When Twilight falls, Midnight rises... and it wasn't just the magic she unleashed.
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Don't know why but for a second I thought we would get Twilight's POV.
Anyway, like the rewrites. Feel the difference.
I haven't noticed many changes so far but I did notice some of them.
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Nope, sorry. The main story is strictly through Sunset's POV, though the bonus chapters are not.
Appreciate it, thanks! Hopefully you'll especially like the changes to part 5, where I more than doubled the length of the chapter to add a lot more detail and dialogue. One of my main priorities has been to provide better explanation of where Midnight's punishments are coming from and how the various Shadowbolt girls earned them. You be the judge if I succeeded.
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There are definitely some, but generally fewer in earlier chapters. I just released chapter 5, and it went from <2000 words to 5000+. So there's a ton of additional details there. Hope you enjoy.
Trylight is the best villain