• Member Since 4th Jul, 2012
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Colgate1211


Comments ( 12 )

Mh weird Storyline.

Actually i like it :D
Too short for me but well lets see any further chapter^^

I plan to get on the next chapter tonight. Good to see some positive feedback! (Not that i have gotten any negative aside from that thumbs down over there.... its mocking me.) :twilightangry2:

Lots of grammar mistakes and this prologue is both short and boring which don't help.

i do say. you have potential.:twilightsmile: (BTW its me Voltage)

By the way, anypony who reads this. I would be happy to see this fic spread to yur freinds, and your freinds freinds and so on (Or just your freinds...) Almost 200 veiws!

:derpyderp2: i cant wait to see how derpy fights !

heheheh... i made a good job spreading that fanfic now 30 other views for you:pinkiehappy:

:pinkiegasp: NO :raritycry: nooooooooooooooooooooo

Not bad, I like the :twistnerd: you added. This was a real emotion heavy chapter and you handled it pretty well. Keep it up!

Like i said. take your time. you make some mistakes like FLuttershy. and SHe. otherwise this story is good. you deserve a :yay:

Well, just over 500 veiws? I herby gift every veiwer a muffin! :derpytongue2:

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