When Twilight falls, Midnight rises... and it wasn't just the magic she unleashed.
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Did I already ask if all of the sex would only be female on female?
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I believe you did, but to reiterate: no. The sex in this story runs the gamut from gay to straight, FF to FM to MM along with a slew of various fetishes and group scenes involving humans and ponies/griffons/other races alike.
Not to be confused with Bitter Granny Goodness, in which case this would be a DC crossover.
She's only delaying the inevitable.
I can only assume that's an in-universe keyboard smash.
Good to see some cracks in Midnight's armor, even if she denies them. Though I do have to wonder if and when Twilight will learn of this document. If anyone deserves to know about it, it's her... even if she may not want to know all the details.
This is an interesting development with the griffons. The comments by Sunset's friends were very amusing. Midnight is rather overconfident and seems to rely exlusively on the naked singularity which doesn't show her everything in contrast to what she thinks.
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Ha! I forgot about that character. If memory serves, I was originally introduced to her in Superman: The Animated Series back in the 90s. Granny Smith could definitely have some of that in her, especially in Timberwolf mode.
Probably. Especially when the two Pinkies start trading worlds!
*blinks and laughs when he realizes what happened* Actually, that’s what you get when you’re trying to type “explained” but accidentally place your fingers one key to the right. Try it yourself to see. It was a last-second change and I didn’t double-check my typing. Oh well.
I imagine she will, but not right away. Twilight hasn’t transferred yet at this point, and she’s also got an upcoming encounter with Principal Chrysalis to deal with. Or more correctly, for Middie and the Shadowbolt girls to deal with.
Anyway, thanks for dropping a comment, and glad to see you enjoyed the chapter. By the ending, I’m sure you can guess that there’s an M-rated Kaiju fight upcoming. Be looking for it in a couple weeks.
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I’m very glad to hear it. I was hoping they’d add additional interest and context for readers.
Bingo. In point of fact, it doesn’t show her the true present or future so much as the ones she wants to see. It’s not that the worlds and outcomes she sees are false—they do happen somewhere out in the infinite multiverse—but it’s not showing her their true probability and is giving her a false picture of things like this Sunset’s mindset or the likely outcomes of events. *That’s* where she’s messing up.
It's been a while since I've commented on one of your stories. I should fix that! And since we're going meta with the reference to google docs, what better way to do that than to reintroduce some old friends from the dark age of 2016-2018 when I got destroyed by writer's block?
Linky and Twinkleshine Roseluck, and Lily Valley too because why not?
I'm a bit surprised Firesight wants to hear from us again, to be honest. I never thought the gimmick really caught on. Hay, I never really even got a fully fleshed-out character!
Yeh think ye got it rough, Twinkie? I stopped existing entirely and got transformed into a frozen blue fox thing!
With nice ears!
Hey, don't diss Glassie! She's my girl boss slay queen!
Aye, she is pretty bonny!
Yaaas queen! But, uh, girls, the comments section is glaring at us. We should start reading the story...
First, will yeh explain why yehr carrying a blowpipe and dressed up like a giant owl moonlighting as a medieval bard at some point?
Maybe later.
Weird she brings that up. I'm sure I've had the same dream! It was really sticky when I woke up from that one...
Hold on! Hold on! Everypony make way for the Broodmare. You can't have a clopfic without Roseluck. Seriously, Linky gets an invite and I have to bust my way in?
I won't even ask how you got here from Thestralslovakia, Rose. We're just glad to see you here! Have a seat.
Thanks! Now, Lily. You were mentioning dreaming about being a dickgirl. Who's the lucky lady you hooked up with? Anypony I know?
What in the bloody blazes is a dick!?
They think they've got it bad? Try having to empty two quarts of breast milk into a bag before you can get up and make breakfast for the family. And I don't get to turn that off, either.
Oh, I don't know. I have to empty about that much into Golden Harvest before she can get up and make me breakfast.
That... was a dream... right, Lily?
Maybe~!
I for one really enjoy the morning routine of drinking the pink from me lady. And seeing Lily got herself a sense of humor!
Who'd have thought Applejack and Rainbow Dash were... *gasp* swearing when they're together? #NotMyManeSix
I don't even talk that way while my husband is drilling out my backside! Not even by hour 4 without a break!
