Hmm... most curious. The first story squicked me just a bit, because of the prison rape aspect of it, but I admit to being a bit prudish. It was nevertheless interesting, and I found the description of Changeling biology and genitalia to be the sort of crunchy detail that I always find fun.
As a story, it was intriguing. As clop, well, it didn't do anything for me, as such, but then I am not certain it was supposed to?
Not bad at all. You have a talent for this, and I urge you to continue. Exploring your limits and what you're capable of is always a good thing for writers
I'm trying to picture the details, but just can't seem to reconcile it right now; I guess there are worse things than trying to visualize changeling genitalia. Now I'll have some context for the full changeling story.
Interesting insight on the differences in mindset between species.
I found myself trying to figure out the evolutionary process behind the anatomy, but then realised that in a fantasy world the changelings are as likely to have been created as evolved.
The holejob thing at the beginning made me uneasy, but it always does - there are many painful examples against pushing your body parts into holes that can't be stretched...
Oh, that ending is just the cutest! It's really neat how you get a d'aaaawww out of a reader using such a matter-of-fact, sterile-sounding inquest report. He's pardoned, they're married, squee!
Like the idea!
Edit: first!
That was pretty good
You should continue this.
This is going to be interesting.
Yeah! This is good.
A bit... strange. Interesting, though
Very unlike any other clop fic I have ever read. Very intelligent, as a matter of fact.
reminded me of tiarawhy's chrysalis flash game.
Very nice.
Neat ending!
Hmm... most curious. The first story squicked me just a bit, because of the prison rape aspect of it, but I admit to being a bit prudish. It was nevertheless interesting, and I found the description of Changeling biology and genitalia to be the sort of crunchy detail that I always find fun.
As a story, it was intriguing. As clop, well, it didn't do anything for me, as such, but then I am not certain it was supposed to?
Not bad at all. You have a talent for this, and I urge you to continue. Exploring your limits and what you're capable of is always a good thing for writers
The ending made me feel good
>Stallion brains were designed to work in only mode at a time
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I'm trying to picture the details, but just can't seem to reconcile it right now; I guess there are worse things than trying to visualize changeling genitalia. Now I'll have some context for the full changeling story.
That was one of the most "Well, I think that might be a happy ending...maybe," moments I've ever had.
Upside: All the mad interspecies sex you can shake a stick at and you're not in prison!
Downside: Hope you like medical researchers poking and prodding you a lot.
I would like to see this become a full story, chapters and all.
This made me smile
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Interesting......
a full story out of that would be really...cute/hnnng
Well shit now I want to know what happens :T
this little plotbunny could be made into a story
Interesting insight on the differences in mindset between species.
I found myself trying to figure out the evolutionary process behind the anatomy, but then realised that in a fantasy world the changelings are as likely to have been created as evolved.
The holejob thing at the beginning made me uneasy, but it always does - there are many painful examples against pushing your body parts into holes that can't be stretched...
Oh, that ending is just the cutest! It's really neat how you get a d'aaaawww out of a reader using such a matter-of-fact, sterile-sounding inquest report. He's pardoned, they're married, squee!
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Ha.
Damn! That was hot!