When Twilight falls, Midnight rises... and it wasn't just the magic she unleashed.
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This is a good chapter and I approve of Upeer Crust's punishemtn. It wouldn't surprise me if the lack of emotional attachment from the Shadowbolt girls is caused deliberately by Cinch because she's apparently incapable of such feelings.
As fun as this chapter was...I have been waiting for Sour Sweet.
Ah, TMNT logic. The mutagen acts based on the creature you last touched... though if that were universally the case, we'd be seeing scales and fire breath from Pinkie and Rarity. Which may not be out of the question.
In any case, looking forward to more madness as it unfolds.
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Thanks! It’s been fun writing the backstories of characters here that accompany their punishment.
It’s quite possible, since Cinch encouraged a cutthroat competitiveness between students that valued not just winning but crushing your competition above all else. We’ll see if we can address that at the very end.
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You’ll get her next chapter, and I’m planning a near-total rewrite of the original version since I don’t like the way I did it. What will that mean? Guess we’ll just have to see what happens when I start typing.
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More or less. though the mutagen in this case is Midnight’s mating aura catalyzing the magic of others, including the Element Bearers like Rarity or Pinkie Pie. Scales and fire breath? Well, I’ll just say for now that it wasn’t a one-way exchange between them and the dragons, but you’ll have to wait a bit to see what the dragons imparted back.
BTW, seen the Batman vs TMNT movie?
Cool. You shouldn’t have that long to wait, given I’m planning to start right into the next Midnight Rising chapter. Current goal is to get it out in ten days.
There's... a lot of resentment and negativity in Crystal Prep... Depressing, wonder the school have not broke with much pathology.
Well, time for Sour Sweet.
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Sorry, didn’t mean to depress you. Yes, there is, but keep in mind that this will end up breaking that cycle pretty dramatically, and as redmar suggested earlier, a lot of is due to Cinch’s influence. Ironically, the school was much better when Sombra was running it. He demanded a lot but was fair about it, too.
In any event, in this version of the story, you’ll see some of the changes for the better this causes in our Crystal Prep friends at the end.
Give me about ten days.