I'm not sure if the super short chapters work? Chapter 11 is only 191 words, it's basically 3 paragraphs. I think this would read better if some chapters were combined?
7497223 Are you following the links? The reason for the shorter chapters are because they're very transitionary, with Button simply getting to where he is needed for things to happen, and then you're given a choice as to what to do with the area. It's about letting you interact with the world, rather than walking to get somewhere, for the most part at least.
Edit: Also, for a CYOA, combining chapters is literally impossible without messing something up.
7497768 *thinks about it, my eyes growing steadily wider as I think about it, before beginning to scream*
The tentative word count estimate I give is about 60k. This is due to having six main paths you can see now, one more due to the circus, extra bits due to me wanting to make time passing matter (hence the one that says the link is not forgotten about), which opens up a minimum of at least 3-4 different additional mini paths.
So I literally cannot give you an estimate. I can only say that one death should be in each update of 10k words.
7500971 Yes, but it was one of those sorts of things I hadn't thought about. Not only that, but to have a whole new chapter just to take it out, when chapters like no, or the choice to leave Sniper Elite, are just to allow you a preview before you dedicate yourself, I didn't want to artificially pad the overall word count like that.
why isn't there a group for choose your own path stories? I found another one here, but I've yet to find more on this site. Can anyone recommend one to me?
This sounds very interesting will be keeping an eye on this one.
I'm not sure if the super short chapters work? Chapter 11 is only 191 words, it's basically 3 paragraphs. I think this would read better if some chapters were combined?
7497223 Are you following the links? The reason for the shorter chapters are because they're very transitionary, with Button simply getting to where he is needed for things to happen, and then you're given a choice as to what to do with the area. It's about letting you interact with the world, rather than walking to get somewhere, for the most part at least.
Edit: Also, for a CYOA, combining chapters is literally impossible without messing something up.
7497737 This is only for one night.
Just curious, but how many chapters will this have?
7497768 *thinks about it, my eyes growing steadily wider as I think about it, before beginning to scream*
The tentative word count estimate I give is about 60k. This is due to having six main paths you can see now, one more due to the circus, extra bits due to me wanting to make time passing matter (hence the one that says the link is not forgotten about), which opens up a minimum of at least 3-4 different additional mini paths.
So I literally cannot give you an estimate. I can only say that one death should be in each update of 10k words.
7497806 Drained dry, hence why he started to become fatigued like he did. Also, Shaliscry's name is a hint to who she ends up actually being.
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7497819 It shouldn't be all that surprising, as the same commissioner of Snu Snu is for this one.
7497231 Oh okay, now it makes a lot more sense!
7498163 I hope you can enjoy it now!
Isn't the reason they're here is because he won?
7499074 Yep, sorry, will fix it.
7500971 Yes, but it was one of those sorts of things I hadn't thought about. Not only that, but to have a whole new chapter just to take it out, when chapters like no, or the choice to leave Sniper Elite, are just to allow you a preview before you dedicate yourself, I didn't want to artificially pad the overall word count like that.
7501322 oh, lol. Kk.
why isn't there a group for choose your own path stories?
I found another one here, but I've yet to find more on this site. Can anyone recommend one to me?
7518821 I've actually done one before this one called Monster's Curse.
7522241 That's because this is incomplete at the moment. And... unfortunately, the next batch will only be having one link added. Sorry!