Man that was awesome, a little conflict to mix up the confusion, well done. Then there's the understanding between Rainbow's, I loved it. I wouldn't mind a little insight on the planning of the attack though, it seems a little 'lose lose' in hindsight so I'm curious to know if the reasoning behind it was purely revenge.
Suddenly they were both suddenly thrown off of Dumbbell and into the air before landing harshly on the ground, Dumbbell looked to see that it was Pinkie Pie who had thrown them, but something seemed off. She had a blanc expression but he could sense something very dangerous about her, her flat hair and dimmer skin tone added to her lethality.
"Are you okay?" Pinkie Pie asks in a monotone voice.
"Y-yeah." Dumbbell answers nervously, something is definitely not right with Pinkie.
Pinkie Pie then turns her attention to the rest of the attackers and as Dumbbell blinked, Pinkie was already behind the ones holding down Fluttershy. She grabs one of their shoulders as an audible crack can be heard as the boy screamed before being flung away from Fluttersy. Pinkie then grabs the other boys leg and instantly breaks his ankle, the boy screams in agony before being ripped away from Fluttershy. Fluttershy looks up at Pinkie Pie as she holds out her hand to her, she takes the offered hand as Pinkie then goes Rarity. She grabs the boy by his head, making him scream as he feels his head being crushed. She then throws him towards the boys that Lightning and Gilda are fighting and knocks them back a fair distance. She them makes her way towards Rainbow and Applejacks fight, with surprising speed she goes around the boys and shoves them forward, causing them to be sent flying and colliding with the school wall. knocking them out.
Everyone watched in stunned amazement as Pinkie Pie effortlessly tossed around the attackers, all while still wearing that blanc expression. Rainbow Dash managed to snap out of her daze and runs towards Sunset just as Spitfire and Soarin finished restraining the remaining attackers.
"Well, they were hurting my friends and wasn't going to let that happen." Pinkie stated as she gave off a small smile, her completion is still dull and her hair flat. "Most of my family is very strong like my big sister Maud.
*in fake Russian accent* The Pie family is stronkest family in the world!
"I wanted to ask you....what made you believe Sunset wasn't Anon-A-Miss?" Rainbow Dash asks, her bangs obscuring her vision.
"Easy, this aint the old Sunset's style." Gilda responded easily. The old Sunset would've personally came to you and tell you she knows your secret, essentially blackmailing you."
I guess this makes sense why the crusaders chose that color scheme then?
Well I guess it's a good thing that Twilight came behind Celestia because I had a feeling if she didn't they would see exactly what the unbridled fury and the unchained wrath of the sun would look like
Man that was awesome, a little conflict to mix up the confusion, well done. Then there's the understanding between Rainbow's, I loved it. I wouldn't mind a little insight on the planning of the attack though, it seems a little 'lose lose' in hindsight so I'm curious to know if the reasoning behind it was purely revenge.
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That's my sister. Taught her everything she knows.
Great job here.
Seems like the only things left to wrap up are the court hearings, the Christmas party and the sirens.
Unless of course there's another unexpected development in the works
So how many chapters are left?
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one more.
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Can we expect a bittersweet ending or a downer ending? Also is it likely that Sunset will cut ties with the Rainbooms?
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You’ll just have to wait to find out.
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You know i was kind of hoping that Sunset would blow up at Celestia for doing what she did to Rd(EG), guess I'll have to wait for that.
*in fake Russian accent* The Pie family is stronkest family in the world!
I guess this makes sense why the crusaders chose that color scheme then?
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They just figured nobody would look past the screen to see that it was too easy. They were mostly right .
Well I guess it's a good thing that Twilight came behind Celestia because I had a feeling if she didn't they would see exactly what the unbridled fury and the unchained wrath of the sun would look like