I never knew seaponies were real until I crashed near Mount Aris, home to the once called Hippogriffs. I was greeted by Skystar, my first ally and friend. Time goes on and the two of us were inseparable.
8677207 Not a bad story. Would have liked to have seen him get some action with Novo. But, maybe you can make another story with her. As well as redeeming Queen Chrysalis in another story, and she falls in love.
This was an interesting chapter. Was curious as to why you made him go all Thirteenth Year and made him a merman. Wondering in the future he would get his legs back if he ever decided to go on land again.
Anyway I enjoy this story so I look forward to the next chapter.
You're movin' too fast, mate. Step off the gas a little. Met on the first day and on the same day Novo is thinking Travis is trying to get in Skystar's pants...scales...tail?
Whatever, just dial it down, man. It's like you're trying to bake a pie, but you set the stove on 2000 degress. Other than that, so far so good.
8679890 I gotcha, but I like it the way it is. Sorry if it’s not a good picture, but I didn’t want it to be a colorful color, like green for example. It’s been done before, but never have I heard of a fishtail of a mermaid that matches his skin tone, so I went with that.
I like this story. Travis and Skystar nice couple. btw. I have the impression that something that Travis has lost could come back out and I think the sea mares could hypothetically center. obviously Travis will have to settle and it will not be easy being a stranger. we will have to see how it will take history in the future. keep it up.
i really like this fic, but everything just so happens to be conveniently easy. and watch out for conflicting messages. ive seen a handful. but still a good read
Two questions since I was actually looking for a queen novo or human turned queen novo story.
Is this a regular or a clopstory? I found this story trough google, so I'm not exactly sure. If it is not a clopstory I want to know if it's focus is more on the story and the sex tag is more something like a side dish.
What I mean is, this story is interessting to me to, but I'm not looking for something that maybe forgets the story progression in order to include as much sex as possible, had that once with Trixie and Rainbow three times every chapter. There you really had to search for the story.
8765426 That's okay, just wanted to be sure where the main focus is on, on what the story concentrates. I will see if I can start with this storie next.
Well...now I kind of want them to meet the others in a sequel and I hope they are togegther far before the end of the story. I hate it when the story ends foreve and everything I get to see is the simple kiss and nothing of their live together afterwards.
However them meeting the ponies would either be only in their world or the others arrange something if you don't want to turn them back. I like both their forms but prefer the seaponies.
"Okay, Skystar! I'm coming after you!"
yay he is an expert already.
"Humans are the same to. We can live up to our eighties, nineties, possibly hundreds."
NNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Sometimes I wonder why they want to bad to talk about the age in their storie and making the humans and other chars dying so much sooner than their partners, just let magic happen.
I kind of hope he isn't akward in the romance, I probably said that already, I don't remember where I did it already. That one moment felt alright, but I don't want the main char to be unatturally often embrassed again since it's always "only" the main char.
I blush, flailing my arms back and forth. "N-no! She's just a friend! I don't have any romantic feelings for her. She has a nice singing voice is all."
Now...I get the feeling he will blush everytime when someone is mentioning that he possibly loves someone.
"I don't know why, but I have a feeling you two are gonna be more than friends in the future."
Before now it looks like she was just teasing, now it looks a bit chliche that she can already see that they are the perfect match for each other and I honestly don't like it so much.
Only two things so far that I'm not fond of, the blushing which is maybe overdone and everyone (queen novo so far) "already" knowing or thinking of them as the perfect couple.
Everything else looks nice and are those clams like pets or like Mauds petrock in your story?, because it'S kind of sad if you think that she maybe made herself friends because she didn't have many.
Dude, you haven't posted a chapter for 3 months! You have 127 likes on this story and all of us want another chapter. I'm not trying to be an ass or anything, but please, post the next freaking chapter!
8847545 I can only agree, I would like to see another chapter. I mean I need more good stories that don't just die after the first chapter or half of the story. ------------------------------------------------------------- Hhhmm I need more romance stories at the moment, the one I loved pretty much will change their main chars in the sequel which I'm a bit dissapointed to hear, so I would like to get another chapter here.
I probably complained here or there, but that just means I care.
"I'm not used to having a fishtail. I've had legs most of my life, but now they're gone."
It's just like swimming with the legs together. It is different from the alternating kicks most people are used to and might take some getting used to, but it is likely a quick adjustment for most people.
