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9562618
I've found that in these sort of things, it's best to wait for things to be revealed. Perhaps the author has a plan for this, perhaps they do not. Reserve your outrage for until after things have been set in stone. You may just end up liking what the author decides to do. You may not. It's not your story regardless, and making a fit over this while it's still up in the air just makes you look childish. Also, please don't take this as an insult, I'm really just trying to point out to you that you should exercise some patience and temper your expectations
2000 years later
9687839
Yeah, I'm aware just how desperately needed I need an editor. However the greatest problem is finding one whos willing to tolerate, at best, the length of each of these chapters. And that results in the clear sign that this is due to be re-written, and even then I'm unsure and doubtful anyone would still bother, even if I paid them 10$ per paragraph.
9691771
So they just take him out of the castle for a bit, give him a vacation. If Equestria doesn't know there's an alicorn, how could a temporary representative? Though given how you've portrayed the ponies' secret keeping, it might not end well.
9692768
Sometimes simple and delayed solutions only complicate matters, and like lying the more you do it the more it snowballs until it starts destroying things.
Equestria may not know there's another alicorn out and about but there's clearly word that there is a 'someone' in the Castle that both Princesses are hiding and excusing and dodging the questions. Once that reaches another country, they're going to start pushing for answers, and I portrayed the gryphons to be paranoid enough to consider that an excuse to say that Equestria's hiding either a secret General of a secret army or even a super soldier, even if its unfounded, they'll still consider it.
Also on top of that I did say that the Yaks were capable of sensing illusion in use.
As for the secret keeping I portrayed, its just the Mane Six trying and failing to hide secrets from each other, they're terrible holding those types of things from themselves. Other ponies, they'll likely succeed, but with the other Bearers, not really.
Also it wouldn't be long until he gets bored of being sent away on a 'vacation', before he starts buggering it up and revealing himself. Better to reveal soon rather than have it happen by accident.
9692780
Another easy solution would be get him out of town when Yaks are nearby, and just have him posed as a general advisor. Then, they have time to make up an actual enterance for the 'new' alicorn after the advisor gets sacked for something or other.
9693164
Easy, but loaded. As that would've depended upon if he wanted to be an advisor, or if they need another advisor considering they already have Forward Bastion to converse and debate with. If he decided not to be, there wouldn't be much reason to push and force the solution.
Besides, they had already planned out on how to give a proper introduction.
9688081
If you’re looking for an editor I personally wouldn’t mind helping out. The longer lengths are a bonus for me.
9757304
Yeah but this time its nostalgia and 'moral support', just one of those things where you accidentally placed something and now you don't want to move it.
Welp, coming back, I still find myself enjoying the story. Looking forward to things as they come to head, and what comes after.
10,000 years later
10666333
More like a few more minutes... Just waiting for my friend to finish up looking through the chapter before I post