When Twilight falls, Midnight rises... and it wasn't just the magic she unleashed.
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Ohh, yeah. In the first draft it went nowhere. Not complaining just interested what could have been. Daydream/Midnight was my favourite part and hope for more sexy parts between them (along with some cute talk).
Pinkie do yo wish to tell us something?
...You did tell us something. Should have seen that coming.
Hope so. Empathy spell and Tentacle monster was a lenient punishment for someone like Zest.
Magic overdose may cause growing extra body parts, increase in size, loosened inhibitions and morals and ultimate helping of Ham. I love this line for some reason. Twilight is channeling her inner Mad Sorceress/Scientist in her Dark Goddess form. She knows how to go big.
"And what were you doing in the boys' locker room?"
"No comment."
"That's a first."
Some very unexpected additions to the experiences leading up to this. Also nice foreshadowing of sone of Midnight's more subtle abilities. You know, for a given value of "subtle."
I really prefer the lesbian action, so keep that up. Especially with how the girls are being influenced by the horny magic. It be really hot if Rarity tries to fight the magic and desperately get away from Pinkie, all while trying to fight the growing urge to have sex with her, or any nearby girl. As I find it hot when a straight girl is converted to lesbianism through mind control, magic, or chemicals.
This is greatly expanded and the extra parts are an improvement. I liked the reference to Hollow Shades High and I wonder if all places in Equestria have a counterpart in the other world.
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Well, it was implied in the first AJ bonus chapter that they remained something of an item afterwards, though Sunset's first love remained Twilight/Midnight. I'll see what else I can do with them this time around. As you say, Daydream/Midnight was supposed to be who this was about, and the pairing everybody wanted to see.
Always!
This is Pinkie we're talking about!
So noted. We'll see what else I can do with it when the time comes.
And she likes to go big. But then again, she's just a reflection of me, so... :shrug:
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... okay, that's too good not to use. I just added it into the chapter. Thanks!
Appreciate it! Unexpected but not unwelcome, by the sound of it. Midnight has all the subtlety of Pinkie Pie on a particularly boisterous day. Then again, maybe that's why Pinkie Pie appreciates her.
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Well, I think you'll be happy with future chapters, then. Though F/F will continue, futa is very shortly going to be making a major appearance, and there will be plenty of MF as well. As for Rarity, I gave her a specific treatment in the previous version of the story, but I believe I'm going to change it now to accommodate the new bonus chapter I was writing. You'll see in due time.
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Thank you!
The idea is that yes, they do. Towns and cities are typically represented by schools but Equestria-side nations have analog human nations as well.
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Looking forward to it. Though to be honest futa is not one of my turn ons, but I’m still gonna read regardless.
You shouldn’t have said that.
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In fairness, it’s almost impossible for her to keep her mouth shut.
Dark Not Evil the is a difference.
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I’m sorry. I never replied to this, and I didn’t realize it until I launched the new chapter. Let me do so now, and apologies again.
Not evil, but you might make the argument that she’s amoral. At the very least, you could classify her as chaotic neutral, but that’s not necessary benign at this level of power.