nightmare Rarity, the rest of the Rainbooms are seeing is either their guilt or fear, for example Applejack’s guilt at stabbing Sunset in the back,
8925106
it's almost like the element has some sort of side effect, or there's something else going on.
for example in idw rarity become nightmare rarity not only by her nightmare, but also by the influence of nightmare creature left over from nightmare moon.
i hope i'm wrong but i fell like that maybe just.....maybe sunset was ''not'' the first to enter the human world. Just take a look the dazzling they already in human world by banishment.
if that's true then how many or what kind of dark creature that already residence in human world waiting for the right moment to find it's victim......
8925116
What Rarity and everyone is seeing is a result of a spell Sunset cast which makes them see her the way they truly see her, which in the students case is a demon. The Rainbooms are no longer connected to the elements, meaning they do not have magic anymore.
All of these demon Sunset appearances makes me curious of a Devilman crossover, unrelated to anon a miss of course. I'm already tired of people copying eachother on it.
Lightning Dust: Dash, you used to call me rash, reckless and caring only about myself.
I think Lightning can draw parallels here.
8925149
You know, in Dainn's Anon-A-Miss the Sires were featured as well. So, what if the Dazzlings helped. While Demon Sunset is terrorrizing the school, the Dazzlings show up with their "powers back". They even mock and taunt the Rainbooms, saying the latter only best them with Sunset's help but now Sunset is on their side becausr the Rainbooms betrayed her.
8932114
That’s a good line, do you mind if I use it?
8932357
Sure, go ahead. It's why I supplied it. Hey, you need help or are you more of a solo act?
8932363 I'm more of the solo act, but thank you for offering.
8925106
And now that just reminds me of this part from "Stand Up" by Pennywise.
Maud: Pinkie, what's wrong? Shouldn't you be getting a party ready with your friends?
Pinkie: I messed up, Maud. I messed up big time.
Limestone: What's wrong with sis?
Maud: She's upset.
Limestone: Alright, spill.
Some spilling later...
Maud: Pinkie, I don't know what to say.
Limestone: I do. You fucked up, sis.
Maud: That's a bit crass.
Limestone: Hey, I ain't gonna sugarcoat it. She fucked up. Even worse, she's not doing anything to fix it.
Pinkie: But what can I do? Sunset hates us! I made her cry too!
Limestone: Well, if she doesn't want to be your friend, just respect her choice and move on.
Pinkie: Just like that? Just forget what happened and move on?
Limestone: Never forget, but you should respect Sunset's decision and let her go. It's sometimes for the best. You gotta cut off a friendship if it's not working anymore.
Pinkie: B-b-but I just want to fix things!
Limestone: Sometimes, some things that are broken you just can't fix, sis.
8951226
ooooh interesting dialogue, I might just use some of it if it's alright with you?
8952229
Well I know ur a solo act, but I just wanted to point out stuff.
Maybe a scene where Zephyr Breeze is a voice of reason. Like Zen.
8952229
8952229
Zephyr Breeze was meditating in the middle of his Zen Rock Garden when Fluttershy entered.
Zephyr Breeze: Hey, Flutter Butter. Why so glum?
Fluttershy: I just need someone to talk to.
Zephyr Breeze: And you need my words of wisdom? Come, sit.
Fluttershy sits down beside her little brother.
Zephyr Breeze: So, sis, what's on your mind?
He was absent because he was taking a 'Mental Health Day' from all the negativity because of Anon-A-Miss.
Zephyr Breeze: So, your hot friend Sunset is mad at you and now you don't know what to do.
Fluttershy: Yes.
Zephyr Breeze: Well, when something negative happens to me, I always just let it go.
Fluttershy: You mean give up?
Zephyr Breeze: If the grief ain't worth it, then it's for the best.
Fluttershy: But she's my friend!
Zephyr Breeze: Was she? I mean, you said it yourself, you believed the worst in her. You didn't trust her. There's no friendship with no trust.
Fluttershy: I know. I know. But I want to make things right but I don't know what to do!
Zephyr Breeze: Then just chill, relax, and clear your mind. It will come to you.
8952583
great idea, I actually had that in mind for him when he talks to Fluttershy, he may be a showoff in front of her friends, (especially Rainbow.) but he still cares about his big sister and doesn't want to see her looking so miserable.
8952608
This is awesome, thanks for writing this and thank you for letting me use it too with a bit of alterations added.
8952902
Big Mac: "Words are not gonna fix this, Applejack. You can say you're sorry a million times and it still won't mean nothing."
Applejack: "So what can we do?"
Big Mac: "Actions speak louder than words. You're smart. You'll figure something out."
Applejack: "Kinda wish Ma and Pa were here. Together with Granny, maybe I'll know what to do next."
8952902
Idea, due to how she feels, Rarity's own fashion designs that she come up with to take her mind off what happened, I feel they would be dark and gothic to match her mood.
8952902
Don't be shy about sharing what you have if you wish.
8953589
That is a good idea and speaking of fashion, Rarity will receive a special gift from Sunset on Christmas Eve during the Apple family Christmas party that will leave her in tears.