6203438 Mostly yes, as they are the guy with tits archetype from the sound of it, yet is being referred to as female xP That second part does actually make some sense. But it still makes them a male when outside the hive. Thus, he is a guy with tits :3 But like said, can possibly shift into a girl while at his hive. But like you said: He embraces being a male more, having that preference to identify himself as. But can revert back to their expected role when "at home".
And again: You've only really proved that your Chrys in particular here is male, but can revert into female when at home. Atop a implied possibly 180 personality swap once he "changes gender". As, like said, that "he will actually play the role of a female", implying they'd go sub once they're with the hive, but go full on dom when out of the hive. Bit of split personality going on it seems. And there's not really many no :P I mean heck, I know I wrote one of the first and few couple female on male rape, and even female on female. Most common are male on female, and gender-swapped female on female. Can't think of enough fics to fit one hand that has a female dom+pleasure focus... And I didn't say you did, just that you implore the archetype to it, as you have female chars, and one originally female char, that genderswaps in order to be able to rape said other females =3 Just because you're using an archetype doesn't mean you have to be having an agenda or something. It just means you're using a common stereotype :P
And okies. That's good to hear. Know far too many that half-ass that. And/or have like, a 3 word description of any/or all vulvae, then goes on to have a monologue about how every single dick looks like xD
6205762 Oh, I understand better now. I'll be sure to keep your points in mind for next chapter where I explore this idea, hadn't thought about it that way. I still hold to my view on Chryssi's identity, but you made me rethink a lot. Also we need more femdom stories, I really liked Rarity's True Nature's start, need more marshmallow in leather! And I will neither confess or deny any overdoing on the cock descriptions in this story.
Hmmm which is scarier, Chrysalis wanting to impregnate mares to rebuilt her hive? Or Aria who seems to want to have Chrysalis impregnate mares and use the new hive to conquer both worlds?
6206116 Actually I was a little reluctant to release this chapter (held on to it for a few days) because I felt it lacked clop material. But in the end when I tried to add sexy time it felt like it was dragging on... I rewrote it several times and then decided to go with the original cut, since I couldn't do it better. Also I was impatient to work on the next chapter. 6206230 Chrysalis' nature is constantly telling her "breed, fuck, multiply, swag" in stereo, and she's not used to having to deal with free thinking ponies while in her changeling heat. So she's like a mastermind whose balls just take control whenever she's too horny. One minute she's Machiavelli and the other Austin Powers. 6206410 Third option: Aria's offsprings are all as malicious as their siren mother, and they take over, imprisoning Chrysalis and the Dazzlings to use them for creating reinforcements. All the Aria juniors then set Equestria on fire, before finding the mirrors to other worlds and fucking up the entire multiverse. 6206738 The Dazzlings are expert manipulators and the only other villains to actually beat Twilight Sparkle (Sunset had to step in), so I couldn't write them as three defenseless little ponies. Chrysalis bested Celestia in a power struggle, but strength isn't everything. 6207142 Aria plays dirty, even with her own partners in crime. She'll do anything to get what she wants, even more so when she can take some enjoyment in the process. As for Adagio, well she'll have to be faster than a certain possessive changeling if she wants to get a piece of Aria.
6207247 Naaah, she's not stupid, her plan to take over Canterlot worked flawlessly. She lost from a sudden case of Deus Ex Machina. Also being too cocky to stop Cadance. So she has some brains, she just gets lost in the moment.
6207392 Well yes, and I agreed that this chapter was light on clop, maybe even too much so. Did I come across as defensive? Cause I just wanted to give you an explanation, not be bitter. I welcome criticism.
6207297 I think she lost because the ponies were even stupider than she was. Chrysalis isn't smart. - Her acting was atrocious, especially for someone who's supposed to be the princess of love. * The ponies ignore this because they think pre-wedding jitters are a justifiable excuse to flip off at everyone
- She sent Twilight to the same place she imprisoned Cadance and the two of them managed to escape, as opposed to simply leaving a despairing Twilight alone when she's mentally broken from her friends abandoning her. * Despite basically being a repeat of 'Lesson Zero', Twilight's closest friend and mentor ignore Twilight over someone most of them met that day who's done nothing but treat them and their work like garbage.
