So Sunset admitted she's indifferent to the Rainbooms, the Rainbooms are broken, Sunset's new friends have become better people, and Princess Celestia has approached her.
after several year of self guilt and regret....the big mama finally come to sunset shimmer.....
on other news i guess everybody had to deal with their own demon....you know what they say ''Face your demon'', it's not easy but then again nothing ever is.
8958810 Think the Apples was mentioned last chapter.
I love the story as well, love how it's going. I really hope Pinkie can become Sunset's friend she honestly admitted she would given Sunset a second chance even if Twilight hadn't asked.
i prefer her to gain a chance the others not so much.
And a new suggestion...Rainbow Dash, with Lightning Dust and Gilda.
RD meets up with Gilda at her scones cart.
RD: Hey, Gilda.
G: Dash, what's up? Here for a scone?
RD: OK, and can we talk?
G: Sure.
RD: Gilda, when I gave you my phone, I thought you wanted to beat Sunset up.
Gilda: Yeah, because of my reputation. You'd think I'd be angry about that photo.
RD: Yeah, because it shows that you and I...
Gilda: Even if we were, what's wrong with that?
RD: So, what made you believe it wasn't Sunset?
Gilda: Well, that's easy. Sunset's my friend.
RD: Your friend?
Gilda: Yeah, she is, and friends are supposed to trust each other. Also, the whole thing with Anon-A-Miss, it was not her style.
RD: But she used to do stuff like that!
Gilda: Yeah, she broke friendships, but she never used embarassing secrets against people. She might use it as blackmail to keep people in line or use it to get people out of the way. She never did anything for a laugh. All she cared about was power.
RD: Oh...
Gilda: And she was the one who helped you beat those Sirens. If it weren't for her, me and my gang would still be arguing during that Battle of the Bands crap.
Wow, Princess Celestia in the human world this time instead of Twilight, Time to wait to see what happens next
Wait.......What about the Apples? They weren't mentioned in this chapter. Or do you something special planned for them?
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I have a scenario planned for Applejack.
So Sunset admitted she's indifferent to the Rainbooms, the Rainbooms are broken, Sunset's new friends have become better people, and Princess Celestia has approached her.
This is a great turn to the story! Keep going!
Hell of a curveball.
after several year of self guilt and regret....the big mama finally come to sunset shimmer.....
on other news i guess everybody had to deal with their own demon....you know what they say ''Face your demon'', it's not easy but then again nothing ever is.
Uh Oh Big Mama is here!!! Everybody grab your XXXL sun lotion!!! BECAUSE WE’RE GONNA BE SCORCHED!!!!!!!!!
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Think the Apples was mentioned last chapter.
I love the story as well, love how it's going. I really hope Pinkie can become Sunset's friend she honestly admitted she would given Sunset a second chance even if Twilight hadn't asked.
i prefer her to gain a chance the others not so much.
I don't think you really need an M rating if it's only slight gore.
And a new suggestion...Rainbow Dash, with Lightning Dust and Gilda.
RD meets up with Gilda at her scones cart.
RD: Hey, Gilda.
G: Dash, what's up? Here for a scone?
RD: OK, and can we talk?
G: Sure.
RD: Gilda, when I gave you my phone, I thought you wanted to beat Sunset up.
Gilda: Yeah, because of my reputation. You'd think I'd be angry about that photo.
RD: Yeah, because it shows that you and I...
Gilda: Even if we were, what's wrong with that?
RD: So, what made you believe it wasn't Sunset?
Gilda: Well, that's easy. Sunset's my friend.
RD: Your friend?
Gilda: Yeah, she is, and friends are supposed to trust each other. Also, the whole thing with Anon-A-Miss, it was not her style.
RD: But she used to do stuff like that!
Gilda: Yeah, she broke friendships, but she never used embarassing secrets against people. She might use it as blackmail to keep people in line or use it to get people out of the way. She never did anything for a laugh. All she cared about was power.
RD: Oh...
Gilda: And she was the one who helped you beat those Sirens. If it weren't for her, me and my gang would still be arguing during that Battle of the Bands crap.
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Technically Gilda and Sunset weren’t friends yet so that line won’t work, other than that I like the dialogue. Definitely will be using it.
"KAER J'DOR'KA GAL'GA CAL!"
Flails shotgun around in the air as i fall on my face running up the stairs
Nergl:"It means 'God entity Threat Kill it now!'
Oh s*** I did not see that coming