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We hath found that thine story is quite good, english could use a little work, but good nonetheless
6928388 Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm working on improving my writing but its slow going. It doesn't help when I do dumb stuff and rush the ending like I did with this chapter. I really need to go back over this chapter and fix a lot of stuff.
6929212 Tis alright, We still understood what thou intended to write. We cannot wait for more
I like this version of Twilight. While she has combat experience, she's friendlier and not an overpowered psycho like Scorch215's Twilight.
7016600 yeah, while I think combat would change Twilight at her core she would still be Twilight.
7016632 Suppose so...
7016600 it wasnt the combat that changed twilight in scorches story it was the month of torture that broke her
I think Twi's getting a bit phased over this...
I'll show myself out...
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Combat changes people, that much is known. How it changes people is different, as it can be different from person to person. However, I have to agree with Commander Darklight. It was not the combat that changed Twilight in the other story. It was the month of torture. Combine that with the fact the cybernetics she was given (not to mention the ones she created herself) were meant for humans and not ponies who are peaceful by nature, it’s no wonder her mental state changed so drastically.
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