- Canterlot was actually warned about her invasion. I do not see how a city on high alert helped her invasion at all. * The ponies do deploy some extra guards, but are still far more focused on the Wedding rather a threat to their capitol. And when the invasion does begin, the 'high alert' city falls in minutes.
- One of the most crucial ponies she needed to disable invasion to was the groom himself. He singlehandedly shields the entire city, and he's one half of the major event taking place at the time, making him doubly important. * Despite this, he's under practically no supervision whatsoever despite these two very important factors, and Chrysalis is therefore able to brainwash and slowly drain him, breaking one of the cities most important defenses.
When all this has worked, she leaves the most important ponies completely unguarded and decides to just gloat and walk away, rather than put them all in cocoons the same as Celestia and allowing Cadance to restore the shield that kept them all out. She could have prevented her Deus Ex Machina ending, and should have been more aware given that she's already witnessed firsthand how powerful love is, but she ignores both and finally gets defeated.
You still think she's supposed to be smart? In a more realistic setting, even one of those steps having a more cautious reaction would have muddled her entire invasion. Good thing for her ponies are far too willing to accept that everything is going to be just fine that they ignore the signs of danger.
6207474 Yes I think it's smart, and here is why. Warning: headcannon interpretations ahoy.
-Her acting wasn't atrocious, it fooled everyone. The only one that wasn't fooled was the one she wanted to be suspicious: Twilight. The biggest threat to her plans were the elements of harmony, so she needs to break them up, and she does. All the scenes where we see her act totally unlike Cadance were in the presence of Twilight, purposely making her doubt her identity; the other five don't know how Cadance usually acts after all. She probably knew that Twilight had seen her brainwash her brother, she doesn't even try to stop her as Twilight runs away. She then makes friends with the other five when Twilight is not there, giving them the role of bridesmaids and probably buttering them up with compliments and asking to be forgiven for her attitude. That makes Twilight's accusation seem completely paranoid, and it isolates her from the group. Then she sends Twilight to the crystal caves, knowing that everyone will think Twilight ditched the wedding in shame. And Twilight's friends also know that she can be a little crazy when she's worried, she's not perfect.
-She sent Twilight to Cadance, and taunted her into shooting the wall where the real princess was. Twilight, thinking that she found her enemy, attacks. What if she had attacked with another laser instead of tackling the real Cadance. What if Chrysalis wanted them to fight? We know she's cocky, so maybe she overestimated Twilight's rage and thought she would take care of Cadance for her. Then if Twilight manages to escape the bridesmaids left to guard the caves and crashes the wedding, she finds Chrysalis, realizes what she has done and goes crazy. Much more fun than just killing her. She can then go on with the charade and feed off Shining until he's dry. The changeling army reveals itself only when she's busted. Maybe the invasion was just the plan B, plan A was impersonating Cadance, the princess of love, for as long as she could.
-The shield only makes the ponies more complacent and only care about new arrivals, thinking they are safe inside. The last person they'll suspect is the wife of the guy in charge of keeping the shield up, if the shield stays in place until the very last moment.
-He's the captain of the guard, he's probably under supervision most of the time. But you can't ask for him to be watched over in the privacy of his home when he's sharing it with his soon to be wife. That would be naughty. Who knows if changeling brainwashing can be detected by magical checkups.
Then when all is said and done she has won: the elements are neutralized, Celestia is a prisoner, Luna is asleep, Canterlot has fallen. Why wouldn't she gloat? Maybe she was too cocky, I write that as a part of her personality, one of her big flaws, but could she have predicted the bullshit love genkidama that team-rocketed her?
So in recap she meant for Twilight to see thought her, used her paranoia to break up the elements (the biggest threat to her), beat Celestia, beat the mane six, conquered Canterlot, then lost to something she couldn't have predicted. So yes, smart, but too sure of herself.
6207540 Again, that all assumes everything will go along perfectly. As you note, she may have expected Twilight to be overzealous. She isn't, and that's the first step that leads to her plan failing.
6207235 You know I can see that happening. Then again Sonata's brood could somehow keep them calm since they, like their parents, would have a thing for Sonata: Chrysalis is hooked on her and Aria appears to have a thing for incest.
But now I'm thinking that the hybrid spawn of Chrysalis and Sonata would end up enchanting anyone they came across and Equestria will fall to their cuteness and sexiness as the spawn themselves drain them dry. But I'm assuming they wouldn't mind, just like that one episode from Futurama when the cast where on that Amazon planet.
