Is it wrong of me that I wanted Twilight to drop on for a surprise visit right as theyou first started getting heavy? Cockblocked by your own daughter...
That was amazing! Not just hot-- and it was very hot-- but funny and adorable. It really came across well that they had a long relationship that was comfortable as well as active, like the renewed energy was just giving them more oomph to long term love that was there and hadn't faded when their bodies started to falter. If I could thumbs up again, I totally would.
This is my stuff, right here. This and that kink are all well and good as the mood calls for it, but for me, there's nothing quite like hot, passionate love-making all by itself, between two ponies (or people) who know each other inside out, and love each other enough that the whole experience is as rewarding for both parties as possible.
7267087 Which, incidentally, is one of the main reasons why "artificial" porn like this feels so much more "real" than pizza-delivery-with-extra-sausage-style "real" porn. Fuckin' sucks, yo.
7266999 You and me both, I would love to see how they react to seeing their parents young again and if enough time goes by to see Velvet heavy with foals, I think it would be cool to see Velvet carry two foals this time around, twins but one a colt and one a filly, of course it would be even better if they were born as Alicorns just like Flurry Heart was.
7274253 Basically I find well-written (like this) fictional sex between made up characters a lot more satisfying than anything I have encountered so far containing real-life human beings.
7274325 You know something is not alright with the world when the writing of sex between fictional characters is better than "real porn" or hell, even real life sex. Problems after problems, not this then that with the whole porn thing.
Reminded me of the early days of Bronies fandom when trying to explain to your family and or friends why you watch porn is better than trying to explain why you watch MLP:FiM. Do other people really have any right to tell you what to watch or what you are allowed to like? NO.
The 2 isn't really related in anything but the fact that there is something wrong with the world.
7266699 Sex is nothing if not embarrassing noises and horrible, horrible facial expressions.
This whole plan really does have the potential for disaster; I hope they can keep their foal(s) out of the spotlight enough as to not ruin them with the expectations of others.
A youthful Velvet was lying leisurely on their king-sized bed, sipping at some wine while looking straight at him. Enchanted candles were lit all around the room, and the air was warm like a midsummer evening. Set in her mane was a violet—the flower he’d given on their first date—and she was swishing her tail back and forth, fanning the scent of her heat with a come-hither stare. She was wearing a pair of azure panties emblazoned with his cutie mark; and a small fan was going with a steady whirr, its gentle breeze directed at the door.
So it begins
And the award for 'Least Sexy Sound Made During Sex' goes to...!
But for real, this was great. Can't wait to see where this goes next.
Is it wrong of me that I wanted Twilight to drop on for a surprise visit right as theyou first started getting heavy? Cockblocked by your own daughter...
That was amazing! Not just hot-- and it was very hot-- but funny and adorable. It really came across well that they had a long relationship that was comfortable as well as active, like the renewed energy was just giving them more oomph to long term love that was there and hadn't faded when their bodies started to falter. If I could thumbs up again, I totally would.
That was a damn good chapter. Keep up the good work!
Holy hell, that was hot.
This is my stuff, right here. This and that kink are all well and good as the mood calls for it, but for me, there's nothing quite like hot, passionate love-making all by itself, between two ponies (or people) who know each other inside out, and love each other enough that the whole experience is as rewarding for both parties as possible.
7267087 Which, incidentally, is one of the main reasons why "artificial" porn like this feels so much more "real" than pizza-delivery-with-extra-sausage-style "real" porn. Fuckin' sucks, yo.
7266999 You and me both, I would love to see how they react to seeing their parents young again and if enough time goes by to see Velvet heavy with foals, I think it would be cool to see Velvet carry two foals this time around, twins but one a colt and one a filly, of course it would be even better if they were born as Alicorns just like Flurry Heart was.
Excellent chapter, great work.
Read: She was wearing a pair of azure panties that said, 'Property of Night Light.'
Except much more intimate.
7267092 Dude LOL that just made my day.
7273732 I aim to please.
7267092
It took me a little bit to dissect what you were trying to say here, but I think I got it. Thank you for the compliment.
7274253 Basically I find well-written (like this) fictional sex between made up characters a lot more satisfying than anything I have encountered so far containing real-life human beings.
And yeah, it's a compliment.
7274325 You know something is not alright with the world when the writing of sex between fictional characters is better than "real porn" or hell, even real life sex. Problems after problems, not this then that with the whole porn thing.
Reminded me of the early days of Bronies fandom when trying to explain to your family and or friends why you watch porn is better than trying to explain why you watch MLP:FiM. Do other people really have any right to tell you what to watch or what you are allowed to like? NO.
The 2 isn't really related in anything but the fact that there is something wrong with the world.
7274253 are you still continuing this?
Yes. I've had some real life things crop up, but I'll still be finishing this up. I'll be doing a chapter of another one of my stories first, though.
let me guess
they end up having twins ?
Love this, I cant wait to see what happens next.
7266699 Sex is nothing if not embarrassing noises and horrible, horrible facial expressions.
This whole plan really does have the potential for disaster; I hope they can keep their foal(s) out of the spotlight enough as to not ruin them with the expectations of others.
Just got done with this! So romantic~ ♥
I like the fan.
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I AM the fan.