When Twilight falls, Midnight rises... and it wasn't just the magic she unleashed.
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I hope to see Cadence, Luna and Celestia be influenced to having with the students, mainly the females. With the principal trying, and failing, to resist her ever increasing sexual cravings.
What happened to this fanfiction?
I could've lived a long, happy life without the mental images that that conjures.
Likely part of how she did it. With that much power, not knowing what she's capable of means she's capable of almost anything.
I do love the probability-twisting wardrobe malfunctions. As for the boys' punishment, hopefully Daydream will remember to break the curse.
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It's being updated.
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But why did you lose so many views. Isn't editing supposed to be simple?
So do we call the police or just let Midnight turn Cinch into mindless slave with only coherent thought is her hunger for dick while her consciousness remains locked at the back of her head fully aware (and feeling it all) what is happening but unable to stop it?
...too much? Nahh.
In moments like this one realise that Twilight has quite a dirty mind. She would enjoy the attention if not the fact all of it had been dobe maliciously
Don't worry, Sunny. Soon your feelings will be reciprocated.
I see you have peculiar tastes Rainbow. Girls finding guy on guy action hot isnt usually explored so its a cool bit.
Given that they received no punishment in the original this is certainly an improvement.
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Ahh, I understand your confusion. What he's doing is unpublishing the old chapters - but not deleting them - and replacing them with new ones, resetting the view count and allowing the old comments to remain visible. This is normal and to be expected.
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If you're still confused, by reposting chapters the way he has, he's allowing fans on the story to be notified of the changes so they can come back and read through the story again if they wish.
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I'll see what I can do!
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I know reactions to doing anything sexual with her will be thoroughly mixed, which was the reason I elected to just magically remove her from the scene at the start in the original version. This time, I'm gonna chance doing some stuff with her. Some will love it, some will hate it. Skip such sections if you need.
You're right. As they say, it's amazing what one can accomplish when one doesn't know what one can't do.
I'm glad! You'll certainly be seeing more of them, as well as at least a partial explanation of them in due course.
The basic ending won't change much in that she'll put things back to status quo as much as she can in order to protect Twilight, but there will be lingering effects and influences. Some will actually be for the better. Not that the boys will remain raging gay, but they'll be a lot closer and more respectful of personal boundaries after.
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In short, as AJA said, I unpublished the original chapters and published new versions to give everyone a chance to be notified of their release, so they could enjoy the at-times entirely redone story anew. Unfortunately, that has the effect of removing view counts of unpublished chapters from the stats. I can't control that. At least the comments off the old chapters remain live, as long as I don't delete their parent chapter.
Editing is simple, but this has turned into a wholesale revamp of the original story, dramatically expanded in most places (note the much higher word counts on each updated chapter) while outright rewritten in others. Though I originally began by just updating the text of the original chapters, I decided that the changes were extensive enough to justify new chapter releases.
As for the longer explanation as to why I then unpublished the old chapters in favor of the new ones, it was because 1) there was no point in keeping them live because the old chapters no longer mesh with the new, 2) to make sure readers got notified of updated chapters instead of me just posting notices on my blog that relatively few would see, and 3) I was hoping to draw new readers into the story, as well as the Unleash the Magic series in general.
Note the old chapters remain on the story, just unpublished. I gave direct links to them in the authors' notes of chapter 1, as well as a password to access them for anyone who wants to see the old version of the story.
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Decisions, decisions...
I think I agree! Though I worry other readers will have no interest in seeing anything sexual with Cinch. I'll just have to isolate it in its own chapter when the time comes.
Definitely dirty, but she also just wanted to be treated respectfully and appreciated, even sexually as long as it was on her terms. It never was with this bunch.
And the Sunlight shall shine bright!
You're welcome. I'll see what else I might do with it later in the story.
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Glad you think so! And hopefully, it's a punishment that fits the crimes.
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Thanks.
Shouldn't that be Neon?
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Oops. Good catch. Fixed.
That’s what I’m wondering, Dash. I’m just realizing that they were so pent up that this was the only way to relieve that, ahem, urge.
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Not so much pent up as having no concept of boundaries or healthy relationships. Midnight is very much a product of that environment.
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Well… you know what they say about tension…
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Sorry to not answer this sooner. Maybe that it always finds outlets, but not always healthy ones?