-You want to die like last men that visited our planet? -What they die of? -Crushed pelvises! (Points at skeletons with crushed pelvis bones, giving thumbs up and in awwwing yeah poses) -YES! WOOHOO! -I never thought I would die like this, but I really hoped.
Heh, it is quite amusing to watch the two parties try to tightly wrap the other around their hooves... or beat each other with various rock-hard things
6207577 Well you can only tell the difference between a mastermind and an idiot when their plans either work or fail. Luck is a factor but fuck that heartless bitch, RNG always screws me over. In this case Chryssi's plan worked, even if it was convoluted. So either she's an unlucky smart cookie, or she's a lucky dumbbell. And seeing how she ended up she's not that lucky.
6207616 I'm pretty sure Sonata's cuteness could be weaponized if you had the right tools. You can enrich it with essence of kittens, put it into a panda piñata and use a pink sparkler as a detonator. No survivors.
6207648 That's why you have "no roughhousing in the pool" posters. Give kids foam noodles and they'll try to beat each other senseless with them. Give adults a bunch of hard lengthy pieces of girthy wood and see what happens.
6207671 Hmm, I guess so. I suppose the end result is she could have been smarter, but in the end her invasion came close, and that means by the standards of the world she lives in she can be considered 'smart'.
6207786 Well I like to give characters the benefit of the doubt, so I prefer to think that they are smart ponies that can occasionally lose their minds. Makes it more mortifying when they realize how dumb they were after the fact.
6207837 They don't seem to reflect on it though do they? Twilight and her friends didn't remember their respective lessons from Lesson Zero, and Celestia doesn't seem at all bothered that she nearly let Chrysalis take over her country.
6207866 To be fair lesson zero was kinda different: it was about Twilight taking her assignments too seriously and her friends not helping her deal with her self-induced pressure. Here it's about Twilight seeming jealous of her brother, her protective side making her paranoid. I mean Twilight makes mistakes too, just look at "it's about time": she went cucoo for cocopuffs with paranoia, saw dangers everywhere and acted just plain old bonkers. If there is one thing the girls know about Twilight it's that she worries over nothing sometimes, and that she can be a little (very) irrational. So no, I don't see the girls acting that way as a problem, especially if Chrysalis was doing her best to drive a wedge between them. As for Celestia I think she grew soft with peace. Too many cakes and tea parties.
6210416 Already on it! To give you some idea of a rough timetable I should have finished this story by next week, and the first chapter of the sequel where I follow one of Chrysalis' drones after her hive kicks her out (I gave up on being vanilla on that one, but it won't be dark at least) then the adventures of Sonata could begin around the 26th.
6211786 Should be fun, writing with Sonata as a main character is like writing someone in a perpetual high stumbling through life. And without all the horrible rape and mind-bending she can be as bubbly as can be! Except if she meets Chrysalis in that story too... Nah.
6211921 Yeah it does sound like a lot of fun. And you could always have her meet a amnesiac Chrysalis or something but that might end up sending the story down a dark path.
6212037 Nope, no changelings at all I'm thinking. Cause apparently I can't write about those buggers without going to dark places, and I want the Sonata story to be all rainbows and kittens. And lots of fetishes of course. Marshmallow in black leather yum-yum...
6203438 Mostly yes, as they are the guy with tits archetype from the sound of it, yet is being referred to as female xP
That second part does actually make some sense. But it still makes them a male when outside the hive. Thus, he is a guy with tits :3 But like said, can possibly shift into a girl while at his hive. But like you said: He embraces being a male more, having that preference to identify himself as. But can revert back to their expected role when "at home".
And again: You've only really proved that your Chrys in particular here is male, but can revert into female when at home. Atop a implied possibly 180 personality swap once he "changes gender". As, like said, that "he will actually play the role of a female", implying they'd go sub once they're with the hive, but go full on dom when out of the hive. Bit of split personality going on it seems. And there's not really many no :P I mean heck, I know I wrote one of the first and few couple female on male rape, and even female on female. Most common are male on female, and gender-swapped female on female. Can't think of enough fics to fit one hand that has a female dom+pleasure focus...
