There are plenty of girls that I would have been happy to wake up next to after a bender, but not this one. Now I'm lost and alone, and I think I'm going nuts. I only know one thing, I've got to get back,and I don't care who or what gets in my way.
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I like the re-write.
Dance, little pet, DANCE! MWHAHAHAAHAHHAHAAHA!
Much better.
A lot better! Also that was a nice song
You know... at first I was going to ignore this seeing as I had already read the chapter, but then I figured you had a reason for resubmitting it and damn was I right! Definitely like this version better then the last. Lots more character development, lots more sense and things are eased into it lots better.
This dance I can understand. I DEMAND MORE GOOD SIR! If it's not too much trouble that is.
But seriously, this I consider to be a large improvement. You've taken the criticism on board and acted accordingly.
Bravo.
Exia, out.
3218257 THOU ART A LIAR AND A FOOL! WE DO NOT APPRECIATE THINE BUTCHERING OF OUR MANNER OF SPEECH.
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THE ONLY BUTCHERY IS THINE OWN, AND WHAT WE HAST DONE TO THINE GOOD MOTHER! OH DIDST SHE BEG FOR MORE, BUT HER DEBAUCHERY OF US HAD GROWN TOO MUCH, AND WE DIDST DENY HER.
3218684 *Points downwards*
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*cannon fires* TO THE MOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNN
3218702
*Echoing from the moon high above*
YOU THINK THIS WILL STOP ME? I SHALL STILL TORMENT YOU FROM HERE YOU EMPTY HEADED ANIMAL FOOD TROUGH WIPER! I FART IN YOUR GENERAL DIRECTION! *pffft* YOUR MOTHER WAS A HAMSTER AND YOU FATHER SMELT OF ELDERBERRIES! GO AND BOIL YOUR BOTTOM YOU SON OF A SILLY PERSON! I BLOW MY NOSE AT YOU, SO CALLED 'FLAME DUST'! NOW GO AWAY, OR I SHALL TAUNT YOU A SECOND TIME!
3218727 YO DJ LUNA!
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DROP IT!
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I approve!
3218772
YOUHAVEN'T HEARDTHE LASTOF ME!!!!!!!!!!!
3218684 burrnnnnnnn XD
3218395 I see you caught my little Easter egg. Bravo, good sir.
3219369
YAY! Do I get a cookie?
3218806>>3218772 I CAN YELL LOUD TOO!
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BUT I'M LOUD ENOUGH TO BE HEARD FROM... THE MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNN!!!!!
3219775I AM LOUD ENOUGH TO TELL PEOPLE WHERE TO GO WITHOUT EVEN TALKING
you need to make that song into a video and post it on youtube
3219786 WHOOVES UP FOR ROUND TWO?
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Certainly.
*A horde of weeping angelponies attack the second Gordon*
3219838>>3219714
*suddenly appears back from the moon in a flash of dimensional teleportation (Opp, Opp Opp, Oppan Black Mesa Style)*
YOU FORGET THAT WE WIELD CROWBARS, AND STEEL IS HARDER THAN STONE!!!!!!
*proceeds to smash the WAP apart with crowbar, next to the other Gordon*
3219888 - proceeds to engage in an awesome back-to-back battle -
3219888 IT IS ON
*Presses the world blow up button*
3220025>>3219898
*absolutely nothing happens, while the three of us look around stupidly. Then you realized you pressed the pointless button, and the other one is on the opposite side of the room. Both me and the other Gordon start advancing on you, walking through the rubble of the WAP*
WHERE IS YOUR SCIENCE OR GODS NOW?
3220054 GOD DAMN TIME PARADOXES
I apologize for the gazbillion post!
And yes, Gazbillion is the teechnicul term.
3220076>>3220025
THE SHEER AMOUNT OF TIME LOOPS MIGHT RESET THIS ENTIRE TIME STREAM!!! WE'RE DOOMED!!!!!!!!!
*and thus the whole timeline of shouting contests disappeared in a flash, the camera zoming out to show Pinkie telling the girls the story of the shouting contest.*
"...and that's how Equestria was made!" Pinkie concluded happily. All around her were her friends, in various stages of 'brokenness.'
3220076>>3220083 *Backs away slowly* This ship went down faster then the titanic.
*Pulls Pinkamena out of my pocket* Have fun children!
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*jumps through a dimensional rift*
John is the Dragonborn? Equestria is either saved or doomed. Hopefully the former.
IN THEIR TOUNGE, HE IS DOVAKHIN
DRAGONBORN
Sorry, couldn't resist.
Awesome rewrite, definitely better than the last one.This pleases me...
I need to stop reading things at... *look at clock* 02:46 in the morning. I almost skipped whole chapter seeing familliar stuff ;D
Re-write is... well good. I may not like much all this hero-type stuff in this fic but I'll see how it's going to work out ^^
3219632 No.
I eated them.
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YOU ARE THE WORST POSSIBLE MONSTER EVER TO HAVE GRACED THIS SITE. I HATE YOU AND EVERYTHING YOU STAND FOR! I BLOW MY NOSE AT YOU, YOU FILTHY BRONY PIG-DOG! YOUR MOTHER WAS A HAMSTER AND YOUR FATHER SMELT OF ELDERBERRIES!
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3220917 Not sure if masterfully crafted insult, or joking around.
3221360
He ate all the cookies Need I say moar?
EDIT: just realized my accidental pun in my 'rant.'
3221421 Ok i getcha. That was quite the beautiful lil' burn you crafted though, mate
3221430
I cannot take credit. That goes to Monty Python... for most of it....
Though I didn't realize his user was BattleSWINE, when I called him a pig-dog....
3221436 The burn hath been doubled! ha! didn even notice that
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So tell me, how much has the muse been striking you? I'm sure you have a veritable Hamlet of ideas in your head.
3221506 cant say that it is. theres a reason I haven't wrote another story: adjectives - and by extension insults - arnt really my forte, i'm afraid. I can go all bombasticly random and spew who-knows-what, but its not the same, ya know?
3221568
Well, my insult was nothing to Shake a Spear at...