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Really Gears 2 lol not bad. But with a painful amount of grammar and spelling errors. I enjoy the story tho but get help with those errors and you'll do better.
Tanks Tanks everywhere!!!!
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185149 I did say i'll be going through it later to correct mistakes
186131 O ok well i guess i missed the memo on that.
190462 how could you miss it?, it was at the top of the chapter, the first thing you would of read
190738 not really I usually go to the start of the story I rarely read author notes cuz most of the time i don't see them but ya anyways ignore that comment on errors.
185307 Tanks? where?
192463 first thing i thought of when the monsters started jumping out were tanks *Needs to stop playing Left 4 dead*
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You still amaze me at how well this is written I don't know why some people claim it is
Don't flatter yourself
196333 no chargers remember one big arm one one baby arm
Gears of war reference! :D
I always was freaked out by that research facility in Gears of War 2. Good callback.
This mission allowed us to get a small glimpse at not just a bigger worlld, but at the darker secrets of th Wasteland. Most importantly, allowing us to see more sides of Motor Runner as a character/..
well shit looks like they need liberty prime. TBH I'm with Motor Runner I like what he's doing when liberty prime is online all raiders WILL DIE!!!
oh, nice!
reminds me of a gag in a G.I.Joe cartoon:
enemies appear behind them.
one of the Joes fires a bazooka at the ceiling, making part of it collapse and block the doorway.
"are you nuts? that door's the only way out of here!"
"don't worry, i'll make another one."
he fires his bazooka at a wall.
[kaboom]
"door."
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that was actually a reference to Gears of War 2 to how they gained access to the "New Hope Facility"
Love the gears of war references but honestly I would have preferred if the name was the reference and what the facility ended up creating was deathclaws and how the group inadvertently added a new species to the wasteland.
Wretches
Soon as what?
Did you really have to kill her???
I still found errors
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Broken Steel was entirely unedited and raw.
Influx though had been edited and more care taken in its writing