There are plenty of girls that I would have been happy to wake up next to after a bender, but not this one. Now I'm lost and alone, and I think I'm going nuts. I only know one thing, I've got to get back,and I don't care who or what gets in my way.
Page generated in 0.037 seconds
Total duration
1,003 users online
114,168 hits today, 1,870,739 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
lol.
lol
Well...this was wunderbar. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. HEYO! IRONY AWAY!
i have to say after reading this entire story i have to admit i find the conversations between johns body parts particularly hilarious.
"Does he think that we're colts?"
IIIIIIIIIIIII KKKKKNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWW IT!
I have favorited this story because I have favorited this story! You may proceed...
Reference FTW?
Well...that does leave the background ponies... LET THE MASSACRE BEGIN!!!
FUCKING TYRANT, DAMN YOU, CELESTIA!!!
3086789 Could it be? Have I found another Wisconsin brony?
3088651 Eeyup!
3092148
Dallas Cowboys for life, bitches!!!!
3201023 It's Greek, spelled phonetically. He says "Oops, wrong room." then asks where the bathroom is. The gag isn't really what he's saying, rather that he's saying it.
3200534 I agree woth Exia01 on some things. This chapter was a bit confusing :P
About Salem brothers though. I don't know.. I think you should stick with first person only for the main "brotha".
I got a reply to a chapter that doesn't exist anymore wtf?
3201419>>3201445 Please children, calm your tits: Daddy's trying to work.
3201462d22d7v2y1t140g.cloudfront.net/m_1999901_is3pApfE4RAR.jpg
3200534 The reason i am lost is not because you give away too little it is because you don't reveal enough everyone in the story has an idea of what is going on but i don't. And this has been going on for awhile so don't say it is for suspense
3201516 Can you give me specific examples so I can fix them?
3201547 I will but first i am going to re read
3203572 ...Is this a joke? You blame his problem-solving silence on just being hungover? It's not like John needs to formulate coherent sentences to get his side of the story voiced and understood. John's inability to properly take some form of a positive step towards mutuality seems to be more of a plot device to justify Pinkie's and John's unnecessary feud than some kind of disability that would prevent otherwise.
3204824 You know what? You're right. I was going to have Pinkie incapacitate John and then molest him sexually as payback, but you're right. There's no point.
3085051 aaawwwwww man i was ganna post that video
3204868 The feud doesn't need to seize--Pinkie may choose to believe that John isn't being sincere, but that's not being explored. While reading this, I'm thinking: Why hasn't John taken a more responsible approach and confronted Pinkie? They have involuntary shared a bed. That's something to talk about, discuss and reconcile. Why isn't it when these characters interact?
In fact, even if Pinkie believes John's account, she may choose to subject John to non-consensual, dominant bondage. If that's her thing in this story; more power to her. But I don't like the idea this this story-arch being dependent on miscommunication or refusal thereof.
3205066 He's been a little occupied. And it's more of a gag than a plot element.
Don't think about it too much, or you'll ruin the fun.
Fun fact, when I first saw an episode, I thought Rainbow Dash was a boy as well.