8677207
Not a bad story. Would have liked to have seen him get some action with Novo. But, maybe you can make another story with her. As well as redeeming Queen Chrysalis in another story, and she falls in love.
Huh, you didn’t just turn Travis into a seapony?
8678225
Merman, actually
8678316
I was more wondering why you didn’t go all the way since there was transformation anyways
Change think to thank
This was an interesting chapter. Was curious as to why you made him go all Thirteenth Year and made him a merman. Wondering in the future he would get his legs back if he ever decided to go on land again.
Anyway I enjoy this story so I look forward to the next chapter.
You're movin' too fast, mate. Step off the gas a little. Met on the first day and on the same day Novo is thinking Travis is trying to get in Skystar's pants...scales...tail?
Whatever, just dial it down, man. It's like you're trying to bake a pie, but you set the stove on 2000 degress.
Other than that, so far so good.
8678462
Thanks for spotting that
So Travis is now a merman with a tan fish tail and a brown flipper? That just looks weird when I imagine it in my mind.
Wouldn't it make more sense for him to have a more colorful tail?
8679766
Like what? Multiple colored scales? Sounds cliche
8679808
I don't mean a rainbow tail. I mean a different color, like red, blue, orange, green or any other color. Not the same color as his skin tone.
8679890
I gotcha, but I like it the way it is. Sorry if it’s not a good picture, but I didn’t want it to be a colorful color, like green for example. It’s been done before, but never have I heard of a fishtail of a mermaid that matches his skin tone, so I went with that.
8679954
Careful with the use of the word mermaid. Don't get it confused with merman.
8680201
Oops! My bad
8680291
In a story like this one, that's the last kind of mistake you want to do.
I like this story. Travis and Skystar nice couple. btw. I have the impression that something that Travis has lost could come back out and I think the sea mares could hypothetically center.
obviously Travis will have to settle and it will not be easy being a stranger. we will have to see how it will take history in the future.
keep it up.
8683014
Thank you.
Also, who's krystal? You mean Skystar?
8683224
translate.. error.. pardon >_<
I like the story, but if feel our main character accepted the Queen's offer a little to quickly.
i really like this fic, but everything just so happens to be conveniently easy. and watch out for conflicting messages. ive seen a handful. but still a good read
When’s the next chapter, would love to read more of the story!
8715785
It's coming very very soon. Taking a break on it
8715886
kk
Not bad, so far. The dialogue is a little clunky, though. That's the only thing really holding it back. Still, I'll follow it for now.
8731019
Glad you like it though
It's those very words that come back to bite ya in the ass.
Two questions since I was actually looking for a queen novo or human turned queen novo story.
Is this a regular or a clopstory? I found this story trough google, so I'm not exactly sure.
If it is not a clopstory I want to know if it's focus is more on the story and the sex tag is more something like a side dish.
What I mean is, this story is interessting to me to, but I'm not looking for something that maybe forgets the story progression in order to include as much sex as possible, had that once with Trixie and Rainbow three times every chapter. There you really had to search for the story.
8765071
There will be sex eventually, just not yet.
8765426
That's okay, just wanted to be sure where the main focus is on, on what the story concentrates.
I will see if I can start with this storie next.
8765438
They’re just building up the romance then sex
8765486
yes I have understood it that far and it's better that way.
8765588
It won't be
Well...now I kind of want them to meet the others in a sequel and I hope they are togegther far before the end of the story. I hate it when the story ends foreve and everything I get to see is the simple kiss and nothing of their live together afterwards.
However them meeting the ponies would either be only in their world or the others arrange something if you don't want to turn them back. I like both their forms but prefer the seaponies.
yay he is an expert already.
Hey, it’s been a month since chapter 2 was posted, you gonna post a new one soon?
Dude, you haven't posted a chapter for 3 months! You have 127 likes on this story and all of us want another chapter. I'm not trying to be an ass or anything, but please, post the next freaking chapter!
8847545
I can only agree, I would like to see another chapter.
I mean I need more good stories that don't just die after the first chapter or half of the story.
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Hhhmm I need more romance stories at the moment, the one I loved pretty much will change their main chars in the sequel which I'm a bit dissapointed to hear, so I would like to get another chapter here.
I probably complained here or there, but that just means I care.
Where is the next one?
Hope they make it back on land.
It's just like swimming with the legs together. It is different from the alternating kicks most people are used to and might take some getting used to, but it is likely a quick adjustment for most people.