I admit that occasionally when in the heat of battle I've uttered words I'm ashamed of: Begorrah, bloody idjit, donkey, idjit sandwich...
I swore once and Mom paddled my rear. I swore never to do it again. I got another paddling for that.
That's brutal!
I reckon we found the spy who released this to the public. A shameful betrayal of trust!
An act of treachery committed by the Earth Ponies! I will see you all come first snowfall so we can settle this like mares.
Make love, not war. Breed until you can no more. Dust the tables and mop the floor. Write more sex scenes to expand my lore.
Wow, Rose! I didn't know you spit fire like a dragon!
Never considered having sex with anything that's not equine before but two danglers instead of one? My husband might have competition! Kidding, kidding! The heir of Rosa Salvaje de Dureingo would never be caught cheating!
For me, it's a question of cost versus benefit. Consider how many bits it's going to cost you to commission such a thing! A good still image will run you a couple thousand bits at auction. Just saying.
A dick is a dangler? Oh... I knew that! Blasted cool kit slang!
I disavow my entire manga collection in light of my present mental image.
Azura finds this scenario ridiculous. As if the Goddess would be taken down by a lowly lycanthrope!
Azura? From my Fallout Equestria comics? What are you doing here?
What is Azura doing here? Why are you here and not cowering at your impending demise to magical balefire?
Methinks, this alicorn reads too much Twitter...
I think it's called "X" now.
Oh, buck that noise! Azura is leaving!"
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She said it! She said it! I'm so happy!
Yeah! Suck these apples, human world!
Suck my teats while you're at it. Seriously, as much as you can. I haven't milked since I came into town...
It's 2023 and I still think equine sex words are better than the human stuff.
Aye, same.
I have that issue with Grammarist too when I'm writing. It's not perfect but it's better than nothing. The fact we even get the internet out in the boondocks at all is a minor miracle.
Twinkle is being modest. She's the only reason we get internet. Or any electricity at all. Once ye start lettin' wires into yehr house, invaders aren't far behind, I always say.
You and me both, sister! I love Fluttershy. We used to get our ears groomed at the same spa. I swear that filly must be related to me somehow.
I had a crush on Fluttershy and her enormous sexy ears too but she's not into mares. My luck is the worst. Until I met Carrot Top, I was constantly putting the L in LGBT.
See? There's somepony out there for everypony. And at least we had that one time...
Two times but who's counting?
Ah Sunny D! If you've ever imagined that God Almighty commissioned Pepsi Cola to create an alternative to orange juice, that'd be it. That's my one non-RP comment for this particular commentary. Back to the girls.
The EqG universe is weird! The music is pretty awesome though.
Not as weird as your ultra-violent comics! Okay, that's not fair. Some of them are pretty cool. Like the one with the goddess that makes everypony have sex.
Terror and Starvation? Yeah, that's a classic! Though, that's missing the point a bit to say Sylvian makes people have sex.
Point, schmoint. Art is defined by the observer, not the artist. Especially if it disturbs my sensibilities.
Bah! No work of art ever helped me crush me enemies. Useless, I say! However, there are some pretty implements of death out there like unicorn longbows. Griffon ballistae are great too! Don't even get me started on airships...
I'm a simple mare. I see Terror and Starvation memes and I leave the page immediately.
But we can agree that heavy metal is awesome though.
It beats listening to earth ponies singing about losing their hat, cattle and farm to the tax mare.
Incest
Is
Wincest!
Grr! This hits uncomfortably close for me, girls.
Sweetie Belle. Now there's a gal who knows how to get around! She could honestly give me a run for my money.
Do we even want to know?
It's her business and she never hurt anypony and I'm not a snitch so I'll disclose nothing.
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Oh, honey! That's far too young! I held out until I was twelve and I've literally slept with hundreds of ponies!
I was still sleeping with my dolly when I was eight. I had a pet paper towel roll named Bob I'd put on my horn too. I cried when I accidentally destroyed it when my horn discharged for the first time. I never wanted to use magic again after that.
Aye, we all have our innocence we lost along the way. But if Bob were still around today, it'd be impossible for you to fit your horn inside of me filly funzone. What joy would that be for either of us?
You were really twelve years old, Rose? Not that that's hot or anything...
