I may not be enjoying the actual actions all that much. But I am enjoying seeing these two let their guard down and simply love each other for a bit. Their hectic lives don't allow this as much as they deserve.
8354602 Well they have quite a stabler base with four hooves and a relatively low center of gravity ^^ On the other hand hooves are not really suited to keep traction on porcelain... Hmm that makes me think... how would the basin of a shower be made for an intelligent equine? I guess they would refrain from porcelain and go for some kind of texturized stone or maybe son kind or rubberized surface...
Seriously though, this is outstanding; the anatomically-correct rump play exquisite; and the writing top-notch, minus a couple teeny-tiny errors! The way you reference some bits in relation to the dock is of particular note. Really adds a little extra spice. I also love that the humor is woven into the narrative in a way that not only adds a chuckle or two, but also doesn't get in the way of the clop. No one likes a joke gone flat making your Johnson go slack.
It isn't just the clop I enjoy. Oh no. The writing, as I stated above, is top-notch. This includes the interactions between Celestia and her lover. Feels real. But also hot. Very, very hot.
Only a couple thousand words and I am already hooked, eager for more. Oh man, I cannot wait for the rest!
I'm in love with the whole premise of romantic mischief, and I'm pretty sure the blame lies in part with you.
“No other…”—Celestia’s words were gasps, almost pants—“pony has… ever done… what you… are doing… right now!”
Was there some sort of sexual liberation in the last thousand years? Otherwise I have a hard time imagining how roaming muzzles wouldn't eventually go to such places.
On a addittional note... how does Celestia and Luna tail and mane work? Especially the tail as it is not only hairs and there is s bone structure in a normal horse/pony and theirs are ethereal...
Mmmm... But Kudzu. Equine erotica with plot(heh) is the best kind. Mindless clop is so... mindless. I only wish, and hope, we eventually get to see their first time together. That first peak, first orgasm together... Celestia getting over her issues and allowing herself to cum in the embrace of her love. Thats one little thing that really makes my heart soar.
I may not be enjoying the actual actions all that much. But I am enjoying seeing these two let their guard down and simply love each other for a bit. Their hectic lives don't allow this as much as they deserve.
Huh, i forgot about the Vanilla thing.
... was Luna Lavender? I forget. Damnit that is buried in Swans, it will take a lot to find that.
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Anal scent glands. All vanilla. Castoreum.
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See, i did forget.
Very fun reading about them as a couple happy to tease each other and play the games every married couple has to keep things interesting.
Now if they can avoid injuring themselves... sex in the shower is fun but Oy! It's easy to injure yourself.
Horse Hickeys.
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Well they have quite a stabler base with four hooves and a relatively low center of gravity ^^
On the other hand hooves are not really suited to keep traction on porcelain...
Hmm that makes me think... how would the basin of a shower be made for an intelligent equine? I guess they would refrain from porcelain and go for some kind of texturized stone or maybe son kind or rubberized surface...
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My guess would be natural stone. Either treated to be non slick or magically enhance. Naturally grainy in non unicornic areas.
Course they could just have duck shaped shower stickies like we do.
>Dock worship
Muh fetish.
Seriously though, this is outstanding; the anatomically-correct rump play exquisite; and the writing top-notch, minus a couple teeny-tiny errors! The way you reference some bits in relation to the dock is of particular note. Really adds a little extra spice. I also love that the humor is woven into the narrative in a way that not only adds a chuckle or two, but also doesn't get in the way of the clop. No one likes a joke gone flat making your Johnson go slack.
It isn't just the clop I enjoy. Oh no. The writing, as I stated above, is top-notch. This includes the interactions between Celestia and her lover. Feels real. But also hot. Very, very hot.
Only a couple thousand words and I am already hooked, eager for more. Oh man, I cannot wait for the rest!
Yes, just yes.
Equine erotica beats clop any time.
EDIT: Congrats on getting featured.
Aww yeah hawt married coitus!
Pssh. Celestia's not a vestal virgin, and this is the equivalent of swearing in French. It's dirty, but you're wiping your ass with silk.
Zero apologies,Kuzduhaiku did nothing wrong.
My question is: does this take place before or after the fall of the Breadnaught?
The sun, praise it.
I'm in love with the whole premise of romantic mischief, and I'm pretty sure the blame lies in part with you.
Was there some sort of sexual liberation in the last thousand years? Otherwise I have a hard time imagining how roaming muzzles wouldn't eventually go to such places.
Gosling the ruffian. Gosling the dirty, dirty pony. And finally, Gosling the pleaser.
The many faces of Gosling
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Not to such places on Celestia though. Gosling is the first
Gosling has celestial objects on his appetite.
Think this should be removed.
On a addittional note... how does Celestia and Luna tail and mane work? Especially the tail as it is not only hairs and there is s bone structure in a normal horse/pony and theirs are ethereal...
Mmmm... But Kudzu. Equine erotica with plot(heh) is the best kind. Mindless clop is so... mindless. I only wish, and hope, we eventually get to see their first time together. That first peak, first orgasm together... Celestia getting over her issues and allowing herself to cum in the embrace of her love. Thats one little thing that really makes my heart soar.