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Well, there won't be a lack of things to talk about between David and Celestia tonight
The boner in my heart throbs
the song 'Don't Worry About Me' by Frances remijds me of how celestia protected luna and how celestia hides her feelings and thoughts from others.
So, we now have:
Luna, who is locked in as his first lover.
Celestia, who is most likely going to be his second.
His best friend Cherry, who still has feelings for him.
Applejack, who developed feelings for him after he saved her life.
And also Twilight, who he cares for enough that he was willing to become intimate with her to help her, and whom will most likely come to question her own feelings for him after a visit to Cadence, the princess of shipping.
...Please let that last one happen. There's a noticeable deficit of quality human x Twilight romance on this site and it's driving me crazy!
Just a little bit of pony instinct Info; startling or surprising a pony with any old instincts perhaps left even through evolution, could result in a swift kick to whomever is directly behind and the cause of said surprise. :ouch:
Good work though. I look forward every week to reading this.
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So true! Every time David has done something stupid by surprising his gentle hosts I've wanted for him to get kicked. However, I also wanted the protagonist to live through the first story, so he got a few passes. I'll even go ahead and say that the princesses are a bit more "in control" of their reflexes. Now if it was a younger mare... this always comes to mind.
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I feel your pain.
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Beautiful song.
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I can only imagine. Seriously, though, that's a terrible case of priapism you've got-- 3 days and 5 hours (unless it's still going). Please seek medical attention, I don't know if you'll make it to Tuesday.
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So much talking! It's like this whole thing is written in words or something! Less talk, more action!
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I am wondering. In other stories when the human helped his friend or special someone with their heat cycle, believing that they were incompatible with each other as far as conception go. Only to find out later that they are compatible and there is a baby on the way.
Is that situation gonna happen here, or are you gonna have humans and ponies truly be incompatible?
I myself, and I'm sure other readers, are curious about this.
Very good story overall. And looking forward to the upcoming chapters.
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Thank you so much for your kind words!
Unfortunately, I cannot be so kind. To spare others, I won't reveal plot elements in the comment section.
However, if you or anyone else would like answers to questions, please drop me a PM and I'll try to oblige.
Sincerely,
DA
Calling it now, Twilight is preggers.
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In this story and in many others, a Human is incompatible with a pony...
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I want to say one word to you.
Just one word.
Are you listening?
Plastics.
Wait. Magic, I meant magic!