And I didn't say you did, just that you implore the archetype to it, as you have female chars, and one originally female char, that genderswaps in order to be able to rape said other females =3 Just because you're using an archetype doesn't mean you have to be having an agenda or something. It just means you're using a common stereotype :P
And okies. That's good to hear. Know far too many that half-ass that. And/or have like, a 3 word description of any/or all vulvae, then goes on to have a monologue about how every single dick looks like xD
6205762
Oh, I understand better now. I'll be sure to keep your points in mind for next chapter where I explore this idea, hadn't thought about it that way. I still hold to my view on Chryssi's identity, but you made me rethink a lot. Also we need more femdom stories, I really liked Rarity's True Nature's start, need more marshmallow in leather!
And I will neither confess or deny any overdoing on the cock descriptions in this story.
This chapter left some action to be desired... but otherwise, awesome.
Chryssy really needs to learn that you can't always be distracted by the sexy.
Hmmm which is scarier, Chrysalis wanting to impregnate mares to rebuilt her hive? Or Aria who seems to want to have Chrysalis impregnate mares and use the new hive to conquer both worlds?
This is getting interesting. Good to know that Crysallis doesn't have all the control in this history.
I can see Adagio's wish to keep Sonata safe overcoming her desire to escape/take control, leading to her going head to head with Aria.
6206116
Actually I was a little reluctant to release this chapter (held on to it for a few days) because I felt it lacked clop material. But in the end when I tried to add sexy time it felt like it was dragging on... I rewrote it several times and then decided to go with the original cut, since I couldn't do it better. Also I was impatient to work on the next chapter.
6206230
Chrysalis' nature is constantly telling her "breed, fuck, multiply, swag" in stereo, and she's not used to having to deal with free thinking ponies while in her changeling heat. So she's like a mastermind whose balls just take control whenever she's too horny. One minute she's Machiavelli and the other Austin Powers.
6206410
Third option: Aria's offsprings are all as malicious as their siren mother, and they take over, imprisoning Chrysalis and the Dazzlings to use them for creating reinforcements. All the Aria juniors then set Equestria on fire, before finding the mirrors to other worlds and fucking up the entire multiverse.
6206738
The Dazzlings are expert manipulators and the only other villains to actually beat Twilight Sparkle (Sunset had to step in), so I couldn't write them as three defenseless little ponies. Chrysalis bested Celestia in a power struggle, but strength isn't everything.
6207142
Aria plays dirty, even with her own partners in crime. She'll do anything to get what she wants, even more so when she can take some enjoyment in the process. As for Adagio, well she'll have to be faster than a certain possessive changeling if she wants to get a piece of Aria.
6207235 I suppose Chrysalis is actually pretty stupid if you think about it. Looking back, it's hard to imagine how she got as far as she did.
6207247
Naaah, she's not stupid, her plan to take over Canterlot worked flawlessly. She lost from a sudden case of Deus Ex Machina. Also being too cocky to stop Cadance. So she has some brains, she just gets lost in the moment.
6207235 dude, don't get me wrong, i get that for the plot sometimes clop is not possible, i just expressed my opinion on this chapter alone
6207235 She doesn't have to be faster if her desire to keep Sonata safe drives her to work WITH Chryssi.
6207392![:pinkiesmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesmile.png)
Well yes, and I agreed that this chapter was light on clop, maybe even too much so. Did I come across as defensive? Cause I just wanted to give you an explanation, not be bitter. I welcome criticism.
6207410![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
We'll see, don't want to spoil what happens
6207297 I think she lost because the ponies were even stupider than she was. Chrysalis isn't smart.
- Her acting was atrocious, especially for someone who's supposed to be the princess of love.
* The ponies ignore this because they think pre-wedding jitters are a justifiable excuse to flip off at everyone
- She sent Twilight to the same place she imprisoned Cadance and the two of them managed to escape, as opposed to simply leaving a despairing Twilight alone when she's mentally broken from her friends abandoning her.
* Despite basically being a repeat of 'Lesson Zero', Twilight's closest friend and mentor ignore Twilight over someone most of them met that day who's done nothing but treat them and their work like garbage.
- Canterlot was actually warned about her invasion. I do not see how a city on high alert helped her invasion at all.
* The ponies do deploy some extra guards, but are still far more focused on the Wedding rather a threat to their capitol. And when the invasion does begin, the 'high alert' city falls in minutes.
