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Now this is why Sombra is my favourite villain. Pragmatically and lawfully evil. He's an evil bastard no doubt about it, but he is evil for a reason. Curious to see how the 'resistance' reacts to him.
Nice chapter. It was interesting to see Sombra and Dash bond, especially since Dash actually had a good time with Sombra as opposed to the Caribou rapists. Hella the clop scene is probably the most sensual Fall of Equestria scene I've read so far, due to promoting equal give and take. Also, the surprise appearances of AJ, Maud, and PP were epic, especially since their first act was to save Sombra and Dash from Caribou after their cover was blown. Hope the next chapter comes soon.
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Now I wonder who there leader is? My money it's a stallion not under mind control so good money on Big Mac or maybe something out of left field like Cranky. Sombra is the perfect champion I think. Sort of like having Darth Vader on your side. Powerful and unstoppable and possibly even vaguely loyal. Until his own concerns become priority.
Barers?
It's suppose to be Bearers.
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7378724 damn how did I read that wrong?
I hate to say this to myself, but I'm doing too much Overwatch...
Chalk it up to personal preference, but I'm dropping this one now that I've finished it. I don't like this portrayal of Sombra all that much. I don't like seeing him act this way. There is a difference in acting like the caribou out of necessity at times, but he's consistently adopting their behavior when I see that he's disgusted by them. I imagined this to be a story about ponies and Dash picking Sobra as the lesser evil, picking a tyrant over an invalid (let's face it, there is no rational way the Fall could ever happen).
I don't see any kingly behavior out of him.
7382510 If you're not seeing a clear difference between Sombra and the caribou, that's because at the time being, they're very much alike. Sombra could end up being far worse than them and allying with him could in the end be a huge mistake. Who knows. This is only the second chapter. Still a lot more to explore. But your opinion is very helpful, so thank you.
finally
The sexual tension between those two was driving me insane.
Cant wait to see who this leader is and how its going to end with sombra
Please I beg you hurry with the next chapter
Just out of curiosity, will the next chapter come soon?
This was awesome. Sombra is getting powerful again and Dash is able to rationalize that he is in fact one of their best shots at fixing everything.
Plus the sex scene was super hot. Turth be told I actually hope Rainbow and Sombra get together. It's obvious she has developed some respect for him, and while he still has too much pride to admit it, he definitely has a soft spot for her. They would be an awesome couple.
Booyah!! Some of Sombra's power is back! I know Sombra suspects that there's something off Dainn and he knew the raid may fail. But he likely had planned for it.
This Sombra is a villain one can respect. He's rational with his plans, he's a bastard but fair. and Got some awesome powers to back up his badassery!
...a little role play was needed, perhaps?
Whatever the opposite of blue balls is, you think these guys would have it by now.
had I not broken that mare
Unless you mean to have Sombra sound like a gangster, I think you mean: "You've got to look..."
Sounds like a great chance to assassinate him! ...oh, they already thought of that.
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Bless you kind sir <3
Ah, damn. I already reached the end.
Well, I will say this about the fic. It has potential. Sombra's perspective was delightful, and it was nice to see his character slowly developing-don't know what exactly at this point, but still. Rainbow was feisty as hell and Sombra had a smooth side that I've always enjoyed seeing portrayed in fiction,
That being said, you need to do some revisions to the chapters, as I noticed all over the place that you would write a word with similar sounds but incorrect meaning, almost like spell check is automatically correcting and using the wrong term.
7589597 I'm always happy to have someone look at my work and point out any flaws or grammatical errors. I tend to read back to see if the sentence sounds right or needs to be revised. I'll happily add the [Editted] tag to a chapter to show that it's been checked over and reworked out all the bad text.
Moar pls
Just out of curiosity, how is the next chapter doing? I'm a little curious to learn who is the leader of the Resistance and see how Sombra would interact with the rest of the Mane 6 as it seems he'll have a rocky relationship with AJ.
Just kill me now and get it over with.
7779255 I honestly don't remember writing that... God, I must had been drunk to make such a lame pun lol
7781871 get drunk and write more! ...but seriously, please continue this series. Even unedited I feel quite invested in this story. :p
There is limits to ones patience, just get a 1000 word chapter out and TELL ME WHAT HAVE THEY DONE TO NOW ACTUALLY REASONABLE SOMBRA DANG IT.
(Disclaimer: this comment is made for comedic porpoises only, and isn't ment to offend anyone in any way shape or form, as to the actual feedback, please author, do continue, this pleases the emperor, AWESOME STORY:)))
Nice developing story so far. Please continue the story when you can.
Wish you would continue the story
It is bearer, not barer.
Also, I thought I should point this out. But even if this is anthro, itโs still Equestria. You should be calling months and holidays by their long equivalent. It wouldnโt be thanksgiving for example, I think at least.
Now see here, the reason why I love Sombra and especially all versions of Sombra within the Lightendark-verse, is because he has class when he does the things he does.
He truly does it like art. Every single and I mean every single Sombra scene, no matter how off I would've felt if it had been with any other character (like Fiery Kickstarter in Prisoner of War) just feels right with Sombra!
He's the GOAT. XD
If only this has SOMBRADASH shipping i would give 5 โญ