Follow the Rogue Steel Ranger as she fights to find out what happened to her Stable
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"Raider twats."
I think I like the English in this fic.
Someone who understands steam engines? Huzzah I'm not the only one!
It is so very annoying to hear people say steam engines are high polluting; nuclear submarines, carriers, and power plants use steam turbines nearly unchanged from their turn-of-the-century ancestors. To say a steam engine only burns coal is to prove your ignorance.
The old Crampton 4-2-0s are my favourite steam locomotives.
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Beautiful engines.
Although I do have to ask about Braytain, since it's a separate nation from Equestria does that mean they escaped the war's violent end? I mean you never really hear about Britain or the other European nations in the Fallout games either so you have to wonder if they're better off than America and China.
Here's a group for steam enthusiasts if you're interested.
The amount of typos is outstanding.
3651618 hahah 95 weeks later I'm rereading this 'cause I never got to finish it and I see not much has changed xD
Buh-bwu-buh??? AJ made the Steel Ranger in response to Big Mac's death (so that Equestrian soldiers couldn't get shot and killed anymore) and the Anti-Machine Rifle was created to punch through Steel Ranger armor.
Also, Stable 3 and 53 are the same, Appletart chopped off her horn so she could fit in Steel Ranger armor, and yet more Stables that were finished after the Last Day?
Someone didn't do their homework, or pay attention is English class
Other than that, this story's pretty cool
P.S. Blueberry Muffin, you have a pure white child and a family tradition of naming young after sweets, how did you not think of Sugar Cookie?
Question. What was Zyon doing in the human ship when Appletart rescued him?
The opening part is another issue I have with the fic (Don't worry the rest is awesome but this irks me) is the scene changes in terms of POV. I understand the need to explain what happened in the past of the story, of how cerain things came to be, but this is what Memory orbs and log entries are for. Switching Pov from first to third person is rather confusing. It was less so since I now knew it was coming and had time to prepare for the sudden switch. When I first read it, I thought that Longshot had accessed a memory orb that I had missed and it temporarily took me out of the action.
The rest is awesome though as Zyon is an interesting character to look at and I love reading about him. The first scene of Motor Runner is very intimating and there is just enough mystery t keep us all entwined.
Can't help but think of this locomotive from what was described about the one in the story.
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Someone’s definitely English lol. Also there’s to much telling in the story and too much showing. So Hoofington raiders huh that’s bad really bad.
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this is my first serious attempt at writing a story and its unedited, and yes, i'm British
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No shame in being British, I love doctor who for example, and I liv in Ok, USA
Oh so basically a mecha?
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A ponified Mammoth MKII specfically but yrah