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Hmm.
Let's see where this goes.
Oh, this gonna be something. In a good way.
Usually these sorts of plain, everyday wake-up openings tend to bore me, but somehow this one manages to stay interesting; probably because there are already hints of what is to come.
I'd love to see where this goes.
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The next ch will be done by tomorrow morning. For any of u who r interested. :)
Not a bad start, but you need to work on your narration skills a little bit.
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i appreciate the feedback :) anything specific in narration? or just narration in general. All help is welcome, After all how is a writer to improve without criticism.
Huh. So Nightmare Moon and Daybreaker are separate entities and allies in this world?
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yes :)
Already at a good start. I like how heartwarming Celestia feels here, I can almost hear her voice as she speaks.
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Good, lol. I wanted her to give off a motherly vibe at that moment
I love how it just has a masturbation session in the middle of his morning routine and it's like it's part of it
"I do. I have my tea time a little while after breakfas." she replied, her smile widening a bit when he called her by name. "Would you like to join me?"
Breakfast is missing a T at the end
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Great story
Warning: children left unattended will be adopted and given the talk.
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