Sunset's life has taken a turn for the worst. A Mystable profile by the name of Anon-a-miss has been spreading secrets and everyone is blaming her. Left abandoned she considers suicide that is until Fluttershy's older brother comes to town...
“Will Applejack and Rarity please come to the principal's office?” The two girls looked at each other before getting up and walking to the office.
"Will you need a ride home after school dear?" Rarity asked.
"Yes thank you, when ah find the dickwad that took my truck I'll make em wish they were never born," Applejack replied. The duo walked into the office.
"Sit," Principal Celestia said in a monotone voice. Luna was behind her looking quite angry.
"What's going on?" Rarity asked.
"It concerns your friend Rainbow Dash," Celestia explained.
"Is she okay? Does it involve the post Sunset made?" Applejack asked.
"Oh come on Ms Celestia it's obvious it's her. Your faith in her has clearly clouded her judgment," Rarity replied.
"Alright then Miss Rarity. Explain this to me. How is it that just 2 hours ago Anon-a-miss posted again while last time we checked Sunset was in the hospital with a destroyed phone?" Luna asked coldly. Rarity and Applejack's hearts dropped. Sunset in the hospital?
"No there's been a mistake. It has to be. Rainbow would never do that!" Applejack exclaimed.
"She was seen fleeing the scene of the crime, by the way Applejack you probably will need a new truck now," Celestia said.
"YOU MEAN SHE TOOK MA TRUCK?!"
"Yes. She used it to ram into the vehicle Sunset was in. I should also add Mr Speedy was in the car as well," Celestia explained.
"Is he okay?" Rarity asked.
"He’ll make a full recovery thank goodness, Sunset however..” Celestia replied.
“What happened to her?” Applejack asked quietly.
“Her legs were crushed. They had to be amputated.” Celestia explained. Rarity then fainted and was quickly caught by Applejack.
“I don’t see why you two should care. Last I checked you banished her,” Luna said coldly. Applejack felt her ice cold stare staring at her.
A very good point Vice Principle Luna.
“Ok this has gone on long enough,” Apple Bloom said pulling out her phone and sending a text.
Apple Bloom:we want out. We just learned Sunset is in the hospital
Almost immediately she got a reply
Number 1:Absolutely not. Apple Bloom:I don’t think you saw what I said. SUNSET.IS.IN.THE.HOSPITAL! Number 1:It is of no concern to me. Apple Bloom:How could you be so heartless?! Number 1:call me what you like but you are gonna keep going until I let you go..or else! Apple Bloom:Please just let us go we didn’t think it would go this far Number 1:to fucking bad. Now you will post what I say in 1 hour or so help me god I will make sure your families are left on the streets!
Apple Bloom sighed.
“They aren’t letting us go?” Scootaloo asked. Apple Bloom slowly shook her head.
“God damn it! We’ve been taking orders from this bitch for weeks! What more does she want?!” Scootaloo asked.
“They want us to just keep posting..I’m sorry we have no choice,” Apple Bloom replied sadly....
“We should not have agreed to this...” Sweetie Belle said looking down.
Ok, one big question. Who the hell are they taking orders from?!
Not wanting to be friends anymore means you don't care if someone gets maimed for life? No, that is NOT a good point, that's a cruel accusation and Luna should apologise at some point. She won't, but she should.
9693335 Well, I do get what you are saying. But to be honest, she did said Applejack banished Sunset Shimmer when Anon A Miss started happening. And now need to figure out who this number one person is.
Poor CMC, being forced into this. (I have a hunch it must be one of the Dazzlings, probably Adagio. My best guess) And especially poor Scootaloo, after hearing what happened, she won't looking at her "idol" the same way again.
9693335 Oh please, if they were friends, they wouldn't abandoned Sunset and let her taken so much abuse in the first place. The point is they only feel bad knowing she wasn't guilty in the first place now.
