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OMG, Iโm so happy to see this story again. It was interesting to see how the rebellion started and this Lady Ewe you created is an interesting character that gave a backstory about how the Caribous became such douchebags. Dainnโs origins and his reason for being evil really highlight how pathetic the guy is, though the best part was seeing Sombra interact with AJ and Pinkie. Will be honest, what happened to Pinkie was tragic, but the fact that sheโs still a cheery gal made me smile...a bit surprised that she became a flirt and that she likes Sombra, but it was a pleasant surprise.. Lastly, I canโt help but feel curious about what influences Shining and Cadence to seeminlgy join the Caribou and the ending is exciting since weโll Sombra meeting Spike. Overall, this chapter was well worth the wait. Hope the next one comes soon...and maybe that Sombra gets lucky with Pinkie.
Interesting. This chapter has revealed a few things. So now Sombra is likely seeking the goal of using Arcane magic, either in tandem with his powerful dark magic or simply as a more powerful alternative. Ewe is right to be cautious, as even now while Sombra is a powerful ally, should they succeed he will be a powerful enemy.
I still have hopes though that it will be Rainbow Dash that may sway him a bit. Her rough warrior like tendencies have already caught his attention and I suspect if they allow themselves to look past their own history together and the roles they each play now, they might find something special in eachother.
Happy to see this continued. Though I will point you've got a continuity problem with Pinkie. You state that she's mute in this chapter, but she spoke in the previous chapter.
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Edited. Thanks for keeping an eye.
Glad to see you updated
Why isn't Sombra anthro in the picture?
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Mostly because I couldn't find a good anthro pic of him that fit the mood. If I do, I'll probably change it.
Wow, one of the best Fall of Equestria plot lines yet I have seen so far. Good work. And I'm glad this story didn't died off.
Really glad to see this coming back, it's one of the more interesting Fall of Equestria story lines I have run into on here and well written to boot! Keep up the good work.
Cool to see this updated.
There is something oddly amusing about Dainn being the cause of a civilization of rapist barbarians because he couldn't get laid. It's pathetic and awful in a horribly amusing way.
Welcome back! Great update. Interesting developments from multiple sources and good world building. Hopefully this will continue.
Finally got a chance to read it, interesting idea behind the Caribou and why they are like they are. Shame about Pinkie. Look forward to more!
I got really happy when I saw this updated. One of the very few.... Ok literally 2 stories that arnt a comedy that i like of this au lol
I liked the back story of this. And thr ending oooh boy.
Can't wait to see more.
Is the story going to continue?
Howโs the next chapter going? Itโs been a while since the last chapter and I feel curious as to how Sombra will build good rapport with the ponies. It seems Pinkie is interested in being VERY โfriendlyโ with Sombra, so feeling curious as to whether Sombra would tap that or build a relationship first. Anyway, keep being awesome.
Little Ask. This story continue?.
You've... added an interesting twist to the typical FoE formula.
Sombra's character seems pretty spot-on, though you've (beneficially) given him more depth than was shown in his 2-episode special in the actual show.
Would love to see this continued.
Uh oh...
stake.
Sombra's not wrong, that is one of the most pathetic backstories for a villain, but it's not like King of Rapists deserves anything better so I'm cool with the backstory.
What a waste
I couldn't understand half the stuff being said. Need a translation.
Ah, so this is where the Zeus Onoma landed.
Pretty interesting reading FoE and finding about Oona, Dion, and their lore from this side of the story. Cause right now in Lightendark the main focus was on Omen's kind and Iclyn's rightful distrust in him.
I love this story, it is indeed written well, even if there are some Grammer that could've been fixed, but they're minor stuff.
When it comes to Oona's speech I have mixed feelings. I'm all for having characters written with an accent, but Oona's is just way to "thick" to understand a fair bit of what she says. It's difficult to stay sucked into the storytelling when you're struggling to read the story itself as is the case here and I think the story suffers a bit for it. I would advise either making what she says more clear or like someone else suggested having a translation in either the author's notes or in parentheses after she speaks.
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Yeah, even I have no idea what sheโs saying lmao This was written way back in the day and, since then, Iโve toned down the Scottish dialect a lot with her and others that speak in that tongue.