After the defeat of the caribou and the toppling of their empire, the citizens of Equestria try to pick up the pieces. However, the road to recovery is not as easy for some as it is for others.
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you know what makes me wonder, in this setting how many sicknesses have spread. With this much intimate contact pandemics should be a very big worry. Along with a rash of suicides and murder, loss from war, and infertility brought on though putting object in to holes that can not fit into; Equstria might have a population problem in the future.
You know for still being a story in the FoE universe i still enjoyed this opening. I've always been one who hated the FoE universe and everything it entailed. There were certain elements of it that, while other of the master/slave based universes in the fandom did, FoE always felt too harsh and there was almost never likability for any character, save for probably the Bruised Apples timeline. But seeing an aftereffects one where the universe has changed and is trying to reset itself is nice for what it is. There are going to be bad effects and a lot of mental damage that isn't going to be easily repaired if repaired at all and it's interesting to see this from a victims point as she and the female sex as a whole recovers from what has happened.
Really really good on you Schorl! Definitely going to follow this one as close as your EqTS stories.
While I enjoyed this chapter, I was expecting something...different for the sequal. I was hoping to see how the mane six and their friends were recovering. Like Fluttershy coming to terms with what has happened, Spike trying to come to terms with his behavior, and the rest of Ponyville trying to find some sense of normal again and trying to move on if they can.
Again, not bad
7770023 funny, I just assume there's no STDs in sex stories
Why do I want to read this...
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AFAIK, Schorl has plans for After-FoE stories about all of the Mane Six and will write them later.
That said, not sure if you might be interested in that, but Fluttershy will also appear in my FoE story, The Freeville Chronicles. There are still a few more chapters to come before I introduce her though.
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Because it's very well-written.
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I'll take a look at it some time in the future. But I do hope you understand what I'm getting at. Trixie was only briefly mentioned in one chapter
7770023 Oh very much so. Bodies are not meant for the abuse the Caribou liked to routinely put their slaves through, not even to mention how rampant certain STDs must have become.
This was very good Schorl, and you have, as usual, done something most cannon Fall stories don't even attempt: show genuine emotional trauma brought about by this horrible treatment. Reminds me of my last conversation I had with NCN, in which he stated Fall of Equestria was a tragedy, when it obviously isn't. It's rape porn. This on the other hand? This is, or at least has elements of, tragedy.
Regardless, I have to say I enjoyed this very much, and I look forward to future chapters.
7772340 Alex Warlorn did a wonderful series about the PTSD ponies would suffer from being discorded. The show ne er touched on it. When writing that stuff is strictly optional
This chapter reminded me of this song, somewhat.
It depicts military veterans, but you can easily replace the soldiers with mares. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o_l4Ab5FRwM
7775265 You know, that song actually make me wanna read this story, thank you for that.
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Thank you, but I do hope you understand that while I do intend to write about the Mane six in my "After fall" stories, I might not make many of them the center of attention. While there is potential for stories about their personal recovery, I do not believe that every universe, especially FoE, should revolve around them. Thus, when we learn about what one of the Mane Six are up to, it will probably be seen vicariously through another person. For example, Bruised Apples was AJ-centric to a degree, but the story was more Big Mac's than hers, and for the most part I wanted it to be that way from the start. I hope that isn't too much of a problem... and besides, it's not like they won't get their moments. I just think that other characters need to be given a bit more spotlight, especially after the tragedy of the fall.
so, is Miss Harshwhinny supposed to be terrible? Cause I don't think tough love is the proper solution to Trixie there
more please.
'After Fall'? Certainly more original than 'fetish land' :P
looking forward to the updates. Albeit one nitpick being that if you have a proofreader, they are failing.
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Well if you see any errors feel free to list them. I will gladly make edits if needed.
I have no idea how I managed to miss a sequel to Bruised Apples for so long, but I'm glad I've finally discovered it exists.
Wow.
I already had enough reason to Genocide this universe and I keep getting more
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Might I ask what the issue is? If you have read this chapter to the end, you would know this story has the caribou defeated, and the mares all liberated, so I'm curious what the problem is.