This is Good, will we get to see some flashback chapters? It also reminds me of I certen picture on derpibooru ( i.d. 208946) and accompanying speech in the comments.

I wonder what's happened to the elements of harmony and Starlight in this scenario. This scenario means that Chrysalis never lost control of her hive and likely stopped Starlight, Trixie, Thorax and Discord in their efforts to save everypony.

I'm guessing the elements are probably rewards for her higher generals, or perhaps the pets of her husband (whom I'm guessing from her descriptions here is a brainwashed Shining Armour), while Trixie and Starlight are probably in a far more terrible situation due to their resistance of Chrysalis take over of Equestria

So this is set after the second failed invasion, how the BUCK did Chrysalis capture them then, also where is Discord, he should be able to sense what Chrysalis is doing and just snap his fingers to free the mares from her mind control. Not to mention Shining Armor and Flurry Heart would wonder where Cadance is along with the other members of the Mane 6, Starlight, Spike and even Sunset when she hasn't heard anything from Twilight through the journal if this has happened, also I think Sunset should have been made an Alicorn when she came back to Equestria in that one EQG mini-episode, after all she went through after she was redeemed and helped out with everything since then.

Oh my. It’s like you took my comment I just left on the first chapter and brought my desires to life. You say it isn’t very hot, but honestly, I thought it was great – sexy in a slightly understated way, no hardcore fucking but little teases and with heavy use of visual imagery. I can just imagine that photo of Celestia caught mid-squirting orgasm.

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Fam chill this is just for the clop not for the plot.

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Thanks! Dunno. Maybe some of those would be fun. Some would be not so fun though. But I like those too... And that's one of my fave pics for a few reasons. That and the one that's a gif of Celestia that will eventually flash to chrysalis for like a second once every ten seconds or so. It's got Twilight and her lying in bed. Yeah. That one.

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Yeah. That seems like a good place for the timeline divergence. Lets roll with it! And that rolls well into why Glimmer isn't causing problems right now... She's in one of the cocoon caverns that's mentioned. One of the changeling stockyards... So the dark tag is here for a really really good reason. I sort of insinuated it in this chapter, but, well, Chrissy here... is keeping animals for pets. The more I explore this timeline the darker it gets.... Maybe something else is happening? Hmm...

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I will not be able to satisfactorily answer these questions! Yay! Oh wait. Maybe I can. It's been a very long time since the coup transpired. It's been long enough that all these problems are really very far in the past. Chrysalis just lives in a constant state of wonder that things actually worked out. Kind of like that day where you look around at the big house, abd you say, whose house is this? And then you realize... it's yours. It's your big beutiful house. Sure, you worked for it, bought it, and did all the paperwork, but none of that just seems real on those days. Chrissy here is having one of those days. But back in the long, long ago, she solved basically every single one of those problems with the events in the episode that 8458787 mentioned. The answer? Kidnap everybody. EVERYBODY. And then replace them with changelings. Turns out that it worked pretty well. And I haven't seem the EQG mini episode. Sunset was always promised to me to be non-canon. Was I lied to? Do the EQG episodes tie into the regular seasons and I missed it somewhere? Does Sunset become an Alicorn somewhere? Did I miss something important? Anyways, we'll just have to figure out the specifics as we go. I'm literally making this up while waiting for the artist to tell me what's going on in the pic. lol. This isn't something I've been thinking about for more than a few hours at a time, and only for a day now. Honestly, if the artist comes out and says, "Sooo.... Chrysalis is throwing a costume themed slumber party, and they're reverse changelings. Chrysalis is actually just Pinkie in disguise." I'll re-write the story to accomodate. Mostly.... Also, tit for tat. You don't use return carriage, I don't use return carriage. Muhahahahahahah! But thanks for the comment! Keep at it! I'll be thinking about this stuff as I move forward. If I move forward.

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Wait... You don't want hard core? Oops.... Well, thanks for the awesome comments! And way to use your imagination! There's no wrong way to fantasize! Also, I feel weird making you look at a picture while your reading, and read while you're looking at a picture. I'm so sorry. It's an abomination that shouldn't exist. I'm so sorry....

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At least they're passionate! I can accept that! Everybody has to get in their groove somehow, and if that's asking lots of questions and wishing Sunset was an alicorn because she deserves it darn it, then so be it. As I said too the other guy, there's no wrong way to fantasize! Heck, I wish they did an episode where all the characters were anthropomorphic mushrooms. I'm sure I've heard that somewhere recently. Must be like a radio commercial or something! And I love your profile pic! That too, is strikingly familiar somehow...

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Oh dear, I don’t wanna give you the wrong impression. I love hardcore, and I’d love to see it included in this story. (It’d be hard to appreciate your other stories as much as I do if I didn’t like hardcore!) I was just gently disputing your statement in the chapter 2 author’s note that the Celestia scene was “not very hot” – it may be softcore, but it’s hot aplenty, at least in my opinion. Well-done softcore can be as good as any hardcore, if handled right, which I think this was. The backstory about Celestia’s training, her continued but doomed resistance, how she gradually breaks down and begs for it; it’s not hardcore, but it’s still damn sexy.

As for the picture, it just helps me visualize the scene more clearly in my mind. In turn, reading the story gives the scene more context and depth, allowing me to imagine what’s being said and done in that picture. The result is a combined fantasy that’s even hotter, at least for me.

So, yeah, hope you didn’t read either of my comments as a complaint, cuz they absolutely weren’t. I love this story already.

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There was one where Sunset came to Equestria and brought Starlight over to Pedestria next. She wasn't an Alicorn then. Word of God is she's also plain weaker than either Starlight or Twilight.

Me, I want to see what Chrysalis is doing to Shining Armor. She mentions taking him from Cadance; that implies he's not just trapped in a goo bubble somewhere, but that Chrysalis is enjoying his company in more direct ways.

Damn, that's dominance. :D I do like the reminders of the camera still going. :D

this is fucking fantastic

Hawt.

Dunno why it needs the dark tag, it's clearly a happy timeline, Chryssie's all good.