9693349 Let me remind you, like two or three chapters ago, they were holding Rainbow Dash back from doing anything rash. So, no. That being said, the story is so out-of-character, I can't stand it. I'm dropping out, should have a while ago. Like most cookie cutter Anon-A-Miss fics, this is too contrived, too violent for cheap shock value, too out-of-character for me to get invested in anything happening.
I'm sorry. No downvote from me, I'll just move on.
Addendum: Apologies to the author too. What I said is pretty harsh. You probably put a lot of work into this. I wish I could like it, I really, really do wish I could, but... I feel like the story just jumps from scream fest to sex to violence, nothing gets explored, nothing gets discussed. People act because the story NEEDS them to act this way, not because it makes sense. Look at how Blood deduced Sunset isn't Anon-A-Miss, he just knew. He didn't need to figure it out, he just knew because OC knows. And that detracts from the story. I can't take it seriously when everyone is acting like a parody of themselves. "Flutterassetive" my ass, she's never been in-character this entire time; she's always screaming and bitching, never calm or fearful or reserved, so that supposed character development falls flat on its face. The ones who feel like themselves the most are... Applejack and Rarity, and I bet they will now be required to debase themselves before Sunset to even have a shot at being forgiven, despite how they had nothing to do with Sunset getting run over.
Something Celestia and Luna apparently think they should be blamed for. F*cking hell.
9693454 Well like most would say don't like don't read.
Also i assume it was to keep Dash from getting in trouble not for Sunset.
anyways if who ever behind this keeps this up, she or he setting up for failure. I mean Sunset lost both legs and her phone was destroyed, so no way she can still be framed.
9693465 Look alot of people agreed the comic was terrible terrible timing and made no sense. but ti did make for great fanfics, not all are keepers. But i do like some of them.
As for Rainbow who knows, maybe she being effected by something or maybe she always had issues.
she overly egotistical, loud mouth and bragger, maybe she actually a scared little girl who needs the ego to function and when lost she went nuts. People do a lot of terrible things when high on rage and such. For real.
9693482 Send me a list of what you think are great Anon-A-Miss fics. I'm not saying this to pick a fight, honest, I'm curious what you consider great. Whenever I open one of these, I feel they could be good but they devolve into simple Accusation Fics. Same as with Canterlot Wedding stories.
9693645 Thank you so much for being a good sport about this. I've been very critical and not necessarily in a very constructive manner.
I know that story. It doesn't really make fun of the Anon-A-Miss stories, though; it made fun of the characters for being dumb by making them dumb in the first place. Like, the Rainbooms spell out how it couldn't have been Sunset, but all that stuff is from the story, not the comic, so what does that even accomplish other than proving dumb people are dumb when you write them to be dumb? I failed to see the humour.
First, I have to say that I still think that Rainbow Dash doing what she did is still out of character. Next, I think Luna was too harsh. Just because they weren't friends with Sunset doesn't mean they didn't care about her as a human being. Finally, I like that there may be a legitimate reason behind the CMC's actions besides jealousy/anger. I've only read other other fic that did that. And this story is beyond three chapters.
Hey cant Celestia prove to the entire school that she is not the one posting she just proved it to Applejack and Rairty she can gather all the students and porve she is not the one that is posting it
Who is doing this?
That shut them up.
A very good point Vice Principle Luna.
Ok, one big question. Who the hell are they taking orders from?!
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How is that a good point?
Not wanting to be friends anymore means you don't care if someone gets maimed for life? No, that is NOT a good point, that's a cruel accusation and Luna should apologise at some point. She won't, but she should.
9693335
Well, I do get what you are saying. But to be honest, she did said Applejack banished Sunset Shimmer when Anon A Miss started happening. And now need to figure out who this number one person is.
I think I know who is really behind it, Wallflower Blush, I don’t know if I’m right but I’m sure it could be her
Poor CMC, being forced into this. (I have a hunch it must be one of the Dazzlings, probably Adagio. My best guess) And especially poor Scootaloo, after hearing what happened, she won't looking at her "idol" the same way again.