- One of the most crucial ponies she needed to disable invasion to was the groom himself. He singlehandedly shields the entire city, and he's one half of the major event taking place at the time, making him doubly important.
* Despite this, he's under practically no supervision whatsoever despite these two very important factors, and Chrysalis is therefore able to brainwash and slowly drain him, breaking one of the cities most important defenses.
When all this has worked, she leaves the most important ponies completely unguarded and decides to just gloat and walk away, rather than put them all in cocoons the same as Celestia and allowing Cadance to restore the shield that kept them all out. She could have prevented her Deus Ex Machina ending, and should have been more aware given that she's already witnessed firsthand how powerful love is, but she ignores both and finally gets defeated.
You still think she's supposed to be smart? In a more realistic setting, even one of those steps having a more cautious reaction would have muddled her entire invasion. Good thing for her ponies are far too willing to accept that everything is going to be just fine that they ignore the signs of danger.
6207474
Yes I think it's smart, and here is why. Warning: headcannon interpretations ahoy.
-Her acting wasn't atrocious, it fooled everyone. The only one that wasn't fooled was the one she wanted to be suspicious: Twilight. The biggest threat to her plans were the elements of harmony, so she needs to break them up, and she does. All the scenes where we see her act totally unlike Cadance were in the presence of Twilight, purposely making her doubt her identity; the other five don't know how Cadance usually acts after all. She probably knew that Twilight had seen her brainwash her brother, she doesn't even try to stop her as Twilight runs away. She then makes friends with the other five when Twilight is not there, giving them the role of bridesmaids and probably buttering them up with compliments and asking to be forgiven for her attitude. That makes Twilight's accusation seem completely paranoid, and it isolates her from the group. Then she sends Twilight to the crystal caves, knowing that everyone will think Twilight ditched the wedding in shame. And Twilight's friends also know that she can be a little crazy when she's worried, she's not perfect.
-She sent Twilight to Cadance, and taunted her into shooting the wall where the real princess was. Twilight, thinking that she found her enemy, attacks. What if she had attacked with another laser instead of tackling the real Cadance. What if Chrysalis wanted them to fight? We know she's cocky, so maybe she overestimated Twilight's rage and thought she would take care of Cadance for her. Then if Twilight manages to escape the bridesmaids left to guard the caves and crashes the wedding, she finds Chrysalis, realizes what she has done and goes crazy. Much more fun than just killing her. She can then go on with the charade and feed off Shining until he's dry. The changeling army reveals itself only when she's busted. Maybe the invasion was just the plan B, plan A was impersonating Cadance, the princess of love, for as long as she could.
-The shield only makes the ponies more complacent and only care about new arrivals, thinking they are safe inside. The last person they'll suspect is the wife of the guy in charge of keeping the shield up, if the shield stays in place until the very last moment.
-He's the captain of the guard, he's probably under supervision most of the time. But you can't ask for him to be watched over in the privacy of his home when he's sharing it with his soon to be wife. That would be naughty. Who knows if changeling brainwashing can be detected by magical checkups.
Then when all is said and done she has won: the elements are neutralized, Celestia is a prisoner, Luna is asleep, Canterlot has fallen. Why wouldn't she gloat? Maybe she was too cocky, I write that as a part of her personality, one of her big flaws, but could she have predicted the bullshit love genkidama that team-rocketed her?
So in recap she meant for Twilight to see thought her, used her paranoia to break up the elements (the biggest threat to her), beat Celestia, beat the mane six, conquered Canterlot, then lost to something she couldn't have predicted. So yes, smart, but too sure of herself.
6207540 Again, that all assumes everything will go along perfectly. As you note, she may have expected Twilight to be overzealous. She isn't, and that's the first step that leads to her plan failing.
6207235
You know I can see that happening. Then again Sonata's brood could somehow keep them calm since they, like their parents, would have a thing for Sonata: Chrysalis is hooked on her and Aria appears to have a thing for incest.
But now I'm thinking that the hybrid spawn of Chrysalis and Sonata would end up enchanting anyone they came across and Equestria will fall to their cuteness and sexiness as the spawn themselves drain them dry. But I'm assuming they wouldn't mind, just like that one episode from Futurama when the cast where on that Amazon planet.
-You want to die like last men that visited our planet?
-What they die of?
-Crushed pelvises! (Points at skeletons with crushed pelvis bones, giving thumbs up and in awwwing yeah poses)
-YES! WOOHOO!
