Shining Armor is a young adult and taking an interest in mares. A certain mare very close to him can help him in a very special way. Incest. Clop in every chapter.
Now we see that Velvet is the escort. The first chapter gave us absolutely no clues. I hope next chapter Shining and Cadence finally get a chance to be together, or if Celestia could lay off all the damn work on her neice.
2. Eventide Velour is described of being a similar age and category as Twilight Velvet.
3. Shiny and his mom use their phones in alternation -- he sends a message, she gets one on her phone, she replies, he gets one on his phone...
4. Eventide's coloration is similar to Velvet's.
5. Velvet leaves prior to Shining's departure for the liason, and only returns later.
6. Character tags. Only those two are tagged.
7. The cover art.
Now, you are right for saying that it wasn't obvious. I wanted it to be a bit of a mystery and reward attentive, sharp readers without being dickish. If a mystery cannot be solved feasibly with the presented information, then it's a bullshit mystery. About half the commentators got it and about half didn't, which means I correctly calibrated.
I made it intentionally more obvious in this chapter to have an end to the honeymoon period and set up the drama in the later sections of the story.
How did you like the waterpark, Cadance segment, blowjob, and sex, BTW?
8335617 I thought the Waterpark and Cadence was a great setting becides that he gets friendzoned. Maybe Velvet should have Cadence come "Babysit" Twilight when Velvet actually has Twilight and Cadence arrives only to see Shining prepare a date for her.
It's up to your interpretation; they have had multiple liasons. Alternatively, if you'd rather think it's some of base person poking up through the glamour, that's fine, too.
I thought the Waterpark and Cadence was a great setting becides that he gets friendzoned. Maybe Velvet should have Cadence come "Babysit" Twilight when Velvet actually has Twilight and Cadence arrives only to see Shining prepare a date for her.
Now THAT☝ would be excellent
Glad to hear the waterpark worked. Cadance isn't done in the story quite yet. But what did you want to happen? I couldn't understand.
Her cosmetic magic was more than skin deep; it went into the brain, as the mind and body were as linked as earth and sky. It MADE her Madam Eventide Velour. Her mate seemed... familiar...?
Now we see that Velvet is the escort. The first chapter gave us absolutely no clues. I hope next chapter Shining and Cadence finally get a chance to be together, or if Celestia could lay off all the damn work on her neice.
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Abosutely no clues? I did give a few.
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Eventide Velour
Twilight Velvet
Eventide = evening = twilight
Velour = velvet
2. Eventide Velour is described of being a similar age and category as Twilight Velvet.
3. Shiny and his mom use their phones in alternation -- he sends a message, she gets one on her phone, she replies, he gets one on his phone...
4. Eventide's coloration is similar to Velvet's.
5. Velvet leaves prior to Shining's departure for the liason, and only returns later.
6. Character tags. Only those two are tagged.
7. The cover art.
Now, you are right for saying that it wasn't obvious. I wanted it to be a bit of a mystery and reward attentive, sharp readers without being dickish. If a mystery cannot be solved feasibly with the presented information, then it's a bullshit mystery. About half the commentators got it and about half didn't, which means I correctly calibrated.
I made it intentionally more obvious in this chapter to have an end to the honeymoon period and set up the drama in the later sections of the story.
How did you like the waterpark, Cadance segment, blowjob, and sex, BTW?
Shouldn't it be Gleaming?
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I thought the Waterpark and Cadence was a great setting becides that he gets friendzoned. Maybe Velvet should have Cadence come "Babysit" Twilight when Velvet actually has Twilight and Cadence arrives only to see Shining prepare a date for her.
Now THAT☝ would be excellent
The plot thickens but one side is suspsecting what is going on while a third point of view suggested the outcome to the unsuspecting other half...
Cannot wait to see how this goes! More I say.
... What's guililty?
Also, was this an intentional giveaway?
Like, unless I'm not remembering right, Shining never talked about a little sister before, right?
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A typo.
It's up to your interpretation; they have had multiple liasons. Alternatively, if you'd rather think it's some of base person poking up through the glamour, that's fine, too.
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Thanks, Burnasius. More coming in a few weeks. Watch out for other releases of mine; I'm making a blitz this month.
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Glad to hear the waterpark worked. Cadance isn't done in the story quite yet. But what did you want to happen? I couldn't understand.
Hot!
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Thanks! P.S.: Enjoy the new chapter.
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So far I am liking it. Will read the rest soon. I would really love it if Shining got his mum pregnant.