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Phew, I'm glad Spike's not going to get himself drowned or killed by the Dazzlings, or any of their merfolks. Now the story is really getting interesting.
Lovely chapter!
I love the H2O reference and I'm loving this story.
KO awesome chapter, Spike found his saviors from years ago and had found out that he's also married to them. It's gonna be a very difficult high school for Spike.
Nice chapter. One has to wonder how much of the Dazzling's culture will clash with that of the surface world. It will be interesting how much Spike will have to guide his new brides in ways of humanity.
BTW, since the Dazzlings are a century old, would that make the MILF's in teenage bodies?
Shenanigans abound!
Seems like kind of an awkward way to phrase that. Maybe something like "This isn't the kind of place to be doing this," or something like that.
have a previous
Yeah, but you were six. Six. Besides, there's always the possibility that others have a better swimming ability than you, even if they aren't supernatural.
Anyone else reminded of that one show, H20: Just Add Water? It was an Australian dramatic fantasy program about these girls who could turn into mermaids by coming into contact with water after going into a pool under a dormant volcano as it's illuminated by the full moon. It was kind of ridiculous, but it was still an interesting show from what I remember.
I know now's not the time, but I can't help but think about all the old people who didn't get saved just because they were getting on in their years.
Is it because unintentional antagonists want to prove to the world that mermaids exist by capturing them like in Thirteenth Year? Or is it because consuming their flesh brings about immortality if you don't turn into a monster like in Mermaid Saga?
Well Spike, there's only one thing to do. Act like Goku for the rest of your life and hope you don't botch it. Although, it'd depend on how you define "pure". Is it "pure" as in you never have ill intent or bad thoughts? Or is it "pure" in the sense that you have bad thoughts, but you'll do the right thing in the end?
Oh, okay then. I guess Spike's pure of heart, you guys!
I feel as though there should be slightly more detail. Like, some description to distinguishes the differences in how they kiss, which in turn reflect more of their personality.
Anyways, I thought this was an okay chapter. I'll see you next time.
Long, complicated, and freakin' sweet!!!
This story definitely shows promise. I will have to keep reading.
Hold it. If Spike's already betrothed to the Dazzlings, then what does that make Moondancer, Lyra, and Bob Bon? Bridesmaid?
8001868 That's the juicy part, they also start developing feelings for him.
8001873 *gulps* The Dazzlings won't be too happy about that.
8001873 Any form of punishments in accordance to mermaid law for winning hearts behind the brides' backs?
8001883 That's something you'll have to find out how it goes down the line.
8001892 ok
Other than the massive levels of jealousy around Spike, the little guy should also watch out for the likes of paranormal investigators, agents of unapproved-undersea royalty, and time-traveling cyborgs.
8005173 Don't we all
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One's enough for me, don't want to play X-Games with Tony Hawk...
They drown people who aren't pure of heart? That's kinda cruel. How exactly is pure defined? Can you act like an asshole and still be pure? Like dr.cox, dr.house, vegeta, seto Kaiba, and many many tsundere anime characters? Would they be drowned because they aren't nice on the outside?
Also, why would the mark stinging indicate him being pure? I would think it would be the opposite, if it doesn't hurt, then your pure. It hurting him just kinda seems like a punishment for being nice.
"In the water?" Spike repeated, "Impossible. If I couldn't swim out there no way any of you could."
Wha? He was six. Apparently being pure also includes being a sexist.
Anyways, I'm enjoying this story so far. But I suggest reading your stuff a few more times before posting or getting someone else (not a family member, you'll get biased feedback) to read it.
Ps: I was joking about the sexist thing
You can put this up in a group called 'Spike's many shippings' They even have an empty Spike X Dazzling folder, which is empty, but you will be the first.
Also I like this story
Spike should have an animal companion.
i really hope you update this story sooner, I love it
Another question I forgot to ask.
In this story, are Twilight and Spike brother and sister by blood? Or is it an adoptive relationship?
This reminds me of the anime "My Bride is a Mermaid".
....um....isn't that the same thing?
He recalls the faces of EVERY PERSON from a ship he rode on 7 YEARS ago?! Dang, I wish my memory was that good!
Well then, ya better hope it never rains!
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Oh, Vegeta is pure.
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Yeah, I do too.
Is this inspirerende by ''Seto no hanayome''?
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Envy is for something someone wants to have, while jealousy is for something one doesn't want to lose
So just envy would work in this scenario.
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Yeah I got the same vibes.
this is a hint for the next chapters??/
Aria.
I wonder who it is.
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some dude who owns a steamboat
Question: The Dazzlings say that mermaids are facing extinction, how many mermaids are there left?