Ok this was rather crazy and weird, not sure I care for this. But will the freaking truth come out next?
How is this going to haunt everyone,and how much will Dash pay for what she done?!

I think it would have been epic if rainbow "pony up" but it has gone demon style to reflect her dark emotions and choices like sunset did but it way worse and twisted in a sense that would haunt people probably when the "hero" gone corrupt

Oh come on, couldn't you have had Dash give a better chase then that, I mean have her climb up a fire escape so she can run and jump across the roof tops, that would have made the chase last a LOT longer for sure, also what cities still have cops walk the street at night, I mean come on they go around in police cars.

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Well, considering that Rainbow nearly killed Pinkie’s boyfriend and that she stole Applejack’s truck to try and kill Sunset, I say Rainbow Dash is going to lose her friendships with both of them. Though who knows where Rarity stands in all this.

Author's Note:

Now begins the fallout

Isn't that a different story?

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Rarity clearly would be appalled by Rainbow's actions. Now, Rainbow Dash will be dressing in style, because Orange is the New Black...

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Different kind; besides, it's long than the word 'Fall' anyway...

I thought we agreed I'd get a coma.

You should have done the demon transformation with rainbow.

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or a Twilight vs. Rainbow throw-down. I REALLY WANT TO SEE THAT IN AN ANON-A-MISS STORY

Dammit ShadowKnight! What have we said about making Twilight or Sunset turn into complete psychopaths in other people’s stories?! Besides if you want a beat down, you gotta use Midnight Sparkle, Daydream Shimmer or Demon Sunset. OR you could have Princess Celestia crossover and unleash the full fury of hell as Daybreaker

nice work.

Something about this just doesn't feel right? Rainbow stealing Applejack's truck and using it to try and kill Sunset? I just find it hard to believe Rainbow Dash would take it this far.

Dame that's messed up what rainbow dash did is beyond f***** up I hope she get what she deserves

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Yeah but in the stories they are emphasizing Dash's impulsiveness and rash decision-making while being hot headed

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You'll probably find what your looking for in equestria girls: civil war

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I think she will do the same and cut ties with dash because what dash did was inexscuseable plus it may give rarity and applejack some time to reflect and think if sunset is really anon-a-miss, then is what she's going through really worth it and is there a goal and is it really her

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That's my story. But yeah you're right.

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Author was gunning for everyone's legs

I'll be honest I thought when she could not feel her legs in the last chapter I thought she was paralyzed from the waist down or something temporary but double amputation threw me sideways

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Oh my bad it's been awhile I loved the first few chapters but haven't checked recently after the update of your hiatus so I didn't notice your name

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Yeah i should work on the updates

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Yes but don't rush best storys take time to tell

*le sigh* okay, so i have been a fan of this story, but good lord you need an editor, to slow down your pacing, and if you're trying to make something seem realistic, please do some research, especially into hospitals, and laws about possession of weapons, along with the fact that crippling someone for life, and nearly killing another in collateral is a LITTLE(putting that in the nicest term possible) too far a punishment for cyber-bullying, serial killer then sure go to f**king town, but cyber-bullying? really? i get that it's a serious problem and people have committed suicide over it but still, the entire last bit of the chapter is way too extreme. so if you're going to rewrite it, then PLEASE for the love of god make it seem at least a bit better than this cheap, half assed came up with it on the fly bulls***.

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Okay, you and some other people need to fuck off. They write how they write, if you can’t handle that then don’t read it. Simple.