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This story has caught my attention, and I eagerly await the next chapter. Excellent thus far.
This is a-fucking-mazing
Also, first.
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Sadly, Pandominus beat you to it.
You have me intrigued. Also I love that armor and need to know where you found it.
By my own beard, this is just glorious and now the suspense of the wait for the next chapter.
I would travel to the future to read this but since it has been a forbidden art I will just have to wait.
Amazing chapter, with the exception of minor typos. Well done.
This has my interest very much. I don't know much about whatever this is crossed over with (assuming it is) but I do like the Christian part of it. Can't wait to see where this goes.
7869347 aye, I waited awhile before I read this and I regret not reading it sooner, it's very well written and has a habit of making me want more.
7863431 Update? Please?!
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Workin on it.
7924947 perfect... *does evil mastermind hand wringing*
Alright, I'll admit that got a chuckle out of me.
Heh, what he is wearing as armor on torso are cuirass and plackart (lower part), not a breastplate.
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Thank you for correcting me on that.
As much as I wish I were and as much as I listen to Shadiversity, I'm no armor expert
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Didn’t even notice it before you pointed it out
Bruh.
Shameless page break, very funny in the roll eyes haha sense
it’s like he finally comes out of stone that exact moment and just says will you just shut the fuck up already!
Yeah, first chapter after the prologue and I’m struggling to read this. I’m getting caught on mistakes almost every sentence, having to re-read them multiple times before moving on.
The idea of the story seems interesting, and I liked the character as they seemed to be portrayed in the prologue. I also liked how you went with the more “accurate” depiction of the Angel (why they have so many wings is anyone’s guess, let alone how they all fit together on one body). But with all the grammar mistakes I’m finding the story unreadable.
I’d highly recommend you get an editor to go through your story, because while it is possible to read through this, as evidenced by the people who have and the fact you got Featured, it’s incredibly frustrating to do so.