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well commonwealth is bad news.....
Never and I mean never say that. That is a good way for the great god Murphy to screw your life over six ways to Sunday.
“Ah guess that makes since”
^sense
Judging by Rainbows reaction she was going to want imminent answers,
^immediate answers,
Shortly after my arrival I stumbled into a battle between the two sides, and almost getting myself kill.
^killed.
Her superiors all when by their rank and usually were not too friendly when speaking to subordinate.
^subordinates.
Davis was her squad’s medic like her he wore
^medic. Like her
The MK-2 Recon Armor was lighter and reduced armor on the joints allowed for quicker movants.
^and had ^to allow for ^movements.
It was perfected for someone like Davis who may need to get to the injured quickly.
^was perfect for
While Twilight was classified as support which mostly
^support,
“If they don’t it would mean we were not fighting human, but some kind of unfeeling monsters.”
^dont, it would ^humans, but
“Not scared of ghost are you?”
^ghosts
6348834 thanks for pointing those out
6350911 Sure thing. This story is definitely a great read. Heck, I've already put it on my tracking list.
Again, a noticeable improvement. Not as much was changed this chapter, but not as much needed changed. Now I'm just looking forward to more new chapters.
I think you meant Sit instead of Set in this sentance:
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Wouldn't set be better for past tense?
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Well it would be sat not set but yes.
First rule every soldier should: Never, ever, under any circumstance are you to challenge Murphy.
So it is fallout kinda idk i have only played fallout 4 :/
Davis... Davis hmmmm yup he gonna die