Aaargh! Worst time for a chiffhanger. Great chapter though. Doomsday Spike was insane. Fluttershy stay being the best pony with her ability to see through bs. And that speech at the end was heart wrenching.
8431003 Bucking finally, and it's so good to be back brother. You know I always got your back if you ever need me for anything, You're one of my best and oldest friends on here so it's great to see you're still here and writing, never let that die out. I'm reading your Spike 'rape' story, can't spell it but I'm reading the entire thing again. I hate you so much for it since it makes me want to cry yet it's so hard to put down.
8431272 For you and me both my old friend, but I'm very glad you're still at it. Can't wait until you update Burning World, that story is brutal. I can't wait to write ponies again.
We got some serious Berzerk stuff right here
But I want it now
Holy shit...
Didn’t this used to be a three-parter?
This was so worth the wait. Awesome.
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Had to break it down into a few more chapters, otherwise, it would’ve been too huge.
Aaargh! Worst time for a chiffhanger. Great chapter though. Doomsday Spike was insane. Fluttershy stay being the best pony with her ability to see through bs. And that speech at the end was heart wrenching.
.........DAMN.
Welp, that was one flustercuck of a battle.
Nice chapter, can't wait for more.
‘back as a tainted vassal’ - vessel
‘we’re more then’ - were
‘the units hold on their place clutching their weapons tight’ - held their place, clutching
‘Blood Talons draw his twin swords’ - drew
‘One quick glance around she saw’ - something hit cut off here
‘point she draws blood’ - drew
‘sure that will be destroyed’ - that it will be
‘while she draws another’ - drew
‘another embed itself on his’ - embedded in his
‘tip came on the back of his skull through his left eye’ - came out the back
‘With shouting orders’ shouted
‘death uón them’ - upon
‘there were still many falling victims to the’ - still many victims falling to the
‘the efforts of the Luna, the’ - the efforts of Luna, the
‘Bearers take full notice’ - took
‘that hit the monster on its chest’ - in the chest
Hot damn, that how you write a great fight and a awesome chapter.
Oh man that end speech by Skyla and Flurry is heart renching. Cant wait for the next chapter.
The feels are heavy now. So sad that they couldn't restore Spike, Fluttershy is the mistress of seeing truths. Can't wait for your next chapter.
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Thanks. Fixed.
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Who says it has been defeated? *nudge nudge**wink wink*
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Most definitely.
An epic fight, only to have two small children tip the balance.
wow! this is amazing
OH BUCK YOU!!!! Again, are you bucking kidding me? Damn it man! BUCK!!!!!!!!!! I love this story. It's great to be back.
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Glad to see you back, bro!
Edit: OMFG! I can finally reply to you!
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Bucking finally, and it's so good to be back brother. You know I always got your back if you ever need me for anything, You're one of my best and oldest friends on here so it's great to see you're still here and writing, never let that die out. I'm reading your Spike 'rape' story, can't spell it but I'm reading the entire thing again. I hate you so much for it since it makes me want to cry yet it's so hard to put down.
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Writing has been extremely slow for me right now due to work, but hopefully I will update soon. Good to see ya, my brother.
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For you and me both my old friend, but I'm very glad you're still at it. Can't wait until you update Burning World, that story is brutal. I can't wait to write ponies again.