9693335
Oh please, if they were friends, they wouldn't abandoned Sunset and let her taken so much abuse in the first place.
The point is they only feel bad knowing she wasn't guilty in the first place now.
Otherwise they would said it was karma.
9693349
Let me remind you, like two or three chapters ago, they were holding Rainbow Dash back from doing anything rash. So, no. That being said, the story is so out-of-character, I can't stand it. I'm dropping out, should have a while ago. Like most cookie cutter Anon-A-Miss fics, this is too contrived, too violent for cheap shock value, too out-of-character for me to get invested in anything happening.
I'm sorry. No downvote from me, I'll just move on.
Addendum: Apologies to the author too. What I said is pretty harsh. You probably put a lot of work into this. I wish I could like it, I really, really do wish I could, but... I feel like the story just jumps from scream fest to sex to violence, nothing gets explored, nothing gets discussed. People act because the story NEEDS them to act this way, not because it makes sense. Look at how Blood deduced Sunset isn't Anon-A-Miss, he just knew. He didn't need to figure it out, he just knew because OC knows. And that detracts from the story. I can't take it seriously when everyone is acting like a parody of themselves. "Flutterassetive" my ass, she's never been in-character this entire time; she's always screaming and bitching, never calm or fearful or reserved, so that supposed character development falls flat on its face. The ones who feel like themselves the most are... Applejack and Rarity, and I bet they will now be required to debase themselves before Sunset to even have a shot at being forgiven, despite how they had nothing to do with Sunset getting run over.
Something Celestia and Luna apparently think they should be blamed for. F*cking hell.
Not even the Anon-A-Miss comic did that.
9693454
Well like most would say don't like don't read.
Also i assume it was to keep Dash from getting in trouble not for Sunset.
anyways if who ever behind this keeps this up, she or he setting up for failure.
I mean Sunset lost both legs and her phone was destroyed, so no way she can still be framed.
9693461
I intend to. Kinda my fault in the first place. I keep trying Anon-A-Miss fics and keep getting burned.
9693465
Look alot of people agreed the comic was terrible terrible timing and made no sense. but ti did make for great fanfics, not all are keepers. But i do like some of them.
As for Rainbow who knows, maybe she being effected by something or maybe she always had issues.
she overly egotistical, loud mouth and bragger, maybe she actually a scared little girl who needs the ego to function and when lost she went nuts.
People do a lot of terrible things when high on rage and such. For real.
9693482
Send me a list of what you think are great Anon-A-Miss fics. I'm not saying this to pick a fight, honest, I'm curious what you consider great. Whenever I open one of these, I feel they could be good but they devolve into simple Accusation Fics. Same as with Canterlot Wedding stories.
9693495
I know the comment wasn’t really directed at me but I found one you might like
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/406191/not-another-anon-a-miss-fic
It basically makes fun of the other Anon-a-miss stories and all their cliches. It’s super meta
9693645
Thank you so much for being a good sport about this. I've been very critical and not necessarily in a very constructive manner.
I know that story. It doesn't really make fun of the Anon-A-Miss stories, though; it made fun of the characters for being dumb by making them dumb in the first place. Like, the Rainbooms spell out how it couldn't have been Sunset, but all that stuff is from the story, not the comic, so what does that even accomplish other than proving dumb people are dumb when you write them to be dumb? I failed to see the humour.
First, I have to say that I still think that Rainbow Dash doing what she did is still out of character.
Next, I think Luna was too harsh. Just because they weren't friends with Sunset doesn't mean they didn't care about her as a human being.
Finally, I like that there may be a legitimate reason behind the CMC's actions besides jealousy/anger. I've only read other other fic that did that. And this story is beyond three chapters.
I'm gettin my shotgun
Great chapter
Nice work looking forward to the next one
Please don't stop it's getting good. I want to know what happens nexts and to see how this story ends
P.S love your work hope to see more in the future
Hey cant Celestia prove to the entire school that she is not the one posting she just proved it to Applejack and Rairty she can gather all the students and porve she is not the one that is posting it