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Mh weird Storyline.
Actually i like it :D
Too short for me but well lets see any further chapter^^
I plan to get on the next chapter tonight. Good to see some positive feedback! (Not that i have gotten any negative aside from that thumbs down over there.... its mocking me.)
Lots of grammar mistakes and this prologue is both short and boring which don't help.
i do say. you have potential. (BTW its me Voltage)
By the way, anypony who reads this. I would be happy to see this fic spread to yur freinds, and your freinds freinds and so on (Or just your freinds...) Almost 200 veiws!
i cant wait to see how derpy fights !
heheheh... i made a good job spreading that fanfic now 30 other views for you
Wunderbar
NO nooooooooooooooooooooo
Not bad, I like the you added. This was a real emotion heavy chapter and you handled it pretty well. Keep it up!
Like i said. take your time. you make some mistakes like FLuttershy. and SHe. otherwise this story is good. you deserve a
Well, just over 500 veiws? I herby gift every veiwer a muffin!