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Veddy nice!
Excellent work komrad!
I really hope he changes his mind, or something happens that allows him to stay human.
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Mmm, but its still a difficult choice to disagree to. Having radically anthropophagic neighboring tribe of Minotaurs, with unclear proof of how much their mythos is real and what's not, as well as having to be thrown out and forcefully exiled from a very hospitable kingdom that you've been given orders to stay in tends to take away that comfortable option, doesn't it?
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Like I said, I am hoping . I know that ultimately it is up to you, so please do what you will enjoy. It is your story.
I have to say that I'm enjoying this story. I like the idea of the character, and his backstory, along with the world building and characterization of Celestia and Luna. I came originally for an interesting original character, and stayed because you conveyed a story that kept me attached. To the point where I say down and read all these chapters so far in one sitting.
I was admittedly wary of the multiple minds in one body scenario, but I'll confess that I haven't seen someone tackle a character like that in, well, years. Probably since back in 2013-14. But, I feel like you have come to a successful balance on how to handle this character type, and make them both believable, relatable, and interesting. The fact you fit this character in, and can keep the story moving at a steady pace, along with giving details to more characters leads me to believe that this story is going to be a very, very good read.
So, in essence, I'll be looking forward to future captures and progression to this story. You're an author with a good head on their shoulders and a great creative mind. Keep up the good work.
You didn’t entertained the idea that if he changes his body into a pony they will have to change their battle style , all his skills would be useless because he will have to retrained, and if he isn’t a unicorn his sword is less than a stick.
I'm willing to bet this sounded like that one time Erza fell in a hole.