Celestia, when she was young, had been sent to an unknown world completely surrounded by war. There, she befriended a young Orcling from the Blackrock Clan, named "Grongal" After many years, and a war at their doorstep, her friend return.
7555552 You just had a race of creatures wiped off the map and an entire region glassed... Kinda sticks in the mind a bit more than an alternative version of a character from a story many here haven't even read yet. That's speaking from personal experience.
7561154Which was something rather expected to happen. Was it seriously believed Grongal wouldn't follow through with his threat? If you asked me, Talon's appearance should have been a bit more shocking than an Orc doing what he said he would.
RvB thank you very much. All of my creativeness when it comes to writing is based off references. One project I have has roughly twenty references planned so its nice to see I'm not weird by referencing things. BTW, awesome chapter. Can't wait for the next ass kicking. And don't apologize about the time it took. I can get 5000 words written, edited and published in a far longer time.
Ooh, looks like Chrysalis felt the burn there and now her plans are in flames!
7553706 ............... You would go there.
Damn....
all i could do after reading that ending was laugh manically
7553801 Mhm... If only she knew it wasn't Celestia issuing that ultimatum. When Gron gives a threat, he carries it out.
Savage as fuck
Gotta get dem RvB references :^)
Knight... you missed a spot
7554893 Got it. Only human xD
I guess you could say this chapter was extremely "well done"
awesome chapter
who's up for BBQ
Geeeeez, so much focus on the ending, and no one noticed the Alternate Talon........ Talk about a waste of time.
Could i get some BBQ sauce with my extra crispy changeling?
7555552 You just had a race of creatures wiped off the map and an entire region glassed... Kinda sticks in the mind a bit more than an alternative version of a character from a story many here haven't even read yet. That's speaking from personal experience.
7561154 Which was something rather expected to happen. Was it seriously believed Grongal wouldn't follow through with his threat? If you asked me, Talon's appearance should have been a bit more shocking than an Orc doing what he said he would.
7554824 Someone who got the reference!!! XD
7561606 Now you just need an Uncle Qrow. :3
RvB thank you very much. All of my creativeness when it comes to writing is based off references. One project I have has roughly twenty references planned so its nice to see I'm not weird by referencing things. BTW, awesome chapter. Can't wait for the next ass kicking. And don't apologize about the time it took. I can get 5000 words written, edited and published in a far longer time.
Sweet baby Jesus now that's how ya end a chapter, great job enjoying the story so much keep it up!!
Let's hope Grongal doesn't become the next Garrosh.
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Me please