Chrysalis likes to practice photography now that she has so much free time. Her favorite subjects are four of her pony pets, Princess Twilight, Princess Celestia, Princess Luna, and Princess Cadence. Oh wait. Princess isn't in their names anymore. :)
So how long until Chrysalis is defeated and the ponies retake Equestria, after all Discord, Starlight, Trixie and Thorax should still be free, not to mention Sunset and the Human Mane 7 and the Mane 5 of Equestria are still there, heck a certain Centaur could be released and sent after Chrysalis, lets see her try to defeat HIM after he's drained her of her magic.
8463154 Will Chrysalis ever be stopped? Will Luna regain her divine aura? Will Cadence get that cramp out of her left toe? Will Twilight's tongue eventually go numb? Will Celestia remember where she left her keys? (Answer: They're not where you think!) Find out next time on Chrissy Ball Z!
But seriously. I sent you a PM. Have an upvote for commenting! Although, I wish you'd read the whole chapter before commenting. lol.
She’d put them down viciously, and now their cocoons hung from the roof of her thrown room as a reminder to all other would be rebels.
Should be 'throne'. Nothing else I could see.
Anyway, Chryssie... sometimes you should maybe listen to people with a bit more experience in matters such as black holes. ;) So this rag-tag bunch. I'm guessing Thorax and Discord at least. Did that include Trixie, too? Dang. I'd love to see Chryssie play with her. ;)
Great chapter. I like the bit about photography at the beginning and composition.
8463217 Dunno. I have a different idea, but we'll see how it goes.
8463262 Her current status is unknown. As the story continues, I'll find out more as much as you do! We know she was captured during her rescue attempt, and so far that's it. If her attempt was unsuccessful, she's likely just another pony in Chrysalis's eyes, so once her "time" was up, Chrissie would let her go. That's assuming she didn't do something stupid, like confidently state that she'd never give up when Chrissy released her. Then it would be "plop, back in you go."
8463810 Fixed! Thanks! Yeah, that included Trixe, but see above. Trixie might be wandering around free right now if she played her cards right. Or she might be glued to a roof somewhere. Or something in-between... I was gonna keep this story focused around the Alicorns and Shining Armor. If it gets too grandiose, I'll never finish it, like usual. This was supposed to just be a short diversion when I saw the pic. Whoopsies.
Also, I updated the story in this chapter a little. It reads a little better, I added some fun details, and fleshed out a few things. Specifically Cadence has more info. And I went into more detail on her little research project as well. Maybe it will come up somewhere...
8465134 Interesting revisions. The improved explanations and fleshed out scenes are appreciated. Not as explicit as I’d like, but I understand if you’re building up to something. And I wish I could read Chrissy’s book …
Did find a couple little errors:
The first two paragraphs have identical endings; looks like a copy-paste gone wrong.
8465134 Sorry about bringing her up. I know how hard it can be to lose focus on the central plot. You're right-good to focus on the alicorns and imagine my own fate for the Sexy and Alluring Trixie.
I'm weird like that. I like mixed overly explicit bits and way under detailed bits mixed together. Dunno why. Maybe because the explicit bits set the tone, and your imagination can run wild with the vague descriptions. It's always seemed just slightly more effective. Plus, constant unending porn gets boring.
As for the book, lol yeah. Maybe that might be fun to do something with later. Not now though. Thanks for the comments!
8466285 Sorry? Sorry? You should be sorry! Oh, wait, no you shouldn't. Bring up what you want! I'd prefer people ask questions like that then not comment at all. It encourages me to write. I'm very comment motivated.
Every single changeling owned a copy, happy to help support their mother, and it had glowing reviews as to the efficacy of the methods she'd pioneered. Satisfyingly enough, it was even a best seller amongst the ponies, although she wasn't too naive to deny that was likely due to her very in-depth descriptions of Luna's training methods, experiences and anatomy. Not to mention the pictures she had taken throughout the process. All the before and after pictures, the up close pictures for diagrams, and the example pictures that showed what to look for really helped drive home the research. And the collectors edition was even printed in color!
I want one of those. For science, and science only, of course. But for the best results I need the colored collectors edition. For science. And I also have to ask for the director's cut version with additional content. Only for schience, I want to add.
Is good chapter, but I feel like I should point out some scientific issues: Firstly, making a black hole is stupidly hard. To make a black hole with an event horizon the size of a single helium atom (the smallest atom), you would need 2.087×10^16 kg of mass. To put that into perspective, that's about 261 times the total mass of all biomatter on Earth. Furthermore, a small black hole us unstable, and will promptly radiate all of its mass as energy. In the case of the helium-atom-sized black hole, that would be 1.876×10^33 J, which is about one-sixth the total energy output of the sun in a year, or about an order of magnitude greater than the Earth's gravitational binding energy. Yes, you read that right, creating a black hole only the size of a helium atom would destroy the entire planet.
If you wanted a black hole you could actually see (0.1 mm diameter), you'd need a mass of 3.37×10^22 kg, just shy of half of the entire moon, and the destabilization would release 3.029×10^39 J, which is about a quarter of the energy output of the sun over one million years
Is it? I update randomly, sporadically, and rarely. I am halfway through a Shining Armor chapter though. Maybe I'll finish, maybe I will not. I'm like a fish in an open aquarium. I could jump out at any time, and land on your carpet. No notice. Just a fish on your carpet.