-I never thought I would die like this, but I really hoped.
Heh, it is quite amusing to watch the two parties try to tightly wrap the other around their hooves... or beat each other with various rock-hard things![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
6207577
Well you can only tell the difference between a mastermind and an idiot when their plans either work or fail. Luck is a factor but fuck that heartless bitch, RNG always screws me over. In this case Chryssi's plan worked, even if it was convoluted. So either she's an unlucky smart cookie, or she's a lucky dumbbell. And seeing how she ended up she's not that lucky.
6207616
I'm pretty sure Sonata's cuteness could be weaponized if you had the right tools. You can enrich it with essence of kittens, put it into a panda piñata and use a pink sparkler as a detonator. No survivors.
6207648
That's why you have "no roughhousing in the pool" posters. Give kids foam noodles and they'll try to beat each other senseless with them. Give adults a bunch of hard lengthy pieces of girthy wood and see what happens.
6207671 Hmm, I guess so. I suppose the end result is she could have been smarter, but in the end her invasion came close, and that means by the standards of the world she lives in she can be considered 'smart'.
6207725
Either she's smart or everyone else is incredibly stupid except Twilight.
6207742 Wasn't that obvious? It's shocking how many stupid things everypony has done in the show if you just pay attention.
6207786
Well I like to give characters the benefit of the doubt, so I prefer to think that they are smart ponies that can occasionally lose their minds. Makes it more mortifying when they realize how dumb they were after the fact.
6207837 They don't seem to reflect on it though do they? Twilight and her friends didn't remember their respective lessons from Lesson Zero, and Celestia doesn't seem at all bothered that she nearly let Chrysalis take over her country.
6207866
To be fair lesson zero was kinda different: it was about Twilight taking her assignments too seriously and her friends not helping her deal with her self-induced pressure.
Here it's about Twilight seeming jealous of her brother, her protective side making her paranoid. I mean Twilight makes mistakes too, just look at "it's about time": she went cucoo for cocopuffs with paranoia, saw dangers everywhere and acted just plain old bonkers. If there is one thing the girls know about Twilight it's that she worries over nothing sometimes, and that she can be a little (very) irrational. So no, I don't see the girls acting that way as a problem, especially if Chrysalis was doing her best to drive a wedge between them.
As for Celestia I think she grew soft with peace. Too many cakes and tea parties.
6207415 nono, I just didn't want to come across as rude or not-liking -this-story guy
6209653
Welp, I misunderstood then, sorry.
As for sexy times I'm finishing up the next chapter, and it's dirty as balls. Sweaty balls.
6209721 thats nais...
6207671
Part of the reason why I had the idea for a story in which the mane six and other characters fought for her affections......
With some really funny and unique results.![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
![:duck:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/duck.png)
![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
![:twilightoops:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightoops.png)
![:twilightblush:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightblush.png)
6210416
Already on it!
To give you some idea of a rough timetable I should have finished this story by next week, and the first chapter of the sequel where I follow one of Chrysalis' drones after her hive kicks her out (I gave up on being vanilla on that one, but it won't be dark at least) then the adventures of Sonata could begin around the 26th.
6211074
You are? Awesome! I'm looking forward to reading them. Especially the Sonata one.
6211786
Should be fun, writing with Sonata as a main character is like writing someone in a perpetual high stumbling through life. And without all the horrible rape and mind-bending she can be as bubbly as can be! Except if she meets Chrysalis in that story too... Nah.
6211921
Yeah it does sound like a lot of fun. And you could always have her meet a amnesiac Chrysalis or something but that might end up sending the story down a dark path.
6212037
Nope, no changelings at all I'm thinking. Cause apparently I can't write about those buggers without going to dark places, and I want the Sonata story to be all rainbows and kittens. And lots of fetishes of course. Marshmallow in black leather yum-yum...
6212095
True
“Common.” Adagio whispered, her eyes gentle.
I think you mean "C'mon" or "Come on". Not "common" which has a very different meaning.
Still hot.
I love how she seemed genuinely offended.
Adagio has no damn chill. Don't fuck with her sisters and you'll be fine.
Sonata, friend.
Half of this chapter was just me saying "Poor Adagio..." or "Poor Adagio!"
6206410 where the hell is that "both is good" gif when I need it?? Fucking mobile...