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Another good chapter, though sad he had to die. So epilogue next?
Alright. That's it. This was probably my favorite FoE side story. Enjoyable characters, a simple yet involving plot that wasn't drawn out to no end *cough*PH*cough*, and even the references were pretty good.
And now for a couple things I'd like to note.
dat fourth wall.
Oh, you sly dog, you...
I think I'd like to call this new species an Applecorn. Any agree?
2987728 Epilogue next yes
2988190 I'm glad you enjoyed it
2988773 All my fav FoE fics are ending. First Snow's fic, then We're no Heroe's, then this. Dunno what's next.
2989316 Well I hope you enjoyed it while it lasted
2990541 Yup I did.
2999608 Planning on a DLC style side story. Thinking of doing my experience going through Dead Money
2988190
I speak frequently with Somber and PH does have an end, Somber is racing to get to it as quick as they can in fact (And has dropped me several annoying spoilers... that dratted author is cruel!) the problem is that it started off with absolutely no plot and when Dues died the story was in shambles, Somber considered ending it on the boat with BJ dying, but in the end decided that there was more to the story. Somber then made a convulated plot and threw anything and everything at our favorite cyberpony.
3013543 I like PH but it is dragging on too long now. There isn't an end close yet as BJ still has to reach the end of the EC1101 trail.
3054733 I am British and so is Appletart (Braytish as referred to in the fic).
Glad you are enjoying it and I appreciate the feedback.
3063234 don't compare her to this Mary Sue because I don't know who that is.
Appletart's special talent is in long ranged weaponry which also includes a quick understanding of their mechanics also she would have been trained in weapon maintenance by that time. The 50 cal was something lying around that no one wanted because it was broken and she got it because she fixed it and finally you have to continue to read to find out.
Keep in mind this is my very first serious story.
This chapter was intense in all of the right ways. We had the anticpation of the coming of the Krogoth plus some spectacular suspense in the way hwe had to wait to see if everyone was going to pull out of it ok. I loved how the Krogoth had one final meeting with motor runner as a kind of final send off for both characters. Th e idea of Motor Runner getting restored by the Talisman is also a geat idea because it alos help to give a ligh of hope at the end of the story.
If I have one question, did this get edited by the time I got here from when I read it a year ago? Because I thought there was a sex scene between Motor Runner and Appletart before the attack on Manechester.
And if I have one coplain...the wings. I am not saying she is an alicorn, but it really doesn't seem to affect the story all that much. We are at the end of the tale, and all the wings did was give Appletart more truama to suffer through. You could've given her a stripe across her back for all that the wings do