Human Flash Sentury asks human Twilight Sparkle out on date. Awkwardly (Obviously) Twilight says yes. But right after the date, equestrian Twilight comes in, and Flash mistakes the two, Now he's in... what you could call a love triangle... with the same girl... anyway, Flash loves both, what will he choose?
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Heels.
Applejack.
Why is it 'I said'? This wasn't 1st person before.
Their.
You might not want to use that twice.
If this is a stutter it should probably read "H-Hello"
Apart from that, good job. Onto the next chapter!
Their.
Huh....That's the only error I can find. Oh well! I'm adding this to my tracking list, I'm enjoying it!
6610420
You missed "Flash Cenytury"
Like, who the fuck is that? There is a Flash Sentry. How can you fuck that up?
>>SSparkleTheSilvHunter HOLY CRAP THANKS! God I'm so embbarest. I'm terrible at punctuation, and write these at night. I would like you to edit ALL of my stories. Though I don't exactly know how to do that. I'm still new to this site, when I've been on here friggen seven months! I think...
6610373 But with what?
6611364 Oh! Dang!
That again, I have that stupid problem. Seriously, grammar is not my strong point. Thank you SOOO much!
6611620 thank you for telling me that! Honestly, I've been waiting to know that for as long as I've been on this site.
I suggest you do a read through and edit some things.
6804151 I know, it just takes me forever to get these out and I honestly don't care how the editing is as long as you guys get to read these. I feel really bad because it took me literally TWO MONTHS to get this last chapter out. I haven't even started the part with flash in his whole love triangle thing!(I promise next chapter will be it)
6809296
I'm here to help if you don't have the time.
Straight.
Ideas not idea's
Delayed.
Need a capital there.
Nice chapter, sorry for taking so long. I uh, forget to check my followed stories a lot.