Thx for the height reference and GJ

Oh, wow, a human comparison chart. Very interesting. Nice work on the first chapter.

And that 'healing liquid' from Star Wars has a name: bacta. The more you know!

So based on the chart Twilight is at the perfect blow job height.

um you MAY or MAY NOT have gotten the height wrong. people are still trying to figure it out. like one source goes by apples and according to that celestia is around 6,0 with horn. knowbody except hasbro really knows their heights. but celestia is at LEAST 6,0 so that is the lowest i heard.

but then again you said "my world" meaning it can go your way.

for the record try "makeing him work for it" meaning if you were planing to have the clop in the 2nd or 3rd chapter. don't. there is MANY reasons why he would not (if he is average). 1.it is a animal species meaning from a normal persons perspective it is beastiality at least until the person realizes they are a lot like people and it is not actually beastiality. 2.he just met her. and 3.he most likely wants to go back so it would not last. (then again the reasons are for if your character is a "average joe".)

668602 it is either bacta or becta either one is close enough. i see you decided to inform him.

668624:
............................Awesome.

Well this is amusing.

like it keep going

Interesting story, and i do like the height reference.

well the science is interesting

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Like I said, I believe self-inserts are like records of one's desires and wishes, so we'll just see how it turns out. I will say, however, that while the second chapter will get a little more into it, I will not be exploring the deeper facts of Chrysalis (No pun intended) in later chapters. Or at lest, that's what I plan on doing.

Also, what's the matter? You don't want to explode too soon?

i like the story so far, and i must say, VERY Interesting way to get to Equestria

number 50 YEAH!!

this is actually entertaining for a clopfic. keep it up!

The man in the diagram has an angry face on his butt.
Also, interesting story.

I enjoyed it

And I thought stealing from NC was clever too, unfortunately for me Chris is my brothers name.

I never really noticed it but while looking at the chart this thing hit me.
Their heads are f*cking HUGE.

the chart isn't showing up for me.

I think my head fell to quickly though, because I accidentally knocked over one of my bars of soap I had lying on the side of my tub. It slipped off the rim and hit my modified PVC pipe doorstop I had against my wall. It got knocked over in my direction and started falling for my head. Fortunately, it was stopped by a suction cup held rack on the wall that held all my shampoos. Unfortunately, it released the suction and an array of colorful sweet smelling shampoos came raining down upon my head. The PVC pipe also came down along with the rack and knocked me out cold.

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991672 horse [and ponies by relation] heads are roughly the same size as their bodiesbodies

I see where the "#11" catchprase came from.
Well played, sir.

I like it.

the comparison picture doesn't work anymore

I liked this first chapter over all. The pacing needs a little work though. Some parts in the beginning I felt dragged on too much. But the description when meeting Chrysalis was exciting.