So how long until Chrysalis is defeated and the ponies retake Equestria, after all Discord, Starlight, Trixie and Thorax should still be free, not to mention Sunset and the Human Mane 7 and the Mane 5 of Equestria are still there, heck a certain Centaur could be released and sent after Chrysalis, lets see her try to defeat HIM after he's drained her of her magic.
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Will Chrysalis ever be stopped? Will Luna regain her divine aura? Will Cadence get that cramp out of her left toe? Will Twilight's tongue eventually go numb? Will Celestia remember where she left her keys? (Answer: They're not where you think!) Find out next time on Chrissy Ball Z!
But seriously. I sent you a PM. Have an upvote for commenting! Although, I wish you'd read the whole chapter before commenting. lol.
Well. Interesting to see how she got Luna to obey her. I hope next chapter we’ll get some one-on-one time with Lulu and her treasures?
So,wait, is Glimmy wandering around like you commented in chapter one, or has she been captured and is strung up in Chrysalis' throne room?
Should be 'throne'. Nothing else I could see.
Anyway, Chryssie... sometimes you should maybe listen to people with a bit more experience in matters such as black holes. ;) So this rag-tag bunch. I'm guessing Thorax and Discord at least. Did that include Trixie, too? Dang. I'd love to see Chryssie play with her. ;)
Great chapter. I like the bit about photography at the beginning and composition.
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Dunno. I have a different idea, but we'll see how it goes.
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Her current status is unknown. As the story continues, I'll find out more as much as you do! We know she was captured during her rescue attempt, and so far that's it. If her attempt was unsuccessful, she's likely just another pony in Chrysalis's eyes, so once her "time" was up, Chrissie would let her go. That's assuming she didn't do something stupid, like confidently state that she'd never give up when Chrissy released her. Then it would be "plop, back in you go."
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Fixed! Thanks! Yeah, that included Trixe, but see above. Trixie might be wandering around free right now if she played her cards right. Or she might be glued to a roof somewhere. Or something in-between... I was gonna keep this story focused around the Alicorns and Shining Armor. If it gets too grandiose, I'll never finish it, like usual. This was supposed to just be a short diversion when I saw the pic. Whoopsies.
Also, I updated the story in this chapter a little. It reads a little better, I added some fun details, and fleshed out a few things. Specifically Cadence has more info. And I went into more detail on her little research project as well. Maybe it will come up somewhere...
8465134
Interesting revisions. The improved explanations and fleshed out scenes are appreciated. Not as explicit as I’d like, but I understand if you’re building up to something. And I wish I could read Chrissy’s book …
Did find a couple little errors:
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Sorry about bringing her up. I know how hard it can be to lose focus on the central plot. You're right-good to focus on the alicorns and imagine my own fate for the Sexy and Alluring Trixie.
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Thanks! Stuff fixed!
I'm weird like that. I like mixed overly explicit bits and way under detailed bits mixed together. Dunno why. Maybe because the explicit bits set the tone, and your imagination can run wild with the vague descriptions. It's always seemed just slightly more effective. Plus, constant unending porn gets boring.
As for the book, lol yeah. Maybe that might be fun to do something with later. Not now though. Thanks for the comments!
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Sorry? Sorry? You should be sorry! Oh, wait, no you shouldn't. Bring up what you want! I'd prefer people ask questions like that then not comment at all. It encourages me to write. I'm very comment motivated.
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Thanks! Appreciate the comments.
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Thanks! Yeah, I like tongues. lol.
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lol. And then it fizzles out after. I have that problem.
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I know, right?
I want one of those.
For science, and science only, of course.
But for the best results I need the colored collectors edition. For science.
And I also have to ask for the director's cut version with additional content. Only for schience, I want to add.
NICE.
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THANKS.
Nice.
But an in atmosphere black hole wouldn't work like that anymore than pouring napalm on an oil fire would stop a gas fire.
Is good chapter, but I feel like I should point out some scientific issues:
Firstly, making a black hole is stupidly hard. To make a black hole with an event horizon the size of a single helium atom (the smallest atom), you would need 2.087×10^16 kg of mass. To put that into perspective, that's about 261 times the total mass of all biomatter on Earth. Furthermore, a small black hole us unstable, and will promptly radiate all of its mass as energy. In the case of the helium-atom-sized black hole, that would be 1.876×10^33 J, which is about one-sixth the total energy output of the sun in a year, or about an order of magnitude greater than the Earth's gravitational binding energy. Yes, you read that right, creating a black hole only the size of a helium atom would destroy the entire planet.
If you wanted a black hole you could actually see (0.1 mm diameter), you'd need a mass of 3.37×10^22 kg, just shy of half of the entire moon, and the destabilization would release 3.029×10^39 J, which is about a quarter of the energy output of the sun over one million years
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So is the story dead?
Is it? I update randomly, sporadically, and rarely. I am halfway through a Shining Armor chapter though. Maybe I'll finish, maybe I will not. I'm like a fish in an open aquarium. I could jump out at any time, and land on your carpet. No notice. Just a fish on your carpet.
Flop...
Just read through the fic. Plenty of fun; and seeing the context behind Luna's subservience makes it all the more juicy
Great work!