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Midday Sun


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Insta Fave and Upvote from me :twilightsmile:

Interesting start, but I think you should improve it a bit. There are a few times where the dialogues start with a lowercase letter, while the only physical description of the characters is about Rarity's, ehm, chest.

Please continue this story.

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