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Just to clear any doubts, that one thumbs up was indeed me, but at the time I made this story, I didn't realize this site allowed you to thumbs up/down your own stuff. Now that I found out about that, I can't take it back...
Hey this is pretty good. More please.
Holy shit that is just wow and as your first to! You got some real talent can't wait to see what else you got
I have by to say I loved the first chapter
MORE PLEASE MORRREEEE
No, I will not stop with my dirty mind. Plot means dat ass
The grammar seems really off in a lot of places in this chapter. It was a bit difficult to understand some sentences...
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You know shits real when it gets biblical
The writing style could use some work. It's hard to follow in some places. I hope it gets better in later chapters.
Excellent 1st story keep up the good work and I give this story a 10 out of 12 .
And please check oot my story 2 idiotic humans in equestria
I know it’s from 2016 but goddamn the jank is real.
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Such as?
I'm well aware myself that the story is in need of a rewrite, and I've already placed a future goal into rewriting much of it to reduce the jank. Which is why I'm asking since only way to improve is get feedback rather than take a long look and somehow find whatever's wrong unless its blatant.
this is really good