Celestia, when she was young, had been sent to an unknown world completely surrounded by war. There, she befriended a young Orcling from the Blackrock Clan, named "Grongal" After many years, and a war at their doorstep, her friend return.
FUCK YES!!!!! Just..... Fuck Yes!!!! Pure UNADULTERATED badassery!!!! The entitled little shit getting his just desserts really did it for me. Can't wait for the next chapter man. Keep it up!!!!
Guess who?! The more accurate question is guess when! It's 11:20 again! (I really need to stop reading these so late, but they're just so awesome! )
(Beginning) Jut how I thought they would all react! Still funny reading it that way though!
(Half way thorough the chapter) I am sensing a positive role model here... Not sure why...
(Little shit finds out what karma is) Really. I'm serious! Positive role model here! Concerned for friends. Always keeps promises. Complete badass! Just a tad less violence and I would be parading him around as best man err... person in all the multiverse! Plus a genuinely good shipping with 'Tia
Now I just have to wait another week... You've found a new fan my good author. And when I become a fan. Well I don't have a complete shelf of an ongoing book series with the next book preordered for nothing! (Also getting through Fallout Equestria Project Horizons in roughly 2 weeks might be a sign of a tad bit obsession )
7425987 so? i don't really care to know spoilers that much, just takes the fun out of the wait. so no, you didn't get me...
also, i only hope to see that, but you are the writer, so i will see how you continue this in the next chapter. if it is something else that doesn't continue this subject, we will see something else that will progress the story forward.
7426250Didnt say I did. Just me having my Madman Fun x3 but really, I'm going to be taking this at a decent pace. Not wanting to burn myself out. After all, many other stories also require my attention.
His victim screamed, even as Grongal dragged him, by the broken leg, towards Canterlot Castle. Spirits Lifter simply leaning against the door frame of his pub, lighting up a cigarette as he watched them leave. “I’m going to enjoy our new commander.” The stallion said, smoke coming out of his mouth and nostrils. “Better get in touch with my old connections… He’ll need all the help we can give him.” With that, the former black ops agent turned information broker went back into the pub, hands in both pockets.
I like Grongal.
I hope Guilded Crest's father is in the next chapter. It would be glorious.
Not bad.
FUCK YES!!!!! Just..... Fuck Yes!!!! Pure UNADULTERATED badassery!!!! The entitled little shit getting his just desserts really did it for me. Can't wait for the next chapter man. Keep it up!!!!
Need More Of This More Fast!!!
Savage as fuck. Love em more please
Guess who?! The more accurate question is guess when! It's 11:20 again! (I really need to stop reading these so late, but they're just so awesome! )
(Beginning) Jut how I thought they would all react! Still funny reading it that way though!
(Half way thorough the chapter) I am sensing a positive role model here... Not sure why...
(Little shit finds out what karma is) Really. I'm serious! Positive role model here! Concerned for friends. Always keeps promises. Complete badass! Just a tad less violence and I would be parading him around as best man err... person in all the multiverse! Plus a genuinely good shipping with 'Tia
Now I just have to wait another week...
You've found a new fan my good author. And when I become a fan. Well I don't have a complete shelf of an ongoing book series with the next book preordered for nothing! (Also getting through Fallout Equestria Project Horizons in roughly 2 weeks might be a sign of a tad bit obsession )
7425216 this must happen!!!!
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*chuckling a bit* Oh, you two make it waaaaay too easy for me. I'm not confirming or denying what may happen in the next Chapter.
7425987 so? i don't really care to know spoilers that much, just takes the fun out of the wait. so no, you didn't get me...
also, i only hope to see that, but you are the writer, so i will see how you continue this in the next chapter. if it is something else that doesn't continue this subject, we will see something else that will progress the story forward.
7426250 Didnt say I did. Just me having my Madman Fun x3 but really, I'm going to be taking this at a decent pace. Not wanting to burn myself out. After all, many other stories also require my attention.
7426257 true. have a song to listen while you're at it.
also maybe this playlist of mine.
God I love orcs, chaotic good all the way!!!
A protagonist that isn't a pansy!?
I thought they were only a ancient legend in this day and age. It's so beautiful to see one in person...
Damn! And that's why you don't tick off a ork!
7445645 http://www.fimfiction.net/story/344657/dont-get-cocky
DAYM RIGHT! A real man would escort the lady home safely and lock the door on their way out! Without hurting them!
Damn!! Bartender dude just got badass.
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indeed
The numbers Mason. What do they mean?