Chrysalis likes to practice photography now that she has so much free time. Her favorite subjects are four of her pony pets, Princess Twilight, Princess Celestia, Princess Luna, and Princess Cadence. Oh wait. Princess isn't in their names anymore. :)
Man, you and I have vastly differing opinions of what constitutes “not hot”. In particular, Celestia groggily watching her sister get finger-blasted by their niece and cumming from it … now that’s hot.
I’m loving the quick updates, too. Badly want to see more of this story.
Edit: Also, I wouldn’t mind learning a little about what kind of training Chrissy put her pets through, specifically …
Edit 2 (I keep remembering things I wanted to mention): Celestia plaintively asking her mistress about how she fell so low, all the while hugging Chrissy, is probably my favorite part. The psychological training on display is beautiful.
Finally, editing note: The italics in this section are broken:
8461643 Fixed! Thanks! What I mean is that I usually go through and refine dirty scenes several times. I almost always am embarassed by them the first two or three scans. Once I'm at about scan four, it's usually much more... impactful. But i haven't re-read this chapter, or the last one really, with editing eyes yet.
Man, you and I have vastly differing opinions of what constitutes “not hot”. In particular, Celestia groggily watching her sister get finger-blasted by their niece and cumming from it … now that’s hot.
I’m loving the quick updates, too. Badly want to see more of this story.
Edit: Also, I wouldn’t mind learning a little about what kind of training Chrissy put her pets through, specifically …
Edit 2 (I keep remembering things I wanted to mention): Celestia plaintively asking her mistress about how she fell so low, all the while hugging Chrissy, is probably my favorite part. The psychological training on display is beautiful.
Finally, editing note: The italics in this section are broken:
8461643
Fixed! Thanks! What I mean is that I usually go through and refine dirty scenes several times. I almost always am embarassed by them the first two or three scans. Once I'm at about scan four, it's usually much more... impactful. But i haven't re-read this chapter, or the last one really, with editing eyes yet.
I'd say this was damned hot. If we get more, then awesome. If not, what we have here is some great clop. :D
great stuff
Looks good!
I especially like how you describe Celestia's subtle disapproval of the whole situation.
Found a small typo:
Should be uppercase, since you are probably referring to the person Twilight, right?