Most of us were. It's just how our tribe did things. But nopony ever did anything they didn't want too. Eight though? Mom would never have allowed it. I hope it was a positive experience for her at least. Regardless, I'm not going to be the one to judge Pinkie's actions as wrong and not just because she could be watching me from the azaleas.
Pinkie Pie continues her chain of weirding me out.
She's like a character from Terror and Starvation; a product of an id run amok.
She's terrifying but fascinating. And she still hasn't been examined by Canterlot arcanists to determine how her magic works. Freedom and liberty are honestly antiquated values that need to be discarded to rectify this error.
See? This is why I married yeh, Linky. Yeh always end up making sense.
I can relate. I've always been attracted to a certain type of mare who can willingly attract any pony she wishes and is willing to share herself with all of them. I know some ponies think it's gross but it just never stops being a huge turnon, even if I'm not particularly fond of talking to other ponies. Maybe it's an opposites attract thing? All I know is I want to see her continue getting rutted into the floor until the earth beneath my feet gives out and the universe collapses in on itself because that mare can't ever get enough!
I find your proposition acceptable, Lily!
We didn't talk much about the actual chapter did we?
Or ask why Lily is dressed like a bird bard.
Or talk much about the sex? Celestia knows I don't have much of an opinion on it but I reckoned Roseluck might mention something about it.
Well, I kind of liked the Big Mac scene. Impalas are a neat idea to add to the lore just to have something other than Zebras covering such a vast continent as Zebrica. Plus impalas are kind of hot, not gonna lie.
Kirin do it better, though.
Yes, well. I gotta go, girls. I've got things to do today.
Oh right! You have to pull guard duty today, don't you? You should really join us inside the house one day, though. The more the merrier!
Nah, Golden Harvest would kill me if she found out I was worshipping ancient Equestrian goddesses. I'll just do my usual schtick of dressing up like a bird and shooting anyone who tries to spy on us.
I feel like we shouldn't be listening in on this discussion. I'm just going to show myself out.
Likewise. And Lily, if yeh do end up engaged in battle with the enemy, do tell us the tale some other time!
Take care everypony. And don't forget to love your neighbors, take your vitamins and put out for every stallion you meet because you may not get tomorrow!
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Back then, my stories *were* your creative outlets and you put a lot of effort into your longposts. I greatly enjoyed them, mon ami. Greatly enjoyed hearing from all the girls.
I'm sure you would have invited Lyra and Bonbon, but the former is giving a class on the Still Way Technique while the latter is was last seen boarding a train with dark glasses and opening a briefcase found under her seat that shortly destroyed itself after being opened.
Are you kidding, Twinkleshine? I loved hearing from you girls! Especially on Firefly, when you two really went to town. Even Rosie and Lily got swept along for the ride a few times. Remmeber Tulip Vale?
Pretty but deadly. She'd be here along with the rest of Team Allure, but she's still grumbling over pony weather control and wondering when Ebon will stop obsessing over Blueblood's backside.
She could tell you but then she'd have to kill you. or at least use her sleep darts to knock you out and then wipe your memory with a special quill pen.
Sorry!
That's weird, Lily... I keep dreaming of being screwed in my sleep by you as a dickgirl!
Goldie? When did you get here? Hold on, there's someone pounding on the door... <dons mask and readies blowdarts>
She means beside her, not on her lap!
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It just means an unskilled but earnest police detective, Linky. What, you thought it was something dirty?
In that case, could you spare some for us, Rose? You have no idea what the cost of whole milk is nowadays. Or if you need extra bits, you could start selling it!
Our shy little introvert with a (mostly) unrequited crush on Rose finally grew up! I'm so proud...
I'm assuming that last happened when you were in the heat of the kitchen battling a balky oven while trying to teach your cousin to make proper
ScotchCaleponian pies?I lol'd hard when I read that.
Gabby Gums and Anon-A-Miss has nothing on Pinkie Pie's complete lack of regard for personal privacy!
A duel! Snowball slingshots at sixteen paces, then?
She's talking to you, AJA!
Only when her foals misbehave. Or worse, start having sex with each other behind her back!
Okay, but would you want your husband to have two danglers, then? And would you rather have them side by side or one top of the other?
Or nowadays, just get an AI to do it for you and keep tweaking the parameters until it's something you like. Yeah, I know. But it's here to stay, like it or not.
