There are plenty of girls that I would have been happy to wake up next to after a bender, but not this one. Now I'm lost and alone, and I think I'm going nuts. I only know one thing, I've got to get back,and I don't care who or what gets in my way.
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Well, I'm enjoying it. John is strange. Contradictory even. It's hard to understand his priorities at times. For him to "surrender" like that he'd either have to basically not fear the repercussions of jail/dungeon or w/e at all, or have Twilight be important enough to him to be willing to take a rather large risk (which seems unlikely after only a day or two).
sweet grass on a gopher, an update! I love this story so much
This is awesome, because I just shit my pants!!!
Soo how exactly does John have that much power?
Freakin sweet dude!
Fun chapter, but i kinda wish Celly used some pyrotechnics and heat things up a bit.
Durn Princesses and their worry for collateral damage.
3027756 choas shit talkers been beefin him up probably. also no magics in our world so not affected
3027936 I can understand the immunity, but not the buff. It should be one or the other, not both.
3027990 well theres that chaos...is..chaos and doesnt abide by your rules of logic..
it could also be that everything in equestria is weak...ENTIRE PLANET IS BABIES..
probably cos of those cigarettes...kill you slowly...but buff you so can do what you want before your untimely death
Well...that was an interesting cliffhanger....
My face changing withing this story
Epic fight scene:
Epic fight scene with butler:
Epic fight scene with celestia:
Him turning himself in:
lets see....
chase scene. check
dodged three huge arrows with asmone ninja skills. check
beat ponies ass for talking about his mother. check
turn around and have asome boss battle with the princess. check
and finally stop twilight from destroying the town like a boss and turned himself in. check-a-roonie
pretty good day so far.
I don't know if it was because I was watching Dragon Ball earlier or if it was because I was playing the dragon ball ost during the fight, but that chapter was a LOT of fun.
I really wanna see the next chapter now.
This story is making me hate Celestia now for jumping to conclusions without looking for the facts first...
Good, this time I had info about update.
Nice chapter even if for the whole time my brain was screaming "Dumb Princess, send your Butler with a dart filled with sleeping potion, not bring and army."
i just realized that peppermint butler is from adventure time.
Ha, when he jumped out the window and yelled America, I couldn't stop thinking about this t.qkme.me/3pyxvk.jpg
3029395 The hell is adventure time?
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"Adventure Time (with Finn and Jake)" is a cartoon currently on the Cartoon Network (and possibly others) that tells the story of Finn the Human and Jake the Dog, two adventurers living in a post-Apocalyptic Land of Ooo where with the exception of Finn, all humans are dead or gone. Finn, trusted and loyal hero to Princess Bubblegum, goes on regular adventures each week, tangling with villains who threaten the Land of Ooo.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Adventure_Time
Most of the people in the Land of Ooo are literally living pieces of candy or pastry, with the butler to Princess Bubblegum being a large, round peppermint candy.
3031077 I was joking. Whenever someone says something in my story is similar to something else, I pretend I don't know what they're talking about. I'm actually a big fan of Adventure Time.
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Oh, sorry. I have an unfortunate tendency to take things as they come, on face value. Blame it on a military family and Jesuit teachers.
3031293 Nobody else would have gotten it either, I assure you.
What in the hell...Screw it, you win! This was incredible. Just, indescribably awesome. I demand more of this soon!
I JUST HAD A BRILLIANT IDEA'
They should make it so you could like/dislike individual chapters so the author could get even better feedback on his story, so if he/she has a chapter that was nowhere near his/her normal writing level but doesn't quite realize it then the people could show him through their thumbs
3035981 That way whenever chapters come out for stories i can give the author another thumbs up
3035987 Nice save.
.........the fuck was that
3031293 Wait, were you taught by the actual Jesuits, or the teachers. At my school there are only about three actual Jesuits still there, but none of them are my teachers. What were they like at your school.
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Catholic school for several years, and yes, real "honest to god" (pun intended) Jesuits.
Of course, this was a long time ago. About half a dozen presidents ago. ^_^
3038732 Wow...well good for you then.
3080003 Assuming John gives enough of a shit, and assuming Pinkie would have listened, that would have been no fun.
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although believe me if there was a chapter that was subpar you'd know for sure, there would be no subtle hints MUHAHAHAHHA*Hack* oh god i think i swallowed a fly
I found the perfect song.
Mm mmm!
and now, after the 11th chapter, I stop using the mental image I created of John as I remember there is a picture of him on the cover
I started playing this while reading this chapter. Pretty fitting because of the name of the song, right?.
Sounds like toy story
This made my day!