Nightmare Moon's returned and Twilight captured. In order to survive she must sacrifice everything
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Now, to my ramblings! For the Twilight sections, I suggest thinking about it form the perspective of someone looking in or Nightwish for maximum "Oh crap" reaction. Because, well, talking to herself and insane laughter is all the rage these days.
Nightmare Moon's section probably came as a surprise. Originally I was never going to write from her perspective, but for this chapter of the Mane 6's sections were so short that it didn't really do well to go with showing it from each of their perspectives. Also, can anyone else say 'Curb stomp battle'? So here we have Nightmare Moon completely and utterly decimating the Elements of Harmony in one on one battle. I've implied she's powerful in the past, but this was me showing just how powerful she is.
862541 Yet she had to struggle with Shy hahaha. Gotta love the SuperShy.
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It's a bird! It's a plane! No, it's SuperShy!
862734 Well, we could also call her Pinkamena Diane Shy, but I believe that moniker is taken lol.
okay you win.
i have no bucking idea what you're planning.
Damn you write fast, one chapter per day?
i like that.
For some reason i didn't enjoy the NMM stomps the elements battle, compensate me with torture.
lets see.. anything else i can add to my poorly constructed feedback.
ooh yeah!
what the fuck is Twilight doing? like seriously, did she find celestia or did she find her stored magic?
im so lost here.
ARF.
862873 actually he's uploading one chapter per day till he's caught up with the rest of the chapters on the story. also yes nmm definitely raped the battlefield and shattered the elements without trying.
also why the buck did you have to go and give twi the power of a goddess i mean she was already op before now your just going in for the over kill then againmedia.techeblog.com/elephant//ul/81167-450x-a_25.jpg
really i cant help but see celestia looking down and thinking that maybe it would be prudent to not come back to all the violence the eoh are causing not to mention discord's eminent return.
The thing I hope is going to happen now is for Discord to appear and fuck some shit up, inadvertently saving the element bearers. And suddenly there's a third party in this war.
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Yes! Now what do I win?
Actually, this is a repost from my other accounts to here hence the daily updates. I just posted up Chapter 23 today so I've almost caught up on this site. Otherwise it's weekly updates.
Not entire certain if it counts as torture, but it's pretty out there.
And Twilight unlocked her stored magic. Sorry if that wasn't clear
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Twilight wasn't that overpowered. Slightly, but not really. If you think that was over powered, just wait and see what I've got planned.
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Amusingly that was in the original plan. Discord would show up and force NNM and the Mane 6 + Trixie to work together. Needless to say, it's no longer in the plan.
I don't know why... but I sense a scene similar to the 'Luke I am your father' scene from Star Wars coming up... Am I an idiot?