*Glassie bursts in with a blast of cold air* Did somebody say... kit? <looks around hopefully>
Wrong story, Glassie! This isn't Equestria Mystery Dungeon!
Aw... guess I'll go back to sunning myself out in the perfect weather on Mount Washington, then.
Later, girl. We'll no doubt meet in EMD eventually!
Aw... even your Dragonball Zebra ones?
Let me know when it's called triple-X and I might be more interested.
Shimmersage? Azura's Great and Powerful Syndrome is flaring again...
An accidental pun, but not an unwelcome one.
Whose apples? Yours, Lily?
Advertise yourself outside, and I'm sure you'll have stallions and more than a few mares lined up to get it directly from the spigots, Rose.
Me too, but I'm honestly proudest of the griffon ones I've come up with--spear and nest. They're perfect, in my not-so-humble opinion.
Honestly, I stopped using it. I do just fine with GD's grammar checks and just listening to a chapter recited a few times to pick up missing words or clumsy phrasing.
I feel that way about the so-called internet of things. That's why I refuse to use or install anything that could be hijacked or listened into from the outside. My PC? I can turn that off and it has no listening device or camera unless I plug it in.
Well, Applejack is distantly related to Pinkie Pie, so why not?
Lop off the T and I might consider that to be a valid grouping again. That said, yep, Flutters is straight in my canon, whether she's full female or futa. Midnight’s magical chicanery not withstanding. Is it truly lesbian if it’s futa on futa? I’ll leave that question to the philosophers.
It might be three times after this story, Lily.
I'd prefer the backdoor to the girls. *runs out the door before Lily goes Tulip Vale on his backside*
Rainbow Rocks remains the best as far as music goes, but Friendship Games had its moments, too. But Celly and Lulu being rival heavy metal rockers before becoming school principals is my addition to its canon.
Yeah, the point is that she makes them have anal sex!
Don't worry, Linky. I'll get back to Feathered Hearts - Continuation and Chronicles soon enough so you can see all of them action and take your pick of griffon death dealing
Pinkie's sister Limestone certainly agrees with you, Lily.
I wouldn't say I'm a big country music fan at all, but there are some songs of the genre I really like.
Never thought I'd see the day that you of all ponies were prudish, Rosey!
Hey, she's just taking after her sister! And to a lesser extent, the rest of the
CMCDST.Dammit, you just gave me an idea. We'll see if I have the nerve to use it later.
In fairness, you had full blown sex when you were twelve, Rose. Playing doctor is not having sex; it's petting at worst. Or best, depending on your point of view. I don't judge!
Filly funzone. I haven't used that in my stories yet and I need to. That aside, she's got a point, Twinkleshine! Not using magic again would have been a terrible waste!
<voice from flowerbeds outside the window> Azeleas? Nope! Nobody here but us daisies!
That's it. I'm getting me slingshot...
She's one of a kind. Or actually, two of a kind in my EqG verse. But hey, she likes making WWII weapons in her spare time, so she's not all bad.
Yeah. Mine.
You should start a podcast, Linky. You'd have millions of ponies following you in no time.
I share your sentiments, since I have characters based on that exact premise scattered across various stories. And unless I miss my guess, Lily, Rose is more than willing to oblige you!
Like I was saying...
I think this was just more an excuse for you girls to get together again and see how far you've come over the years. And I certainly don't mind, since I'm fully aware that for the most part, the sex just isn't your thing, either in terms of fetish or species involved. It is for me, though, so it will continue.
Thanks, Rose! Glad you liked them. We'll see if I use them again my regular or clopfic stories later. I like the idea of a race whose males greatly enjoy gay sex.
They were criminally underused in the show. But maybe that's a good thing, since the writers did anything but right by other races by the end of the series.
So do I, but here I am writing out a reply to all this! It was fun to answer and hear from you again, girls.
That's our Lily! Tulip Vale would be proud...
Only if you swear undying loyalty to
SylveonSylvian first! Oops, sorry. Only Ebon swears undying loyalty to Sylveon, if not entirely voluntarily.Words of wisdom, Rose. And one I try to make my characters live by.
Oh please let midnight sparkle wins this time around! I love it when the villainous succeed in these kinds of sexual acts stories !