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SkyDreamer


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And so it begins.

I've been wanting to write a choose-your-own-adventure story for a while, but the prospect of so many threads always seemed rather daunting to me.

Then I took my Undergraduate exam finals, and suddenly everything else seemed ridiculously easy by comparison. :rainbowlaugh:

Heh, all of your stories have something to do with impregnation :pinkiegasp: Not that I mind, though :raritywink::pinkiecrazy:

I vote for Pinkie option here; I feel that if our main character had to inform Pastel of their predicament, it could potentially create some interesting situations. Plus, Pinkie could always unintentionally blurt something out if she were privy to the problem :pinkiecrazy:

Oh, look! I choose which option I want to see expanded and it is instantly written after I add the reply :pinkiegasp:

MAGIC :twilightsmile:

Go with Twilight. It'll be safer, especially if we run into that zebra stallion again.

Althought going with Twilight would be the more sensible option, Mahogany seems like an adventurous and brave little pony, she doesn't need a guide to walk places.
Volunteer to go by yourself it is! :yay:

I will definitely be following this story. Good job so far!

I can only imagine how many ponies are going to be purposfully trying to get Mahogany impregslaved. :trixieshiftright:

... I... may or may not be one of them.:twilightblush:

Liked and followed. Please... continue.

Definitely an interesting story prospect, and one that I find very tempting to follow. curse my pervy self.
Since there are few choices to vote for you to write next, I'd say you should make the second choice in the opening next, or maybe put more options on how to start, like maybe asking Pastel about it, or a good old "there's only one way to find out if it's real, so let's go have sex!" option.

You can even write up a full chapter if you like, and I'll probably include it.

:trixieshiftleft: You tempt me. :trixieshiftright:

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These options are now listed.
I particularly like possibilities that the second choice presents :pinkiecrazy:

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pfffffffffffffffft:rainbowlaugh:
Now I'm even more tempted to ask if I can write a chapter and see where it goes.:raritywink:

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Sure, go ahead. I'm not promising it'll end up being a full thread, it could end up being left as a dead-end guest chapter, and if you write for an option that's listed, I may finish the chapter for it before you do. But I'll at least make an effort to include it somehow, if you or anyone else makes the effort to write one. :twilightsmile:

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Might try something for the third starting option then, if only to see how it goes and what becomes of it.
I'm not gonna say I want to write your story, but I do love how a good story grows even better because of outside contributions.

Agree to visit the Expert with Princess Twilight

Yeah...

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Yeah, don't worry, despite what I said, I actually do want to see people write chapters for this.
I just wanted to make sure you knew that it's possible that nothing may actually become of it, a fair-warning sort of thing.

Meh, if she has wings and a horn and calls herself a princess then she must be trustworthy and reliable enough, right? :unsuresweetie: I'd take a risk and Trust Twilight on this one :twilightsmile:

Hm, this seems interesting...

To answer the author's note: should I give ideas then?
I need a few more delicate details to kick my imagination into overcharge so I can create ideas of the highest quality and enough quantity.

But now let's see what other choices we already has.

-Zeph

Option 4: Screw one of your brother's trusted friends at the party.

Aside from a couple spelling fixes and canon-repairs, this is pretty much entirely on Belgerum.
And frankly, I'm pretty damn impressed.

Props to him for guessing I was gonna have something appear in the middle of the horseshoe, though his original call was the stallion's face.
Nothing against that idea, I just think a cutie mark is a bit more individual by design.

Also, to anyone who's unclear, this story is anthro. So the ponies stand on two legs, have hands, boobs, and wear clothes.

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I'm currently doing something similar, and while I agree it's a daunting task, the planning and writing is all very fun to do. :pinkiehappy:

Just gotta make sure it's done well.

10/10 for the rhyming

There should totally be an option to kidnap and rape a stallion, and then become his slave. Because irony.

3's the most weird, messed-up one. I'm choosing it.

I'm honestly thinking that this is some kind of sick, secret message about the world hidden in comedy.

Yeah, she does sound rather lonely...

Doesn't she have any friends? (Damn it, it just had to be Zecora. There aren't many ponies who's loneliness would distract me in a situation like this, but she's one of them.)

HOW THE BUCK DO YOU WRITE SO FAST!
I suppose they are small chapters, but wow!

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Yeah, the small chapters are the only reason I can get so much done. Plus the fact I can hop between threads, saving me from getting bored.

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My inclusion of zebras in this story is going to slowly drive me insane, I guarantee it.

Nappa: Vegeta, what does the scouter say about his writing speed?
Vegeta: (removes his scouter and crushes it) It's over 9000!
Nappa: What, 9000? There's no way that can be right! Can it?

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If the ride's moving too fast for you, just head over to any of my other stories. You ought to find a much more relaxed pace there, much to the readers' frustration :twilightblush:

4520459 I think the speed is great! I'm used to stories where the author waits weeks before updating, so this is a nice change

Go ahead and have him clown around for a bit! XD

Edit: Also, you are doing great! Love the pacing!

As an older brother, I know I'd rather be dead in the ground, of those two options, but that doesn't usually stop a heart so dead set.

Well... If having sex will bind you to a life of servitude, and you're not married, a family member is probably the best option. Just... You should probably pick, like, a distant cousin or something.

Mahogany's got this she won't let that happen. BTW HATE THAT ZEBRA.

Either pick skimpy underwear or go commando.
I know she doesn't have any, but just make it seem a little torn and you're good to go.

Strange... I don't think all this liquid from my crotch is mine...

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