Nightmare Moon's returned and Twilight captured. In order to survive she must sacrifice everything
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Chapter Ten and this is probably the first wham chapter in the entire fic. Not much of a wham I shall admit, but still a minor one nonetheless. As per usual, critiques would be epic.
Now you've done it Nightmare Moon...
Ah I remember this, Fluttershy and that guard, I thought nothing of it at the time, but it sort of does foreshadow later awesomeness. Maybe not as massive a "wham" compared to later scenes but still a perfectly respectable moment.
This is really starting to remind me of Equestria: Total War.
Except this is darker.
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Equestria: Total War? Is it good? It definitely sounds interesting to say the least, but the current word count is massive. In other words, would you recommend it?
If you think this is dark, just wait.
804447 It's IMO one of the very best fics on this entire website, and you definitely need to read it. Unfortunately, it's on an un-announced hiatus, which has been driving a lot of people (including myself) up a wall.
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Alright, once I find the time I'll definitely be reading it then
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I actually stopped following "Equestria: Total War", I don't see how they are similar. This is about Nightmare Moon and the other is about gryphons invading Equestria.
Why did Foxtrot's (Uniform Charlie Kilo) pony attack Fluttershy? That seemed pretty out of the blue.
If NMM wasn't bad for just torturing Twilight, she is now for torturing other ponies. And Luna said "she didn't like torture", for not liking it she seems to not have any qualms against wantonly handing it out. Twilight has also become apathetic to other ponies pains as well, not remembering how she herself cried in pain and whimpered for death. Don't see the benefit for Moon by creating a sociopathic, vengeful Twilight that hates her guts.
Hi! I know I'm late to the party, but this is damn good. I usually despise seeing ponies getting tortured, but this is really awesome, seeing Twilight turning it into something useful. Watching her struggle to keep her sanity while enduring all for the common good.
Damn good work, friend!
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It addresses this point in the last part of this chapter, Twilight's going to foil her plans by becoming insane, NMM didn't want this and was even surprised when it happened.