8638415
thank you so much for the feedback. It always helps with getting better at writing. I tried to do a little better with narrative and description in the second chapter, though I still feel it needs work.

8638457
At least your willing to take constructive criticism at all. Some people don't. I can't really offer much other than pointing out spelling errors myself. Like "perceptive," which you spelled "perseptive."

8638664
thx :) criticism is always welcome :)

8638664
any chance u could help me find it lol. I forgot where i used perspective

This looks like a fun story to read, can't wait to see what will happen next.

I love the way you put the story together.

8638748
Yeah. Celestia compliments Aero on being very perceptive. I couldn't tell you exactly where, but that's how it's used.

8639474
awesome ty

I still really like it. Keep going.

From the pic on the front, I thought this was gonna be a Pegasus Oc x Celestia fic. Might wanna change that. Or is this gonna be a harem type of story? Other then that this story is awesome and has great potential.

8642146
it is harem style and involves more than the normal amount of characters

8642432
Okay.

Just the right amount of detail to set the scene without going overboard. The set up is a little different from what I expected, almost refreshing, even. Not to mention it'll be different for the focus to be on the culture shock princess. I'm especially curious how everyone else will respond, including Aero's mom.

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the site wont let me put all the characters in the story. So i only did 3. the rest r a surprise though ;)

That was adorable actually!

' If you spend your life on what if's, you will never get to what is. '

If you also spend your life on "else if's", you will never get to what is.

Corny